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Reviewer: Veritas Found (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 9
Aw, I love that Jake gave her the bracelet early, and I love his explanation behind it even more. (I don't think it should offend anyone, but then again I'm kinda one of the...eh, I dunno - would 'laid-back' Christian be a good way to explain it? I'm the one who was trying not to crack up during Easter service 'cause Pastor was making Jesus sound like a Time Lord, so maybe I'm not the best one to say people won't be offended by it. xD Some Christians are too uptight anyway. ;P) I don't normally like too much recapping from various POVs, as it can make a fic redundant, but I'd love to see what Edward thought in reaction to his explanation. Alice sure has her hands full with that one, doesn't she?
You definitely got me curious with this box, too. I'm not remembering you covering exactly what was inside it yet (and if you have I'm gonna feel like a total dumbass); does Bella even know it's there yet? (Alice snuck it into her bag, didn't she?) Going from Wardo's reaction, that bit's gonna be good.
'Nywho, long in short: loved the chap. C=
Author's Response: ah, the box...No, Bella doesn't know what's in it or even that its in her bag (not even Kelly knows what's in it yet, lol). So don't worry, you haven't missed anything ;)
Thank you for the review and I'll update as soon as I can :D
Reviewer: nothing2do (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 9
I can't wait to see what Edward says to her at school. Great story.
Author's Response: Me neither, lol! Thank you!!
Reviewer: mrsn (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 03:22 AM · On: Chapter 9
Another great chapter! I still heart Alice lots and lots! Favorite line - '“Come on, Edward. Let’s go stalk the love of your life…”' - that pixie cracks me up!
I'm sure this reaction is a little odd, but I find myself a little annoyed with Bella this chapter. She even makes mention of how her actions are going to hurt Jacob, but she does them anyway. Yes, she needs a friend and she is hurting right now....but in the process she is going to hurt someone else. Just like in Eclipse I don't like the way she uses Jake (and I'm not a Jake fan). Okay, rant over. Feel free to totally ignore me and call me crazy! :-)
So, school should be interesting! :-)
Author's Response: THANKS! (she cracks me up too :) )
Actually, I don't find it odd at all. Bella in NM and Eclipse pissed me off for treating Jake the way she did. I would love to write her as a much less craptastic version of herself, but this is supposed to be as in character as possible, so I guess her annoying ways are just a way of verifiying that I'm doing my job, lol! (If you're crazy, then I am too...boom, boom ain't it great?)
It should be! I'm dog sitting right now, but I will update as soon as possible.
Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 10:59 PM · On: Chapter 9
good stuff... waiting for the big confrontation :)
Author's Response: Thanks! Working on chapter 10 now, but I also happen to be dog sitting for the next two weeks so it may take me a little longer than usual...
Reviewer: blueandblack (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 12:05 AM · On: Chapter 9
Great chapter! Oh Jake, you break my little heart :(( The WWJD dialogue was adorable and so sad.
Author's Response: Thank you! He breaks mine too :'(
oh good, that's was I was going for...not sacreligous, lol (I'm pretty sure I spelled that incorrectly, but lets just overlook it and more forward,k? LOL!)
Reviewer: samt915 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 05:51 AM · On: Chapter 9
Your not going to have jake and Bella hook up and ditch Edward are you, lol. I like how you make it seem so real. Bella only thinks of him as a friend but sees how she is affecting Jacob/making him think other wise, now if only a vampire that just snapped a tree or Alice in half somewhere would just do the same about Bella I think we wouldnt be in a mess right now, humm. Keep it up
Author's Response: Not in this fic, lol! Thank you! I'll do my best!...snapping Alice in half? But WHY? I love her!
Reviewer: Butterfly114 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 03:55 AM · On: Chapter 9
well i know you wanna give edward some payback for what he did. but for now Bella still thinks he doesn't want her. i'm wondering which way you're gonna go once she finds out he still loves her. can't wait!! thanks for the new chapter. looking forward to more. head down bum up and write away till your heart's content and for thy trouble stars stars and more stars!!!
Author's Response: YAY! I <3 stars!! :D
Bella will be set straight shortly..
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 02:51 AM · On: Chapter 9
nice
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: lyleslove (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 11:23 PM · On: Chapter 9
good chapter. i hope that you are planning to incoperate more edward and jacob together scenes. their bantering in eclipse was some of my favorite stuff from the series, and i think with the sides you are showing of these two that you could really make some interesting conversations between them.
Author's Response: I hadn't really thought about it, but it would stand to reason that they would interact more...hmmm
THANKS!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 10:29 PM · On: Chapter 9
Great chapter. Loved both of the POVs. I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope we get to see them in school and interact with each other!
Author's Response: Thank you! That's the plan... :)
Reviewer: berdb (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 09:17 PM · On: Chapter 9
it's getting good....
Author's Response: glad you think so ;)
Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 9
Great chapter. I am totally Team Edward... But sometimes I feel so sorry for Jacob. Bella leads him on for to long and then breaks his heart. I think that is the one think I hate about Eclipse and Breaking Dawn. She disregards Jacobs feelings for her own comfort. Poor guy is going to have his heart broken that is until Nessie is born. Hum anyways, great story so far... looking forward for the first day back to school.
Author's Response: Thank you! I agree (though I am Team Jakie :) )
Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 9
Boy, Jake's a real piece of work, isn't he? Comparing himself to Him? Wow. And sleeping in her bed without permission? Boy, he's done everything but piss on Bella's leg. Jerk.
