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Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 04:12 AM · On: Christmas with the Cullens

loving it, a very sweet and touching chapter. I am glad that everyone took the news so well, and I can't wait to see what happens when Esme and Carlisle find out for sure.'Please don't keep us all waiting to long for the next chapter. I can't wait to find out more about James and his PI.



Author's Response:

Sorry about the wait! I'm writing as fast as RL will allow me... ;)

Thanks for the review! Always nice to see that people are liking the updates! ^_^

James and his PI are featured in the next chapter. Enjoy!!

~Fatima

Reviewer: lulabelljane (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 04:03 AM · On: Christmas with the Cullens

Oooh, the beginning with James...he's getting me really scared of whats to come from him...especially once he finds Bella. OMG!

Loved the familys Christmas. Her ornament on the tree with everyone else...aww! She is offically a part of the family.

SO very good! Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Yes, James really is a scary one...at least I want him to come across that way...

Thank you for reading and reviewing, and so sorry about the delay in replying...

~Fatima

Reviewer: clumsy318 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 03:11 AM · On: Christmas with the Cullens

love love love love it!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you, thank you, thank you! So glad you're enjoying!! Stay tuned!

~Fatima

Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 02:52 AM · On: Christmas with the Cullens

James is going to really try to hurt Bella isn't he?  Please tell me none of the Cullens dies!  I can handle them getting hurt but please don't kill any of them off!

This is getting intense!



Author's Response:

He certainly is mad...considering his OCD-type personality, he will be wanting to do evil things to her...whether he'll actually get to do them is another story completely!

Thanks for your review! Always nice to read praise! :)

~Fatima

Reviewer: cjngrls (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 02:48 AM · On: Christmas with the Cullens

Absolutely love it... the only thing I'm hoping for is that you don't allow James to seriously hert Bella when he finally finds her... and he needs to die so that she will be trurly free...



Author's Response:

I agree with you completely; he WILL die, but I can't spoil the surprise entirely, so let's just leave it at that... ;) you'll thank me for it later, trust me!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~Fatima

Reviewer: Teaste (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 02:46 AM · On: Christmas with the Cullens

I keep holding my breath thinking James is right around the corner.  I am in suspense.



Author's Response:

but he is!! Can't you see him? He's there, waiting to strike! ^_^

Thanks for reviewing! Stay tuned!

~Fatima

Reviewer: edwardsisobel (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 01:13 AM · On: Christmas with the Cullens

Loved it, of course. Oh oh wonder what James has been doing since he found the photo. Love the personal Christmas decorations, our family does the same thing but they are handmade by the kids with glitter etc. Looking forward to the next chaper.

Author's Response:

You're lucky that you have that personal touch on the tree! I've always liked that idea, but my family never did the ornaments thing...even for our first Christmas as a married couple, I wanted to find an ornament to commemorate it, but couldn't find anything ! *sad face*

Thanks for your review!

~Fatima

Reviewer: E_B (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 11:04 PM · On: Christmas with the Cullens

LOVE IT !!!

plzzz post ASAP 



Author's Response:

So glad you are enjoying! :) Stay tuned! And update is just around the corner!

Thanks!!

~Fatima

Reviewer: Cailley Rachelle (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 10:54 PM · On: Christmas with the Cullens

Love Edward and Bella, and even hormonal bitchy Rose, but I hate James. I absolutly abhor him all the time, but I love The Cullens, Jazz, and Bella! Cannot wait for James to be tortured and/or killed :) preferably both :)



Author's Response:

haha I think your sentiments are mirrored by everyone who's reviewed! hehe

Don't worry. He'll get his. Trust me on that one. I've already written it, and it's going to be niiiice and legal... ;)

Thanks for reviewing! Always a pleasure to read!

~Fatima

Reviewer: glitterk (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 10:53 PM · On: Christmas with the Cullens

Um LOVE it! Can't wait to read more!!

Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm so happy you are enjoying the story! Stay tuned! More is on the horizon!

~Fatima

Reviewer: emma08 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 09:26 PM · On: Christmas with the Cullens

Please don't let James find her while she's pregnant.  Losing two babies would be horrible.

BTW, great chapter!



Author's Response:

thanks for the review and the rating!

Unfortunately, it's going to happen, but I can promise you that nothing will happen with the baby. Don't worry. Bella would shrivel up and die if something happened with the baby...

Thanks for your praise!

~Fatima

Reviewer: ashleybobashly (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 09:14 PM · On: Christmas with the Cullens

love it !!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

thanks!! Glad you're enjoying !!

