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Reviewer: mcamastow (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2010 08:17 AM · On: Never Say Never

wow what a chapter that Jacob has a nerve  singing love songs to Bella heis something else Ihave always loved the song you had the girls sing.



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm glad you like the chapter. Jacob screwed up and he realizes that now and thinks he has to make everything better. However, he is going about it all wrong. The song the girls sang was Bella's way of letting him know that she is moving past him.

That song also happens to be a fave of mine too. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: pomme_de_terre (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 03:00 PM · On: Never Say Never

Great job, sweet! Bella definitely seems to finally be letting go! Keep it up!

Ellie

Author's Response:

That she is. Thanks for all your support, Ellie, it means the world to me. Thanks for your review.

Amber

Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 10:46 PM · On: Never Say Never

It was AWESOME!!! I have enjoyed this story from the get go. thank you making this a great story



Author's Response:

Wow, you think my story is great! Thank you so much. I'm glad you are enjoy the story.

Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 07:23 PM · On: Never Say Never

i really hope the th boys get a couple of hits in on jake! he deserves it! what a loser!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: mrsgunsage (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 04:26 PM · On: Never Say Never

I think I like that James is a good guy in this one.



Author's Response:

I like James better as the good guy too. Thanks for reading and reviewing. :)

Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: April 06, 2010 12:09 PM · On: Never Say Never

Jacob...nice gesture, but a little too late and don't you ever get a clue?  Sheesh...

Yay to Jasper and mad props to Rose and Alice!!!  A tiny part of me feels the teensiest bad for Jacob though...

Wow...I think this is the first story I've read where James is not a total douchebag :)

Love it!!  More, more, more :)



Author's Response:

Thanks I'm glad you like the story.

Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 03:18 PM · On: A Reason to Learn

I really like the easiness in this relationship. Jasper and Bella are really great together and you show this in your words. thanks for doing a great job with them. I really enjoy Emmett and Alice together as well. The contrast between them make for interesting nights with them. Can't wait for Karaoke night.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  I'm glad you like the story. I enjoy writing Emmett and Alice. I never know what's going to happen when they are involved.

Reviewer: janna479 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 03:32 AM · On: A Reason to Learn

great chapter

curious about James, whether he'll be good or bad, and kinda wish Jake would go away



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. You get to see a bit more of James in the next chapter.

Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: March 03, 2010 09:11 PM · On: A Reason to Learn

Yay!  I loved opening my email and seeing this update alert!  I really like J/B stories and I like the way you're writing this one :)



Author's Response:

Thank You! That really means a lot. I'm glad that you are enjoying the story and hope you continue to do so.

Reviewer: mcamastow (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 07:38 PM · On: A Reason to Learn

what is he syalking the girl he seems to be every where.



Author's Response:

That he does. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: pomme_de_terre (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 07:35 PM · On: A Reason to Learn

Oh no! Not Jake! Grr... Great chapter, bb!

Author's Response:

I know he just keeps popping up all everywhere. Thanks, Ellie. I'm glad you liked the chapter. Thanks for your support and being such a great friend.

xoxo

Amber

Reviewer: Rossandra1 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 08:11 PM · On: Confrontation

I'll leave you some love (even though I don't want to) <showers u with love> Now stop taking so long to update chapters and when u do, dont give us these 2 min chapters to read <glares @ u>



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 12:15 PM · On: Confrontation

Oh so long overdue!! Oh but to see Alice beat Leah ass...YUM!! My new favorite chapter!!! More please!!



Author's Response:

Favorite chapter? Wow, thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I just finished the next chapter last night.

Reviewer: pomme_de_terre (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2010 07:43 PM · On: Confrontation

Go Bella! There is a lot of hope here! Great chapter, bb!

Author's Response:

Thought it was about time to get some things off her chest. Thanks for all your support.

xo

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2010 03:32 PM · On: Confrontation

love



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like the chapter.

Reviewer: gpl993 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2010 09:01 PM · On: Confrontation

Awwww....how sweet...and what an asshole....although I would like to see another Jake POV.



Author's Response:

Another from Jake's POV is on the way. I'm glad you like the chapter.

Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2010 08:20 PM · On: Confrontation

I would have loved for you to have added Jacobs reaction to this in this chapter and maybe having him see her with Jasper in that hug.



Author's Response:

More from Jake will be coming soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 11:06 PM · On: Confession Time

SHORT...VERY SHORT. LIKE ALICE. BUT IT WAS SWEET



Author's Response:

Thanks for the reveiw and read.

Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 10:57 PM · On: Distance

I LIKE THIS EDWARD...ALOT. I'M ENJOYING THE DYNAMICS OF THESE NEW COUPLES FORMING. ROSE AND JAMES...WELL WE'LL SEE



Author's Response:

Thanks for the read and review. I'm glad you like the coupling and the story.

Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 10:37 PM · On: New Friends

I DON'T SEE EMMETT AND ALICE TOGETHER. GUESS I'M USED TO THE BIG GUY WITH ROSE. GOOD STORY THOUGH



Author's Response:

Thanks, glad you like the story.

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 01:44 PM · On: Confession Time

sweet dreams



Author's Response:

Thanks for the read and review.

Reviewer: Poisonvamp (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 11:35 AM · On: Confession Time

Sweet chapter. Looking forward to seeing how this unfolds. Please hurry with more!!



Author's Response:

Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.

Reviewer: pomme_de_terre (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 03:11 AM · On: Confession Time

Aw! I am so glad they talked! They are so sweet together! Great job, bb!

Author's Response:

Bella will come around. They are too cute together for her not to. :) Thanks for your support, Ellie, means the world to me.

Reviewer: Salanna (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 01:19 AM · On: Confession Time

Bella a virgin? Seriously? Would never have guessed, nothing in her behaviour made her out a virgin, rather the contrary. She was sexually forward and seemed quite knowledgeable about it too. Jasper shouldn't blame himself, no way he could have known. Further to that, if she's a virgin, was she even on the pill? No mention of any condom here...

I went back and re-read the first 2 chapter and noted one small mishap: When Jasper asks Bella out for breakfast she says she wants to change and grabs jeans and a t-shirt, but never puts them on! Next sentence she's putting on her shoes and then they're off!



Author's Response:

Huh, didn't even notice that. Thanks for pointing it out. I tend to get to typing too fast sometimes.

Thanks for reviewing. I really appreciate your thoughts.

Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: January 25, 2010 10:02 PM · On: Bowling Anyone?

Oh...THAT'S Rose's secret...SO not where I was going with her secret...

Good chapter!  I must say it is refreshing not to read how obsessed Edward is with protecting Bella and all.  I love Twilight, but still :)



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