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Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 01:51 AM · On: Mornings are Special--One-shot

Nice...very nice!



Author's Response:

Thanks...very much!

Reviewer: mei-lin (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 01:18 AM · On: Mornings are Special--One-shot

A very sweet moment! Thanks!

Author's Response:

I'm happy you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: miaokuancha (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 12:44 AM · On: Mornings are Special--One-shot

Edward eating french toast.

The things we do for love ...



Author's Response:

I am fascinated by scenes of the vampires eating human food.  Call me crazy, but I just wanted to see it happen!

Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: Starlight623 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 12:43 AM · On: Mornings are Special--One-shot

I loved it!  I really reading enjoy those missing moments and you did a fantastic job capturing this one!  I really enjoyed Bella and Edward's facial conversation about the french toast.  Great work!



Author's Response:

I am a big fan of missing moments, too.  I have written a few of these, which I am slowly getting posted here.  They are all up at my ff.net page; the link is in my profile.

Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: folm (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 12:31 AM · On: Mornings are Special--One-shot

I loved this.  Renee's POV is interesting, because she is observant.  I like how you present her-I don't like it when people demonize Renee.  Bella does love her, & not merely out of a sense of obligation, so its nice to see Renee's perspective because she does know Bella so well.

You should write more like this!



Author's Response:

I agree that fandom could be nicer to Renee.  I'm glad you liked what I did with her here.

Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 12:08 AM · On: Mornings are Special--One-shot

This was a sweet moment.  I enjoyed it!



Author's Response:

I enjoyed hearing that you enjoyed it!  Thanks!

Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 11:13 PM · On: Mornings are Special--One-shot

That was really sweet I love when Edward has to eat. I know what happens when he does but I think it's great what he does for her.

 



Author's Response:

I just think that the vampires eating is hilarious for some reason.  I'm glad you liked it too.

Reviewer: Hollywood_678 (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 10:15 PM · On: Mornings are Special--One-shot

What a lovely little insight into Renee. I loved this.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much.

Reviewer: RaCullen (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 09:36 PM · On: Mornings are Special--One-shot

Great missing moment. The lighter moments are nice to read after fic after fic of angst and drama!

Author's Response:

Ha ha.  I'm writing a little angst-and-drama myself right now!  I do like to see the lighter moments, though, and I'm glad you enjoyed this little one of mine.

Reviewer: sweetcrimefighter (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 08:46 PM · On: Mornings are Special--One-shot

Love this, you should make more of these. I wished it were longer, though

Reviewer: RowanMoon (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 08:20 PM · On: Mornings are Special--One-shot

Nice one shot in Renee POV!

Loved that Edward choked down the french toast.  :)

 



Author's Response:

Thanks.  I feel bad for Renee.  She doesn't get much time in the books or in fandom. 

Thanks for your review.

Reviewer: SinAndShame (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 06:34 PM · On: Mornings are Special--One-shot

That was very sweet.



Author's Response:

You are very kind. :)

Reviewer: windchime (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 06:30 PM · On: Mornings are Special--One-shot

I loved this!  Really well done, you've covered a lot of ground very cleverly and I really felt your depiction of Edward clearly, even through those few sentences.   Great.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you think so!  I have a hard time writing Edward, because it's so rare that someone gets him right.  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: funkymunky2511 (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 05:25 PM · On: Mornings are Special--One-shot

so cute lol



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Story_Unfolding (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 04:28 PM · On: Mornings are Special--One-shot

Awww.  This was really cute.  Nice job!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: xsecretxkeeperx (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 04:15 PM · On: Mornings are Special--One-shot

That was absolutely adorable. Nice Job! I especially loved the bit at the end with Edward and Bella's silent conversation about human food ^_^



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your kind words!  I loved that part, too.

Reviewer: puzzle fan (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 04:07 PM · On: Mornings are Special--One-shot

Nice! I think Renee was a little dazzled herself!



Author's Response:

Just a little!  :)

Reviewer: bellagirl (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 03:57 PM · On: Mornings are Special--One-shot

LMAO

And we know exactly what question she was asking..... "Are you really going to be ok eating human food?"

Poor Edward. Well, one thing's for sure, at least he never had to worry about Renee never liking him. I think it's just a father's perogative to NOT like the man their daughter's marrying... or at least to not show they like him.

But then again I wouldn't know that. My brother in law has known my family since he started working with mine and my sister's father nearly 10 years ago. They had started dating after he had gotten permission from our father and did the same when he asked for her hand in marriage. So I guess you could say that my sister found her "Edward".



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked the story.  Thanks for reviewing!

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