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Reviewer: PaisleyCrighton (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2010 04:10 PM · On: Family Ties

You tease!!! I am enjoying this story and look forward to the next chapter!



Author's Response:

what? Me? Tease? Never! ;)

(well....maybe)

Thanks for your review and for reading!! Stay tuned!

~Fatima

Reviewer: janna479 (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2010 03:35 PM · On: Family Ties

good chapter, glad to see bella getting more comfortable, and I'm actually looking forward to the james POV



Author's Response:

you know, you're the first person to say that they're looking forward to James' POV, although I'm sure I'd look forward to it if I were reading, too...he's a psycho, and sometimes it's fun to delve into a psycho's mind (when you know that he'll eventually get his comeuppance, right? ^_^)

Thanks for the review!!

~Fatima

Reviewer: She Who Must Be Obeyed (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2010 03:16 PM · On: Family Ties

I wouldn't mind if he was forgotten you know... I'm sure I'll love whatever you do but I just wanted to put that out there... I really wouldn't mind. :)



Author's Response:

hehe I know you wouldn't mind not seeing James again...a lot of people have those same feelings, but he must come back at least for a while...trust me! :)

Thanks for your praise! I'm glad to know whatever I do, you'll love! :)

~Fatima

Reviewer: maserati (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2010 03:00 PM · On: Family Ties

Love the story.  I can't wait for the winery tour.  Maybe some schmexing going on?  I know that James is still lurking in the story somewhere, and I keep holding my breath with each chapter thinking his evil ass is going to show up.  It will be interesting to see how he finds out Bella is still alive.  Great writing!



Author's Response:

hmmm...schmexing? I'm not familiar with that term...if it's anything like 'getting it on', then perhaps yes!! ;)

Don't hold your breath for too long! I'd hate to be the cause of anxiety! He'll make his appearance in about two chapters. I promise...

Thanks for the review!!

~Fatima

Reviewer: lucky4me13 (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2010 02:00 PM · On: Family Ties

i like your story, but i have to say, i am intrigued by these lu lu lemon pants. i've never heard of them...is it a canadian thing? i looked them up online, but i'm wondering what's so special about them? i know, strange thing to be interested in, but i was totally curious.



Author's Response:

The actual brand of Lululemon is a Canadian company, yes, however they have quite a few locations across the states, and let me tell you, their yoga wear is freakin' comfortable like nobody's business!! I myself own two pairs of their pants. They last FOREVER (and they should, considering they are over $95 a pair), and the store hems them for free. The fit is simply amazing. My husband loves them on me (^_^)...so I speak not only from experience, but from friends' experience as well. Plus, I was listening to the radio during Christmas time and the radio personality stated that "lululemon pants are the best present a girl can get for herself because they are really a present for her boyfriend/husband", and about fifty different callers agreed with him.

Anyway, that's my experience. I suggest trying them on and feeling for yourself. XD

Thanks for your question! I'll have to make mention of it when the next chapter goes up! ;)

~Fatima

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2010 01:47 PM · On: Family Ties

Excellent chapter!

I'm glad that Rosalie was nice. Bella doesn't need anyone else being mean or rude to her.

I can't wait to see the winery tour! =)

Can't James stay gone....forever? xD

Looking forward to your next chapter! Please update soon? -pleading-



Author's Response:

exactly my feeling about Rosalie. Her being mean is the last thing Bella needs.

Yes, the winery tour should be great! ;)

Haha @ James comment. Trust me. You aren't alone in your thought...however, he is necessary. :)

Thanks for your review! I've taken your pleading into consideration hehe...

~Fatima

Reviewer: kuntrygal (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2010 01:37 PM · On: Similarities

Esme had a really sad story.  I'm glad her parents believed her though.  Carlisle is truly a guardian angel in this story! :)



Author's Response:

I think that Carlisle is a guardian angel, too! ;) And about Esme's parents believing her, yes, I couldn't give her a completely horrid history... I'm glad you're still reading, and hope you get some time to do some more rec's soon! :)

Take care, and thanks again!

