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Reviewer: Rimlis (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2010 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 4

Dear Justine

I chanced upon your story today and LOVE IT sooooo much. I hope so much that you will write more from EPOV in canon style, So much of the Twilight Saga to enjoy still from his fascinating viewpoint. Edward and the Cullens are so interesting aren't they. Edward is a canvas waiting to be drawn upon, brought to life and completed. I love the depth you've given him in such a plausable way in your story, his worry and stress, the longing, the uncertainty, his adoration and love of Bella. I felt it all in your writing. I so enjoyed how you've given him an older maturity but matched it with the uncertainty and desires of an adolescent still. Thank you for sharing your talent and look forward to more.

Reviewer: Chellie (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2010 07:29 AM · On: Chapter 4

I really like the way you've written Edward here. This is really good, and definitely like Edwrad to overreact that way -- as much as he doesn't see it as overreacting. And I like how he comes to the conclusion to accept the unacceptable, as you've so eloquently put it. Forcing himself to stay put, not to sprint after her and force her back. And the quotes are perfect as well, I can definitely imagine Edward using them.

Great job!

Reviewer: Anya Cullen (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 04:40 AM · On: Chapter 4

I love reading Edward point of views. Personally, I like him much better than Bella, because he cares so much for her, and I don't think he realizes it. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: anniebme (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 2

i like the way you put edward's responses mixed in with angela's thoughts, it flows nicely and gives a unique perspective / realization.

Reviewer: beck943 (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 07:12 AM · On: Chapter 4

Very well written, and a thoroughly enjoyable read :-)

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 4

I really enjoyed theses four chapters. They were brilliant insight into Edward's mind. The poor guy, he was so tortured and worried about her. This was very well done. I loved it!

Reviewer: AmberrrJune (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 4

I think that Bella is dumb for the need to run to Jake like that.

Reviewer: AmberrrJune (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 3

I love that quote.

Reviewer: AmberrrJune (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 04:55 PM · On: Chapter 2

Always enjoy Edwards thought pattern, I like when he's jealous and keeps arguing with himself.

Reviewer: AmberrrJune (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 05:14 AM · On: Chapter 1

i like edwards thought pattern

Reviewer: izziey (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 10:40 AM · On: Chapter 4

i love how you ended this. i think you did a great job getting in edward's head. i often thought that although he was over a hundred years old, he was truly a teenager.

Reviewer: izziey (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 3

i really enjoyed that chapter, and i like your additions (burning her clothes he he), but i do miss her comment about angela being a witch.

Reviewer: Jamieson (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 05:28 AM · On: Chapter 4

I loved this - you have a knack for really getting into that boy's head! It definitely changes the perspective on his behavior - while I've always been able to see his actions in those instances as him just being overly cautious about Bella, the way you've written it here really drives home that point. Great job!

Reviewer: claw (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 09:25 AM · On: Chapter 4

I like the energetic tone you've set. Hope to read more.

Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 01:16 AM · On: Chapter 4

Wonderful insight into Edward's mind!

Reviewer: twilightgirly12 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 01:06 AM · On: Chapter 4

i really like this story. i've always wondered what edward would have thought during all of this. keep up the good work=)

Reviewer: mei-lin (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 12:52 AM · On: Chapter 4

very well done!

Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 01:59 PM · On: Chapter 4

That was absolutely fabulous! I don't think there was one errant word in any of the chapters!

Reviewer: popola (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 11:03 AM · On: Chapter 3

And that's why some fanfic are soooo much better than the original! Sigh...

Thank you.

Reviewer: Mo40 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 04:34 AM · On: Chapter 3

Great! I'm really liking the story. Please update soon. xx

Reviewer: tatie87 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 3

I love this particular Eclipse story line. I always wanted Edward's POV, it was better than I imagined in this story. Great little short story.

Reviewer: Cathy (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 04:20 AM · On: Chapter 3

Hey Justine I really liked this ! i always thought edward was very overprotective on the border to possesive but I think you managed to rationalize his behaviour ! It was well written and I enjoyed it very much.

Thanks for writing it ,

Yours, Cathy

Reviewer: Hev99 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 09:38 PM · On: Chapter 2

This is great so far, it sort of helps to see it from his POV cos I kind of resented him trying to stop her friendship with Jake in the books.

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2009 04:44 AM · On: Chapter 3

Great story.

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 03:41 PM · On: Chapter 3

Loved it! Still, I feel like Bella needs a reality check!

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