~Fatima

Reviewer: I Love Edward 76 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 09:13 PM · On: Christmas with the Cullens

Ahhh, I was hoping that Carlisle and Esme would be able to spend Christmas w/their kids. Poor Rose, I'm glad Bella was able to calm her down and I'm really glad that Rose was able to put her pain aside and be happy for Bella and Edward and enjoy their holiday as a family. Although I absolutely hate James, I am rather excited to see the drama build w/his search for Marie.



Author's Response:

I was originally planning on having Carlisle and Esme coming to spend Christmas in Forks, but then I thought, realistically they wouldn't be able to take that much vacation time off...well, maybe they could, if they pulled some strings, but then I just thought 'screw it' and kept it a Forks Christmas...

About the James drama, as am I, and I'm writing it! ;-) he's a fun character to write. I just go to the crazy, derranged corner of my mind and write there. It's easier :)

Thanks for the review!

~Fatima

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 08:58 PM · On: Christmas with the Cullens

I loved this chapter!

I was kind of hoping something would fall on James while he was walking around, but my wish was not granted. =(

I loved the family feel when Bella was with the Cullens. It made me smile.

I can't wait to see what happens next!

 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Unfortunately, no such luck with the piano landing on James' head, or a meteor crashing into his car...but he'll get his, don't you worry!

Always a pleasure reading your reviews! They make me smile! ^_^

~Fatima

Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 08:49 PM · On: Christmas with the Cullens

Lovin it!!! Happy pregnancy news, Christmas fun, new steps with Rose..*sigh*

And tho I hate James with the heat of a 1,000 suns, its kewl getting insight into his morbid, sucky brain. Keep his POV's coming! --As long as it doesn't take away from our happy couple too much ;-)



Author's Response:

I hate him almost as much, but I must admit that he's a freakin' fun character to write. I just drag myself into the darkest, strangest corner of my mind and bring my laptop along with me. It's easier to write his POV when I'm there! And don't worry; he'll be around for a while yet...

~Fatima

 

Reviewer: metalhead (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 08:47 PM · On: Christmas with the Cullens

i loved the part with "eh", i am canadian and that always bugs me when people think that is what we always say.

This is a great story, i love it.



Author's Response:

That's actually based on something that happened to me the first time I went to San Francisco. I was livid when the guy said 'eh' and snickered at me. I nearly punched him in the face. Talk about Canadian politeness, huh? ;)

Thanks for the review! I always love knowing people are reading and liking the story, but moreover, that there are other Canadians enjoying my story, too! :)

~Fatima

Reviewer: hbayer (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 08:01 PM · On: Christmas with the Cullens

This was a great chapter! I'm starting to get nervous about when James finds her though! Looking forward to the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Be nervous! He's coming closer and closer!

Thanks for your review!

~Fatima

Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 07:43 PM · On: Christmas with the Cullens

great chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks! Hope you're still reading...it's getting more intense!

~Fatima

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 07:12 PM · On: Christmas with the Cullens

I about peed my pants. 

Seriously. 

BAD NEWS Bells =[ 



Author's Response:

:-O roh-oh!

Not exactly the reaction I was looking for, but they say any reaction is good... ;)

And yes, bad news indeed...it only gets worse...but it'll get better after... promise! ^_^

~Fatima

Reviewer: GGSophie (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 07:03 PM · On: Christmas with the Cullens

Aww too sweet! I was half expecting Edward to propose with that one comment he made. Can't wait for the next update.

 

Hope you have a blast for your anniversary, enjoy vegas :D



Author's Response:

hehe...that was the direction in which I was going...a proposal may be on the horizon... ;)

Thanks! I know I will enjoy myself, since we were there this time last year, and it was gorgeous! Thank you for reading and reviewing!!

~Fatima

Reviewer: amberdee1219 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 06:57 PM · On: Christmas with the Cullens

Ready to see James bite the bullet, figuratively or literally would be okay with me!  But I think the families reaction went well!



Author's Response:

lol I think everyone agrees with you on that one...James will get his, not to worry...

Stay tuned!!

~Fatima

Reviewer: katherinecullenxx (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 07:40 AM · On: Inevitabilities

i live near toronto :)

love this story! i love protective edward

Reviewer: rara avis (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2010 07:43 PM · On: Inevitabilities

update, update, update!!!

Reviewer: twilight lover (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2010 11:53 AM · On: Inevitabilities

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!! OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG ... AHHHHHHH ... Poor Carlisle ... what is he going to think when he finds out the picture is missing? What is going to happen?

I love that Bella is pregnant but it makes me incredibly nervous and scared ... I hope that Carlisle realizes his mishap and warns Bella and Edward.

Reviewer: jemm101 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 04:35 PM · On: Inevitabilities

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