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Reviewer: RightKindOfWrong (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 01:02 AM · On: Hero/Herione

I absolutely LOVE it! Such a great chapter! Cant wait to read more. Update soon, the story is amazing :D

Reviewer: inlovewithrb (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 12:59 AM · On: Pressure

This is a really good idea for a story! I'm new to Twilighted, but I am very much enjoying this so far. Kristen has really awful teeth doesn't she?! (Just looking at your banner) But thanks for sharing the story.

Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 06:14 AM · On: Timberwolves At New Jersey

Well at least we all know that Mike Welch did tryfor the part but wasn't right for it, I really liked how you put her and Rob in a situtation before the auditions.



Author's Response:

Yup yup. I figured it just made sense Mike would try to go for the lead. He is talented, but he's no Edward. Only Rob. hehe 

Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 02:44 PM · On: Timberwolves At New Jersey

Looking forward to Rob's audition! Love the story, I will be looking for more.

Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 02:44 PM · On: Timberwolves At New Jersey

Looking forward to Rob's audition! Love the story, I will be looking for more.

Reviewer: Forbidden Twilighter (Anonymous) · Date: July 04, 2009 02:50 AM · On: Timberwolves At New Jersey

-chants- MORE ROB, MORE ROB, MORE ROB!

Good chappie!



Author's Response:

You ask, you shall receive. Hehe.
More is on the way. Most definately ^_^

Reviewer: darbyttd (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 10:30 PM · On: Timberwolves At New Jersey

This story is just plain long-winded and boring!



Author's Response:

No offense, but, if you can't say anything nice- please don't say anthing at all.

It's alright if you don't like my story,however, there is no need to be cruel. Constructive critism is fine and always welcomed, but your comment was completely mean spirited.

 

 

Reviewer: rogiari (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 07:56 PM · On: Classifieds

I like your take but I think Rob was a no - brainer from the let - go! He is amazing, really star - material!

Kisses!
Roberta

 

Reviewer: rogiari (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 07:44 PM · On: I've Just Seen A Face 11

Hey gorgeous!

I liked Rob PV even better than Kris' one! He sounds even more natural!

Kisses!
Roberta

Reviewer: rogiari (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 07:21 PM · On: I've Just Seen A Face

Fantastic chapter all along!!! Loved the very, poignant slowness of it!

Roberta



Author's Response:

Awww, thank you.  I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: rogiari (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 06:58 PM · On: Pressure

Hi dear! Very interested with your story so far...only a niptick. Why didn't you end this chapter on a "Rob Cliffhanger"?;) I would have been a bit stronger, I guess.

Keep on the good work, I really like the language!
I go on to next chapters!!

Kisses

Roberta

 

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 05:39 PM · On: Timberwolves At New Jersey

I really like it but wish it was updated more often



Author's Response:

More is coming your way very soon!

Reviewer: tatie87 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 02:02 PM · On: Timberwolves At New Jersey

I love that we're getting to see the famous Hardwicke home auditions; I can't wait to see Rob's. It was so cute to see Rob and Kristen interact over her fallen bagel into the pool. Michael W. totally bombed the audition, he is so not Edward Cullen.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review! 

Thank you for saying you liked the Catherine audition scenes. When I first started this story I was like "I totally have to do the call backs at Catherine's". I heard all this talk about the auditions and thought it was such a cool idea, but in all the R&K i've but no one ever did them!!
So I took it upon myself.  ^_^

And Mike is definately no Edward Cullen. Only Rob,lol

Reviewer: jodieisabadmum (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 05:35 AM · On: I've Just Seen A Face

:) lol loved it

liked the way you described him but i think he would of tried to crack more jokes cus he was nervous

brilliant though x



Author's Response:

Thank You For Your Review!

Reviewer: BellaEdwardFan2009 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 02:21 PM · On: Promise

Hey! It's me agian! I really loced this chapter! It was really, really romantic and sweet! They're suce a cute a couple! I'm glad you did this chaoter like this! Well, I g2g! Big, long, tiring, and EXTREMMLY BORING day 2mrrw!

                      -BellaEdwardFan2009!

Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 11:48 PM · On: Promise

waiting for more please write more please please please!!!

Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 11:13 PM · On: Classifieds

I am loving it keep writing more!

Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 10:53 PM · On: I've Just Seen A Face 11

SO cool! Keep writing!

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 10:45 PM · On: Promise

well we can do without him again unless its her breaking up w him

Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 04:22 PM · On: I've Just Seen A Face

Love it!!!

Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 03:59 PM · On: Pressure

Loving it!

Reviewer: HeyThereEliza (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 05:19 PM · On: Classifieds

OMG it's so awesome that you had Kristen listening to Taking Back Sunday!

They rock!

Reviewer: obsessed668 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 10:01 AM · On: Promise

awww
cute
love it
cant wait for more
Oxo



Author's Response:

Thank you!!

Reviewer: tatie87 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 08:40 AM · On: Promise

Michael and Kristen were alright, but I prefer to not. Can't wait for Rob and Kristen. You went into such detail about M/K's date, but there was suprisingly not much intimacy or touching.



Author's Response:

Haha,. Yeah. That was kind of the whole point. They are not the very lovely-dovey types. They keep a distance.  Tottally opposite of how her and Rob are.

^_^

 

Reviewer: Forbidden Twilighter (Anonymous) · Date: June 11, 2009 08:08 AM · On: Promise

Bring on Rob!

Lol



Author's Response:

haha. Do not worry. He'll be back next chapter.

^_^

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