~Fatima

Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 01:01 AM · On: Similarities

Ahhh! I can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

You don't have to wait very much longer! I just submitted chapter 15 to Twilighted! It shouldn't be long now! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!

~Fatima

Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 11:00 PM · On: Similarities

i love your story. So sad yet hopeful



Author's Response:

Thank you! Yes, I try to write it in such a way that you know that there is hope for her, but her struggle is great.

Thanks for reading!

~Fatima

Reviewer: gypsymomma (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 07:05 AM · On: Similarities

I love this story so much!

Author's Response:

I'm glad you love it! It means a lot to know you and others are enjoying! :)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~Fatima

Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2010 10:22 PM · On: A Loss

I DON'T KNOW WHERE YOU GOT YOUR INSPIRATION BUT... DAMN! IT WAS SO REAL... THE PAIN AND FEaR IN BELLA IS PALPABLE... I FELT IT WITH HER...



Author's Response:

thank you so much for your kind words, yelled! ;)

Hope you're reading the following chapters, because I think they get a lot better. :)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~Fatima

Reviewer: twilight lover (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2010 05:38 PM · On: Similarities

Amazing chapter. It's sad to think that James will destroy their bubble of happiness. Bella deserves the happiness, just like Esme does! IM glad that Esme found Carlisle. I'm glad that he was her friend and helped her with everything. I'm glad she decided to keep Edward, and I;m glad that things have worked out. When I read things like this, I feel horrible about thinking the things i think on my bad days. I mean my life is pretty amazing compared to what some people have gone through or are going through right now. And Im glad you like HEA ... Me too :)



Author's Response:

I agree with you. We tend to think negatively about what we have, but sometimes things like this show us just how good we've got it. It makes us step back and reassess some things. I'm as guilty as anyone of thinking negatively about the things and people I have in my life. Writing this story has definitely given me a different perspective on my own marriage, that's for sure!

And yes, eventual HEAs are wonderful! :) I'm a fan! :)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~Fatima

Reviewer: LostCullen5 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2010 10:25 AM · On: Similarities

Great chapter.  I like that Esme shared her story with Bella.  It really strengthens the connection between them for me.  Thanks!  Keep up the great work!  :o)



Author's Response:

I agree with you that Esme opening up strengthens their bond. It also gives us insight into why they acted the way they did when they were first introduced to Bella's tale.

Thanks for your review!

~Fatima

Reviewer: ptoricanjewel (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 09:13 PM · On: Similarities

Another great chapter. I'm nervous that it's all going so good, I know things are bound to change and am not looking forward to when James makes an appearance again.



Author's Response:

You are absolutely right to be nervous! He's looming on the horizon...but don't be too nervous. I'm a HEA fan! :)

Thanks for reviewing!

~Fatima

Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 08:00 PM · On: Similarities

*Sniff* Awww!!! Whata great chapter!! Yay!!!

It had everything! Romance, happy, sad, hugs & smiles, laughter, tears...

Ok so now your gonna drop the "J" bomb aren't ya?? Soon isn't it??

Can Bella & Edward 'consumate' their relationship first??



Author's Response:

When I read your review, I giggled out loud (Mainly about the 'consumate' comment!). The J bomb (I like that!) will be dropped in a few chapters. But first, yes, consummation will take place! ;-) I have probably given you way too many spoilers, but you're a regular, so I'm ok with it! The next chapter is 99% written! Stay tuned!

As always, thanks for reviewing!

~Fatima

Reviewer: sunfire04 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 07:29 PM · On: Similarities

That was a great chapter, Thanks for Esme's story and her and Carlisle's love story. That was so sweet that Edward wished he could have been there to help her like Carlisle helped Esme.



Author's Response:

Yes, Edward feels like his hands are tied when it comes to helping her heal, but what he doesn't realize is that he's helping her so much more than that. I'm glad you enjoyed Esme's story. I felt it was vital in understanding Carlisle's immediate motivations for helping her, back at the hospital.

