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Reviewer: trm cullen (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2012 12:30 PM · On: Realize

Sorry I was not able review a few chp. Really looking forward to this story continuing, hope to hear from you soon. I see the relationship getting to the point of no return. As much as I love Rob, (which is considerable!?) I can't help but feel for Michael. THANK YOU FOR YOUR STORY. :D

Reviewer: trm cullen (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2012 05:56 AM · On: Getting To Know You

This was a nice meaty chp. Got lots of character and scene development going for it. I like the way you've written the dialogue. I do wonder why you named the waiter, is he going to appear again with any significance? (currently a distraction) Rob has mentioned in interviews that when Catherine offered him the role, she warned him not to pursue Kristen because 1. She was only 17 and underaged and 2. She had a boyfriend that also was a friend of hers. I would like to see this disclosed in the story. Bring on the next chp. Goodies :D

Reviewer: trm cullen (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2012 02:33 AM · On: Jude Law And A Semester Abroad

I really enjoyed this 'transition' chp. It really conveys a sense of travel. I forgot to ask, Rob has always mentioned that he was so nervous about the audition that he took a Valium beforehand, that would be a great background detail. This song, is beyond creepy in its message.

Reviewer: trm cullen (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2012 12:21 AM · On: Hero/Herione

"0' BABY, I like it like that!". EXCELLENT! Including bits to the other auditions was great in setting Rob's apart. Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: trm cullen (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2012 11:15 PM · On: Timberwolves At New Jersey

Hey, this was great I like the whole bagel rescue scene. Knowing Mike W only as Newtow from the story, I can't imagine him as Edward!? Thanks for the song info in the notes, I always like to listen to new music recommendations :D

Reviewer: trm cullen (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2012 10:34 PM · On: Promise

Awwww. Michael seems like such a nice guy, I feel kinda bad for him, knowing how R gets the girl in the end :(.

Reviewer: trm cullen (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2012 08:42 PM · On: Classifieds

There was a lot of detail, but not much substance to this chapter. I appreciate that you are establishing the relationships. Catherine's exposition is well done. Thx

Reviewer: trm cullen (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2012 03:18 PM · On: I've Just Seen A Face 11

You have a lot of good details here but I have some concerns. It seems to come across that R was not prepared for the audition, I believe he has stated in interviews that he read the book when he knew he was going out for the part. R did not just come up with an American accent on the fly, it is something he has worked on over the years. He came to LA primarily to audition for two other parts, that he didn't get and was going to quit acting if he didn't get Twilight bc he had not won an audition in over a year. All of these factual details would encourage the readers' buy-in of your story. There seems to be a disconnect in the 1st person narrative of the acting scene. It reads as 'Edward's' POV not Robert's. I found this rather distracting. The rest of the chapter was very well written. I really enjoyed the pre-audition scenes.

Reviewer: trm cullen (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2012 01:39 PM · On: I've Just Seen A Face

Great job once again! You've captured my impressions of R's ability to slip into E with all of his nuances. Wonderful attention to detail. I feel like a fly on the wall. :D

Reviewer: trm cullen (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2012 12:41 PM · On: Pressure

I like it ;). This is the first story I've read with K POV of their first meeting. You've done a great job setting the story up and introducing the characters. Really looking forward to the rest of the tale.

Reviewer: 112myboys (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2012 12:14 AM · On: Realize

I am so excited that you updated. this has always been one of my favorite Rob and Kristen stories. i love how are developing their friendship. I always believed they were bff's who found true love. I had to reread all the previous chapters to reacquaint my self with the story again, but I still enjoyed it as much as I did the first time around. Welcome back :)

Reviewer: melbelle330 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2012 08:23 AM · On: Realize

I am really loving this one! Please tell me you will continue this story!

Reviewer: myppe (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2012 06:17 AM · On: Realize

pleasepleasepleasepleaseplease please PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!! update I need more

Reviewer: majikdeja (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2012 11:15 PM · On: Realize

I really really enjoyed this story and your writing is excellent. Please keep up the good work...I can't wait to read the next chapter and hope it will be out soon. Maybe the release of Breaking Dawn on DVD this weekend will further inspire you! Thank you!

Author's Response:
Thank you so much! So glad you like it. And yes, my plan this weekend is to watch all four Twilight d.v.d's and start cranking out some new chapters! We shall see ; )

Thanks again.

xoxo,Paulette

Reviewer: AZILIZ (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2012 05:42 PM · On: Realize

I'm really glad to read this neww chapter! thank you!!