Author's Response: OH NO! Please don't think he is comparing himself to the Messiah! That was soooo not my intent...and sleeping in her bed? He was on the floor beside Bella's bed, not in it (though he was in the original draft, I changed it before I sent it in...)
I'm sorry you don't like Jake, but he's only trying to be a good friend :(
Reviewer: mmacc161 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 8
hello my dearest twi-soulmate :) you know how i love your work...sooo funny and creative. you know how to lure in readers from both teams with your realistic and authentic writing. and we all just wanna see whats happening next. YOUR CLIFFIES TOTALLY KICK ASS btw!!!! :D
i just read ch9 but im not gonna review as its not up here yet. all i can say is: alice we love you girl! and "what the hell is in that *thing*?"
big mwah to you and kells! awooooooooooooooo
Author's Response: *tear*
I <3 YOU SOMETHIN' FIERCE, JANA!!!!
*goes to wipe her eyes from the love-overload*
Reviewer: blueandblack (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 8
I am continuing to enjoy your story! Just caught up on the last few chapters today. The only reason I said I wouldn't like the ending before is because I'm a big J/B shipper and it will be painful to see her choose Edward again, but hey. I'll read anyway because it's a good story.
I like your Alice, and your Jacob, they're excellent. Jake's quote about her psychosis being part of her charm was really cute. Looking forward to reading more!
Author's Response: I know, right? Jake is just so awesome...sigh. Goodness, sometimes I don't even like where this is going. On the plus side, Kell and I already have a fic in mind where Jake gets Bella (though it will probably seem a little more OOC than Seeing Red, lol!) I'm gonna finish Seeing Red first, but after that, Jake is gonna get some love 'cause I totally <3 him and he deserves it :D
The credit for that quote belongs to Kelly...as with many things in SR, she was instrumental in it being a part of SR.
Chapter 9 is in queue now...more Awesome Alice, more Sweet Jake YAY!:D
Reviewer: samt915 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 06:17 AM · On: Chapter 8
I like it. I just want Bella to forgive Edward, and in the same respect I want him to go through a good beating prior too.
Author's Response: Thank you! I didn't think it made much sense after all that Bella went through for Edward to just come back and everything basically be hunky-dorey, ya know?
Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Butterfly114 (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 12:55 AM · On: Chapter 8
Heya i'm new to your story and...well i'm liking it so far i can't wait to read more so please...don't leave me hangin eh? thanks
Author's Response: Welcome! I'm glad you like it so far! I won't leave you hanging...I'm working on chapter 9 right now and will post as soon as I can :)
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 02:31 PM · On: Chapter 8
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks! Working on chapter 9 now :)
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 09:29 AM · On: Chapter 8
Great update. I'm glad she finally caught up with reality! I can't wait for Bella and Edward to see each other again!
Author's Response: Thank you! There are some things I want to cover before they see each other again, but the next face to face should be only a couple of chapters away. Hang tight! I'll post as soon as I can! :D
Reviewer: jaimejo2929 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 09:26 AM · On: Chapter 8
Jeeze, I can't decide if I am Team Edward or Team Jacob for this fic. Jacob is awfully big and sweet and warm...and he hasn't driven Bella insane lately so....
Hmmm. I think I need more of the story to make a final decision. Update soon!
Author's Response: I'm Team Jacob for anything, but I it's already been decided that Eddie will win in the end so my heart breaks a little more each time I get closer to the end :(
I'm working on chapter 9 now so I will get it up asap!
Reviewer: mrsn (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 8
First, love your opening quote! It's so very true!
As for the chapter, another good one! I have such mixed feelings regarding Jacob, but I know you like him so I'm giving him a chance. :-) Anxious for Bella to unpack her bag though. Bella is a mess right now though. She needs to get all the facts about those that love her and do a little soul searching to find out what it (or who) is that she wants. I know who I'm voting for, but we'll see where you take us. :-)
Author's Response: Opening quote: I know! As soon as Kell suggested it, I was in totally agreement! (just another sign of her awesomeness...)
Jacob: :D Thank you! I don't expect you to switch teams or anything...just maybe hate him a tiny bit less
Bella is a mess, poor thing has a lot to process...
Reviewer: samt0915 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 05:41 AM · On: Chapter 8
It's weird not having Edward all protective and trying to get to Bella to "protect" her.
Author's Response: He is, lol! That's why Alice knows she needs to catch him before he mutinies...which he's on the verge of doing in the next chapter...:)
Reviewer: Jessy-Anne (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 05:13 AM · On: Chapter 8
haha gotta love your end notes :D i really like the direction the story is going :D brilliant job thus far :D sorry im in a smily mood and they show up every couple of words :D haha
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it so far! I <3 smiles, so smile away! :D :D :D
Reviewer: Amillyna (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 04:36 AM · On: Chapter 8
You should make it more clear that there is going to be a lot of the love triange in the summary of the story. I wasn't expecting it, and as an avid Jacob hater...well, lets just say I would have like to know before reading the story so I could avoid it. :(
Author's Response: I have edited the summary of the story accordingly, sorry to have caught you off guard.
Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 04:35 AM · On: Chapter 8
Great chapter... I was hoping she would find the note. Anyways, post again soon please.
Author's Response: Thank you! She'll find it...eventually ;)
I'm working on chapter 9 now so I'll post as soon as I can!
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