Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 12:21 PM · On: Saturday 1st January 2005 - 6:37pm
Poor Bella. I feel her pain.
I can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 12:21 PM · On: Saturday 1st January 2005 - 6:37pm
Poor Bella. I feel her pain.
I can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: lenny7 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 12:17 PM · On: Saturday 1st January 2005 - 6:37pm
nice stuff, keep going please
Reviewer: miaokuancha (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 12:13 PM · On: Saturday January 1st 2005 - 12:35am (V)
nice work with teenage voice in her diary.
Reviewer: Autumnmissa (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 12:10 PM · On: Saturday 1st January 2005 - 6:37pm
Hmm, so Forks it is? So Bella has a mental block, a vocal block AND physical scars? I am interested in seeing puppy-dog Newton react to her. More please.
Reviewer: lanamoosh (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 11:29 AM · On: Saturday 1st January 2005 - 1:30pm
I'm interested in seeing where your story idea goes, but it might be helpful to find someone who can help you through the grammatical difficulties. I found it very distracting. I have great respect for anyone who shares their story, so I hope you take this the right way. Good luck on future chapters.
Reviewer: Miramac (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 10:06 AM · On: Saturday 1st January 2005 - 1:30pm
It's pretty good. Creepy psychiatrist, though. Is he going to suggest a "change of scene" for Bella? 'Cause that would be a cop out on his part. He's supposed to help her, not dump her on someone else!
Of course my ranting doesn't really matter since this is speculation.
I'll have to wait before giving it a rating. But, so far, so good!
Reviewer: Twilightlurrvver (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 09:55 AM · On: Saturday 1st January 2005 - 1:30pm
i really like it!!
quite a good fan-fic so far and am gllad that it will be a big one.
i support u!!
Reviewer: mkd (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 09:38 AM · On: Saturday 1st January 2005 - 1:30pm
that was heaps cool, cant wait till the rest is up!
Reviewer: mkd (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 09:33 AM · On: Saturday January 1st 2005 - 12:35am (V)
i thought that was really good. please keep going think the idea of the story was awesome.
Reviewer: Soila (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 08:33 AM · On: Saturday 1st January 2005 - 1:30pm
Dr. West seems.. like an asshole. Does he think that she can't see too? *shake head* I understand her sour mood, I would have been like that too. I'm glad you thought of her mood, I'm sure it will be an effect later in the story. Is the hole story written from Bella's diary, or is it written in both actions and diary?
Reviewer: AngelicPegasus (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 06:41 AM · On: Saturday 1st January 2005 - 1:30pm
Very interesting, can't wait to see where you'll go with this.
Reviewer: FairyAsylum (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 05:44 AM · On: Saturday 1st January 2005 - 1:30pm
It's good. It's needs more plot. But it's good. Keep it up.
Reviewer: sassyf (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 05:34 AM · On: Saturday 1st January 2005 - 1:30pm
I am so curious as to what happened to her...and of course I can't wait for you to meet Edward!!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 04:48 AM · On: Saturday 1st January 2005 - 1:30pm
Good chapter. I can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: giulietta85 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 04:39 AM · On: Saturday 1st January 2005 - 1:30pm
the story is intriguing.. It reminds me a bit of the character Clara in "The house
of spirits" by I. Allende, one of my favourites books. If you have never read
it, I suggest you to. It is a fantastic and deeply moving story, and it could help
you understand why a person suddenly decides that she or he is not going to
talk anymore. Ciao!
Reviewer: snowwolf (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 02:41 AM · On: Saturday 1st January 2005 - 1:30pm
Ah very nice! The plot is unfolding. The death of who? What accident? hahaha we shall find out!
Reviewer: snowwolf (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 02:37 AM · On: Saturday January 1st 2005 - 12:35am (V)
different start to different fanfictions i have read. sounds good so far.
Reviewer: Carly_Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 01:51 AM · On: Saturday 1st January 2005 - 1:30pm
I think it's awesome you just need more CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: daddys_little_cannibal (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 12:57 AM · On: Saturday 1st January 2005 - 1:30pm
I like it. I'm really curious as to what happened to bella though....... so I'm gonna go ahead and say what everybody does and tell you to update as I add this story to my favorites!!!
Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 12:26 AM · On: Saturday 1st January 2005 - 1:30pm
I just love Bella's description of Dr. West. I guess Bella's mind is protecting her from some horror that killed her friend. Is she mute because of survivor's guilt?
Reviewer: Autumnmissa (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 11:45 PM · On: Saturday 1st January 2005 - 1:30pm
Will this all be in diary form? School soon? more plz
Reviewer: nessiebells (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 11:45 PM · On: Saturday 1st January 2005 - 1:30pm
My question is when can you get MORE up.LOL I cant wait to read some more. Good job.
Reviewer: stargrl678 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 11:32 PM · On: Saturday 1st January 2005 - 1:30pm
poor Bella! i can't wait for her to meet Edward!
Reviewer: ady (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 10:51 PM · On: Saturday January 1st 2005 - 12:35am (V)
1st review on this site!
I've tried not to start reading new fanfics lately because I don't have too much time, but I read the summary of this one and thought that this idea was really good.
I really love this idea, Belle being mute and Edward helping her to open up to the world. There isn't too much to say right now, since it's still the very beginning, I'll wait to read more to write a real review.
I hope we'll hear more from Bella than what she writes in her journal, I'm really looking forward to see where you are going with this story.
Great start, keep it on this way!
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