Author's Response:
So glad you like it! And thanks for the review ^_^

xoxo,Paulette

Reviewer: bleusoleil_ec (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2012 09:21 AM · On: Realize

I had waiting for too long for this!! Thank you so much for writing!!! You are the best!

XoXo

Bleu

Author's Response:
Aww, thank you!

You're the best!

I'll try to hurry the next chapter along. ^_^

xoxo,Paulette

Reviewer: fanette66 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2012 10:04 PM · On: Realize

thanks for this new vchapter

this story is so beautiful , and you are such a great writer , i really wish you could update more , it's so long between each chapter

i already can't wait for the next

Author's Response:
I know, I suck at updating! But I'm trying to get better and speed up the editing process.

Thank you for the kind words though.

And I'm already starting on the next chapter. It should be alot of fun!

xoxo,Paulette

Reviewer: lolly9 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2012 04:13 AM · On: Pressure

So good! Kristen may be in denial of their relationship at this point, but, I think she knows her feelings are leading to much more than friendship. She is already in too deep to let go. I can't wait to see where you take their 'friendship' to next!!

Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review!

And yes,Kristen is definately starting to realize how blurry the lines have become in her and rob's relationship. Now it's time for her to face some harsh truths and consequencs...but all of that isin the next chapter. Stay tuned!

xoxo,Paulette

Reviewer: westosobear (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2012 07:53 PM · On: Realize

really enjoying the dinner conversation between them. sorta looking forward to Michael's visit. wondering how the two guys are going to react to eachother.

Author's Response:
Thank you for the review!

And Micheal's visit is going to be good! I have that chapter already planned out and I'm excited to get it to you guys.

Thanks again,

xoxo.Paulette

Reviewer: Yrollam (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2012 02:14 PM · On: Realize

Loved it as always great that u updated! R u on twitter?

Author's Response:
Thanks you! And yes,actually. There's no "Captivated" twitter page but I do have a personal twitter. Feel free to follow me @ Pixie_Paulie !

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2012 12:25 PM · On: Realize

It is wonderful to read another chapter of yours. It was so interesting to see how Edward is slowly but surely moving into Kristen's life. Michael who??? Their time together is so precious, especially their nights when they fall asleep together. Mornings are going to get so much more interesting very soon. Love the story and can't wait for Kristen to boot Michael.

Author's Response:
Thamks for the review, and yes Micheal who? lol. Do not worry, Kristen will eventually kick him to the curb but it will be a slow amd painful process and come when the time's right. Bear with me!

Xoxo,Paulette

Reviewer: lolly9 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2011 12:09 AM · On: Here(In Your Arms)

Great story!!!! But, I must say, I need more!!! I am really hoping this story is still important to you and that we will all have an update soon. I really love your writing style. You have Rob and Kristen very real. I like how Kristen is strong and determined but not in a bitchy way like so many authors make her seem. You portray her as sweet and strong. And Rob, what a love. So focused on Kristen yet trying to remain respectful of her relationship with Michael. He wants her for himself, but wants what will make her happy. She has such a strong desire for him but hasn't quite figured out what it all means. She doesn't recognize that she is falling in love because she is so young. She has probably never felt these feelings before. Rob is like learning to speak a whole new language for her but instead of dealing with words, it is emotion.

Thanks for the story!

Author's Response:
Thank you so much!

I am so glad you like the way i'm trying to pottray Rob and Kris! This is the type of story i've always wanted to do and I am thrilled you're enjoying reading it as much as I am writing it! And yes,the story is still importnt to me.lol. New chapter up now as a matter of fact!

Thanks agian

xoxo,Paulette

Reviewer: fanette66 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2011 12:24 PM · On: Pressure

I really miss this tory do you have a new chapter for us ? in july on say soon ....i can't wait to read what hapens next

Author's Response:
lol. sorry it took so long but yes, new chapter is up now!

thanks for reading!

xoxo,Paulette

Reviewer: TwilightBritt720 (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2011 12:54 AM · On: Here(In Your Arms)

Are you planning on continuing this fic? I just found it a few days ago and now that I've read all of the chapters I'm dying to read more! Please say you'll be updating soon.

Author's Response:

Reviewer: RP-Maddie-EC (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2011 02:49 PM · On: Here(In Your Arms)

I absolutely love this story! I just started reading it today and I couldn't stop reading it. When I went to hit the 'next' button for the hundreth time, I could've cried because I'll have to be patient for another beautiful chapter to come out! This truly is a lovely story! Can't wait for the next chapter (:

Author's Response: Yay! I'm thrilled you're enjoying the story so much ^_^ Thank you so much for the review and kind words. It is greatly appreciated. I'm working on the next chapter right now, so stay tuned ; ) xoxo,Paulette

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