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Reviews For Victim
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2011 06:47 PM · On: All-Time Low

Wow funny; I'm already reading most of those stories you've suggested! (or have them saved to favorites)   Do we have great taste or what?!

Wowza...James is going off the deep end! Actually Lusting after his 'dead' wife?!? Stalking her, taking in her scent...having to jack-off 2ce a day... O.O wow. And the baby she's carrying isn't even his & he's Still hott for her!

Sick-o...

*swoon* even thru HIS disturbed eyes, E & B are cute  ^__^ 

Reviewer: Cailley Rachelle (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2011 04:58 PM · On: All-Time Low

Love it! He is fucking off his rocker. I cannot wait for more! I wonder who gets to kill him, or critically hospitalize him... More :) Pleeaasseee? I am not above begging ;)

Reviewer: shaqbarcalis (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2011 03:32 PM · On: All-Time Low

Awesome!!!

Reviewer: Tammygrrrl (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2011 03:09 PM · On: All-Time Low

Can't wait for the outtake!

And there are really only 2 regular chapters left???

Reviewer: BlueAngel145 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2011 11:35 AM · On: All-Time Low

cant wait - love ur story

Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2011 10:59 AM · On: All-Time Low

That was great getting inside James' head...  but i hope he can't go threw with want he wants to do to Bella/Marie.  Can't wait fo rmore

Reviewer: chy3 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2011 10:39 AM · On: All-Time Low

Hmmm... You actually had me thinking there for a minute that he was going to turn around and go back to Boston. But then you broke my heart. ;) 

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2011 10:29 AM · On: All-Time Low

James is something else....I can't wait to see him get what he deserves.

I can't wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: Humble (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2011 10:24 AM · On: All-Time Low

I really hope that Carlisle is working behind the scene and stops James before he harms Bella or her baby

Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2011 10:20 AM · On: All-Time Low

James is a freakin' maniac.  I am looking forward to the confrontation (with my fingers firmly over my eyes.)

Reviewer: Kristina413 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2011 10:18 AM · On: All-Time Low

OWWWWWWW, CANT WAIT TIL THE NEXT ONE

Reviewer: Kristal_Victoria (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2011 10:12 AM · On: All-Time Low

woah! james is one messed up loser!

Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2011 08:29 AM · On: All-Time Low

Wow... that is a trip... he is one crazy crazy man... how is Bella gonna get herself out of this one?

Reviewer: IssaBissa (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2011 08:29 AM · On: All-Time Low

good job so far! Love it!

Reviewer: cullenmother05 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2011 07:32 AM · On: All-Time Low

you never fail to amaze and provide a thrilling read. He is sick and out of his fuckin mind. him being inher house was creepy.  Your good at crazy huney, shall I be afraid of what I say? lmao just kidding. hurry update pls because mu nails are taking a killing here if I have to wait, I hope this year is being good to you and cant wait for more.



Author's Response:

hehehehe this review made my day!! Thanks!! And it's a bit scary how 'good at crazy' I am apparently...you aren't the first one to say that...hmmm...don't be scared...I'm pretty sure I'm not crazy...although don't ask my hubby that...he may contradict me! hehe

Thanks again for reading and reviewing!

~Fatima

Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2011 06:52 AM · On: All-Time Low

Wow, he is stone cold crazy!  I hope he got a disease from Vicwhoria



Author's Response:

hahahaha LOVE that!! He probably did...I'll think about which one, though... ;)

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Means a lot! :)

~Fatima

Reviewer: Rayday (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2011 06:50 AM · On: All-Time Low

I'm both excited and nervous to find out what happens next in your story. I hope someone takes care of James, once and for all.

Great chapter.



Author's Response:

I'm glad it made you excited and nervous! that was the general idea... ;)

Thanks for reading!

~Fatima

Reviewer: smartin47 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2011 06:21 AM · On: All-Time Low

OMG I love this story but I don't want to read Jame POV anymore.  I am ready for Edward and Bella again!



Author's Response:

hehe sorry!! It appears James isn't everyone's favourite, but he needs to have his side told...don't worry...only one more chapter with his POV... ;)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~Fatima

Reviewer: Lisa254 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2011 12:49 PM · On: Safe Distance

Wow, amazing job getting the creepy stalker mood across. Bella, Edward and Emmett should pay more attention to their instincts! 

I loved the Edward/Emmett interactions! I was laughing out loud, lol. Gotta love Emmett! And it's nice that Rose is being a good friend to Bella. I never liked how she was always such a bitch in the original books. 

Oh, and I love going to the Ex! He, he :-)

Looking forward to reading more! 



Author's Response:

Sooo sorry for the delay in replying to your review!

Emmett is quite awesome, I must say...and I agree with you about Rosalie's interaction with Bella in the books...hated that she disliked her for practically no reason...

Woot woot to the Ex! Haven't been in years, but that doesn't diminish my appreciation for it as a Torontonian summer staple! :)

Thanks for reading and reviewing! (and when should we expect another chapter of your story??)

~Fatima

Reviewer: joeybb (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2011 12:01 AM · On: A Loss

Powerful stuff! x

Reviewer: Maddycullen (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2011 11:16 AM · On: A New Friend

Awh i'm glad Marie (Bella) is finally rid of James! The Cullens are so kind to help her! Amazing chapter! Hopefully some Bella Edward Love soon.... :)

Reviewer: Maddycullen (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2011 11:00 AM · On: A Loss

AMAZING!! I'm already loving this story! I hope Marie gets away form awful James! :)

Reviewer: shegoddess (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2011 08:12 AM · On: Safe Distance

i hope it is a girl!!!



Author's Response:

oooo we'll find out in a week when the next chapter is posted...yup, chapter 26 is ready to go...

Enjoy!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~Fatima

Reviewer: shegoddess (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2011 06:45 AM · On: On the Move

a van down by the river. haha



Author's Response:

Yes!! You got it! :)

Love that I'm not the only one who remembers that skit!

Glad you found my story! Thank you for reading and reviewing!

~Fatima

Reviewer: chy3 (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2011 05:02 PM · On: Safe Distance

When I first got my license and my car I was forced to learn a stick shift. In the winter! Sucked hard core but oh well. I agree with your assessment. 

IT'S A BOY. Just cuz I'm a sucker for little boys. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for agreeing with me! :) And my brother taught me on his little hatchback Civic...it was super fun! Haven't done it in years, but I'm sure if I was forced to drive stick again, it wouldn't be a problem for me.

And...hmmm...you may be right...we'll find out in chapter 26... ;) (it'll be up in a week)

Thanks, hun!

~Fatima

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