As always, thanks for reviewing!

~Fatima

Reviewer: sunfire04 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 07:28 PM · On: Complete Disclosure

Great chapter. That is a beautiful pendant.



Author's Response:

I know, right? I found it online, and just HAD to use it!!

~Fatima

Reviewer: robert cullen (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 05:54 PM · On: Similarities

She just doesn't know how wrong she is, if James finds out that she's not dead.



Author's Response:

exactly. Trouble a-brewin'...When he finds out, he'll be a pissed-off panda... haha

(and it's 'when', unfortunately not 'if'...)

As always, thanks for reviewing! The next chapter should be up pretty soon! It's nearly complete.

~Fatima

Reviewer: loveofhenry (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 05:17 PM · On: Similarities

now that she is so happy -why do I feel there is going to be an angsty moment



Author's Response:

because there will be...but not just yet...another two chapters of greatness, and then the proverbial shit will hit the fan... ;)

Thanks for reviewing!

~Fatima

Reviewer: seby (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 10:48 AM · On: Similarities

that chapter was really sweet, and sad at the same time, mainly because of what esme went through, but also how there both happy with where they are, good story, and good chapter, and i'm happy i inspired some of it, can't wait for more, especially when it get's to the dramatic climax, ooo, can't wait for that bit...thanks so much for the dedication i'm glad i gave you some inspiration



Author's Response:

You're welcome!! You did inspire me to write this, because your question made a lot of sense! I also can't wait to write the climax, but I wanted to make it as realistic as possible, and that means building all the characters before that happens...next, we'll take a look at the family dynamic of the entire Cullen family! Stay tuned!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!! XD

~Fatima

Reviewer: maserati (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 09:13 AM · On: Similarities

I just found your story today, and I absolutely love it!  Very intriguing plotline.  Can't wait for more.  Thanks for writing.



Author's Response:

That's awesome!! I'm glad you found my little story, and I'm soo glad you're enjoying it!! A new chapter should be up soon. Up next, we'll take a look at the family dynamic of the entire Cullen family! Stay tuned!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!! XD

~Fatima

Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 09:12 AM · On: Similarities

What an emotion packed conversation ... you did a wonderful job with it.



Author's Response:

As always, thanks for your review. It means a lot to me that you're continuing to read my story and provide feedback to me every time!!

Thanks for the kind words. The conversation practically wrote itself...I'm happy you found it so great. XD

Up next, we'll take a look at the family dynamic of the entire Cullen family! Stay tuned!

Thanks again!!

~Fatima

Reviewer: IrishLove (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 08:16 AM · On: Similarities

Great chapter! The talk between Esme and Bella was well written. Hope you update soon!



Author's Response:

Thanks!! The conversation practically wrote itself :)

Up next, we'll take a look at the family dynamic of the entire Cullen family! Stay tuned! (it'll be soon, I promise!)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!!

~Fatima

Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 02:56 AM · On: Similarities

Everything isn't going to stay perfect is it?  This is just the calm before the storm, right?

Good chapter, can't wait for the next one!



Author's Response:

of course not!! This is definitely the calm before the storm!!

Up next, we'll take a look at the family dynamic of the entire Cullen family! Stay tuned!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!!

~Fatima

Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 09:51 PM · On: Similarities

That must have been so tough for Esme to talk about...obviously it helps you heal to talk about it with someone who's experienced something similiar, but no less tough! :(

Carlisle and Edward are so gorgeous...if only all men could be like that pair!



Author's Response:

I believe it would have been incredibly difficult for Esme to talk to Bella about it, had they not gone through the same situations...but I think it was definitely theraputic and necessary for them to discuss her past...

Yes, if all men were like Carlisle and Edward, this world would be perfect!! ;)

 

Up next, we'll take a look at the family dynamic of the entire Cullen family! Stay tuned!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!! XD

~Fatima

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