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Reviewer: Niska (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 03:20 AM · On: Pressure

p.s Oh shit! Niska, you're an ass! I forgot to thank you so much for sending me this chapter earlier! It make me feel so especial...



Author's Response:

p.s You're welcome ^_^

Reviewer: Niska (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 03:18 AM · On: Pieces of Me

I was really looking forward to see a conversation with Rob about the whole kissing scenes and a dream part that was cutted from Twilight... But there was none!

 

Please tell me that you will make for that! I soo want to see a awkward talk with a embarassed, yet very eager Rob...

 

 



Author's Response:

That conversation will come, but when the time is right. Rob and Kris are very level headed and concentrate on one main goal at a time. This chapter's goal was to go over the scipt and get some of the key scenes down, and while the kiss is powerful in the movie, it's not that big in the script. It's the way they portray the kiss that makes it so intense, and that  conversation will come when it's time to start preparing for the scene. The conversation will definately be awkward,but in a more of "I really want to kiss you, but I'm scared because I'm starting to have feelings for you" kind of way- if that makes any sense.  

Reviewer: Niska (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 03:10 AM · On: Pieces of Me

Sorry I didn't reviewed earlier, but, as you know, school ended today and these last day have been a bit crazy.

First, on the Chapter end notes, I was in a hurry when I read it for the first time, and for a moment it seemed that you called me a monster. lol

On this chapter.

I liked the very small hints you have been giving. I'm loving this falling in love in slow motion.

This Rob is very... well.... he's ... Rob. The bleach, the bumping into things... It make me laugh in a way that only a British make me laugh. Don't ask... :x

Something that, makes me smile is this little Jackson/Ashley thing. It's just so cuuuuuuuuuuuute!!! Ashley, you lucky girl!!!


I agree with Kristen on the whole hair thing. Did you have to? I would never have the patience to write that whole scene. The details are good and show works and devotion, but I'm a bit of a tomboy. I all for skipping this whole shit and get in the bedroom with Rob, if you know what I mean*wink*

And Catherine still is one of my favorites. By the way, Kellan, and that Kevin guy, are really funny too!

There are still a few reviews left and I'm the one who is gonna make them!

 

watch me!



Author's Response:

hehe, aww, I would never call you a monster.
I'm glad you liked the little Jackson and Ashley thing, I loved writing that. It reminds me that there is more then one love story going on. Rob/Kris and Ash/Jackson. and I love it.

Yes, I know the part in the hair salon was painfully long. But I realized if I would've skipped through that we would've missed alot of cute Kris and Rob moments. I could've found a way to bring it up later, but it wouldn't have been the same. And yes, I'm all for skipping through alot of the shit and heading straight to Rob's room. ^_^

Catherine is so fun to write, and I liked how Kellan is a goof ball in this chapter. There will be times when hes serious, but for right now I like the fun-loving Kellan.

hehe

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: pinkflower (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 10:59 PM · On: Pieces of Me

FINALLY! i have been waiting like forevahh for this chapter

PLEASE HURRY WITH THE OTHER 1

LOVEYA



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! So sorry for the long wait.

Next one will be faster, promise.

xoxo,Paulette

 

Reviewer: Tigerlily74 (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 06:12 AM · On: Pieces of Me

Loving the story! He is so totally crushing on her! I think she is starting to feel the same. She has hardly mentioned Mike lately. Update soon!



Author's Response:

Thank yo so much. Yup, Rob is having a little crush, and Kristen is starting to feel for him ^_^
And Mike is still there, I mentioned that she texted him during the day,lol. hehehe.

xoxo,Paulette

 

Reviewer: swilson500 (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 09:57 PM · On: Pieces of Me

It made my day to see a new chapter! This is my favorite real person fic. Thanks for the update!

Author's Response:

Aww, thank you sooo much for saying this is your favorite real person fic. I'm totally flattered!!

And thank you for reading!

xoxo,Paulette

Reviewer: amylily123 (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 05:56 PM · On: Pressure

OOOOOOOOhhhh!that's why!1

He hits on anything that has boobs.



Author's Response:

ahahahaa. That's classic

 

Reviewer: SunnySRZ1 (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 02:30 PM · On: Pieces of Me

hey, loved it.  This story seems so real the way their relationship could have developed.  I imagined it slower than a lot of the stories.  Thank you



Author's Response: Thank you for reading! So glad you liked the change of pace for R&K. xoxo,Paulette

Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 01:33 PM · On: Pieces of Me

This was really good. There are a few typos that got through, but the story is great.



Author's Response: Glad you liked the chapter. Sorry for the typo's,try as I might, they are slippery little suckers. ^_^ xoxo,Paulette

Reviewer: Antonia Cullen (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 12:58 PM · On: Pieces of Me

Hope you update soon. Come on, a little more sexual tention or something next time. lol



Author's Response: Hehe. A sexually fustrated Rob would be funny, but I don't want to move too fast. They are still in that cutsie-flirting- but-not really-type of stage of the relationship. ^_^ xoxo,Paulette

Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 07:42 AM · On: Pieces of Me

Glad to see this update!  Lots of baby steps in their relationship here...how many chapters do you intend to do and how far do you plan to follow their story?



