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Reviewer: alex95 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 12:26 PM · On: Visitor
I think this is great, alot of fanfic writers write Alice to bubbly but you showed the serious side of Alice I've been looking for in fanfics, thanks
Reviewer: mommakat (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 12:55 PM · On: Visitor
Thank you for your story! You did a wonderful job of getting into Alice's head:) Keep writing... you do have a gift!
Reviewer: lilmissb (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 05:49 PM · On: Visitor
very well done
Reviewer: izziey (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 07:18 PM · On: Visitor
i'm always nervous about alternate points of view, but you did a very graceful job.
Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 12:06 PM · On: Visitor
Great job!
Reviewer: Twinklefae (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 11:29 AM · On: Visitor
I love Alice's POV, and this one is so interesting. I'd love to see the next chapter too, with Charlie's explanation, and the vision of Edward.....well written, thanks!
Reviewer: Lacey0186 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 04:57 PM · On: Visitor
Aww I loved this chapter in New Moon.
Alice is the best!!!!!
Author's Response: I alos enjoyed this chapter A LOT! The major first part of New Moon had me all tense and annoyed, but the return of Alice washed that away, thoroughly.
Yes, Alice is definitely my favourite. :)
Reviewer: nautical (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 04:35 PM · On: Visitor
How nice to see Alice's POV.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you think so :)
Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 03:12 PM · On: Visitor
You know, I just realized how angry I am at Alice in this chapter. She discovers that Bella is being hunted by Victoria, and she decides to LEAVE? "I shouldn't have intruded." Way to be a friend, Alice. She could at least get on the damn phone and tell Edward where Victoria is and to get off his ass and do something.
Author's Response: Yes, indeed. But I think that Alice is sorry that she will be the cause to uproot the hurt that tormented Bella so bad when they left her; at that moment in time, the thought had to pass through her mind.
I only just now realise that Victoria would proabably be one of the reasons for Alice wanting to get a hold of Carlisle- but you're right, since Edward was tracking Victoria, the news should definitely measure up to a phone call at the very least. Plus, Bella's saftey is more important than worrying about a broken promise, but that's also a contradiction since they left for the sake of her saftey.
It's not easy being a Cullen.
Reviewer: Strider (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 08:22 AM · On: Visitor
I enjoyed reading this from Alice's point of view. It's interesting to see what a wreck Bella is from outside her own head. You might do one more quick once-over for spelling and typing errors, but they didn't keep me from getting involved in the story. Nice work.
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
English isn't my first language so I did the best I could with the spelling and such, but thanks for the note, I'll have a look at it and see if I can find the errors :p
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 08:14 AM · On: Visitor
Nice
Author's Response: Thank you, and thanks for reading :)
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