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! Unfortunatley, I do not have a definate number on how many chapters this story will have; I'm always getting new ideas and I'm really interested in exporing  some of these ideas. And, as far as this story is  concerned, I plan on seeing thier relationship through til the end of Twilight filming and I think I've found a good way to end this story. As for what happens after that...well, let's  just say I have a couple of things up my sleeves.

^_^

xoxo,Paulette

Reviewer: amylily123 (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 06:37 AM · On: Pressure

no but my friend is aguy..

and i hadn't seen him in a while and he said...

U smell different

Then later, on facebook...

U sed I smell different!

U do! Ur hair smells different.

Good or bad?

Good.



Author's Response:

That's a good thing! He was hitting on you.

Reviewer: amazeofgrace (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 05:34 AM · On: Pieces of Me

very nice, it help my interest the flow of the writing was very good!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. So glad you enjoyed it!

 

xoxo,Paulette

Reviewer: Forbidden Twilighter (Anonymous) · Date: December 21, 2009 05:20 AM · On: Pieces of Me

Woo-Hoo! Loved the chapter. I did a happy dance when I saw you updated. :-)



Author's Response:

Yay! Thank you!!

 I did a happy dance when I read this review, ^_^

xoxo,Paulette

Reviewer: westosobear (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 04:44 AM · On: Pieces of Me

love this story. They are so compatible.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. And I could not agree more! Two peas in a pod!!

xoxo,Paulette

Reviewer: fanette66 (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 04:36 AM · On: Pieces of Me

it's so great to have an update  , thanks so much !!!

 

i'm in love with your fic , please don't let us too long before the next chapter



Author's Response:

No, Thank you for reading! lol

And i promise the next update won't take as long as this one. It killed me when I realized how long it's been since I posted!!

xoxo,Paulette

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 04:16 AM · On: Pieces of Me

welcome back

lovin it



Author's Response:

It's good to be back!!

Thank you so much

xoxo,Paulette

Reviewer: fake79 (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 02:29 AM · On: Pieces of Me

Thank GOD! I found your story again. It was a huge disappointment, when you had to remove it from ff.net. 

Well, I know, it's based on real characters, but where's the harm in fantasizing? If that's a crime, than go and arrest every man, who fantasizes about Megan Fox while in bed with another woman (or every woman, who thinks about someone hot, while in bed with a hmmm, NOT so hot guy).

Anyway. Thanks for the great Christmas present.

Merry Christmas and a happy New Year from snowy Frankfurt/Germany



Author's Response:

Aww, you are so sweet!

And I 100% agree with you. Just cause they are real people doesn't mean we can't have some fun with them in our minds, right? Even if what we are thinking is not totally innocent,hehehe.

And best wishes for a Merry Christmas,Happy New Years to you, too- from chilly (yet, still managable) California,USA

xoxo,Paulette

 

Reviewer: Tine (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2009 01:02 AM · On: Pieces of Me

Yay, finally ;) I am loving it... Great Job. Thank you for posting and I am looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. So happy you liked it.

Next chapter wont take as long to be posted, promise ^_^

xoxo,Paulette

 

 

Reviewer: amylily123 (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 10:55 PM · On: Pieces of Me

YAYAYAYAYAYAY!!!

You updated!!!!!

Finally...

Finally...

Finally...

 

And... have you ever had a friend tell you you smell different, before?

Good different of course.



Author's Response:

I know, right? It's been way too long... sorry.

And ,yes. my guy friends complement me on my purfume occasionally.

xoxo,Paulette

Reviewer: hbgxo (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 03:17 AM · On: Beauty and The Beasts' Theme

SO amazing!



Author's Response: Thank you!! <3

Reviewer: fanette66 (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 04:04 PM · On: Pressure

this story is so good , i can't wait for a new chapter ........soon ?



Author's Response: Aww,thanks so much. New chapter is on the way soon. xoxo,Paulette

Author's Response: Aww,thanks so much. New chapter is on the way soon. xoxo,Paulette

Reviewer: EdsMyFave (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 01:18 PM · On: Beauty and The Beasts' Theme

Still checking in for an update. It has been a while. Hoping you haven't forgotten about us loyal readers.

Please post soon :)

Author's Response:

So sorry for the long wait, new chapter is coming soon! Just finalizing some details.
And I could never forget you guys! Just trying to make the chapter good for you guys. ^_^

xoxo,Paulette

 

 

Reviewer: Tine (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 09:54 PM · On: Beauty and The Beasts' Theme

Hey-

I really like this story and hope that you will post more chapters soon ;)

Love,
Tine

Reviewer: Sattinson (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2009 03:15 AM · On: I've Just Seen A Face 11

Still lovin' it!

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