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Reviewer: twimommy (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 12:55 PM · On: Chapter 10
You need to review how to use commas or have someone edit for you. It's sometimes distracting. I'm enjoying your story very much, though, and I'll still enjoy it even if you don't fix your commas!
Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 12:54 PM · On: Chapter 10
Awesome the resolution is back on! I am very excited to see what Forks High has in store for her. This is going to get even more intense I do believe, but I am very much excited for it. Especially with the way you write. It seems to in just a short diary entry to completely pull a person into Bella's world. I'll be patiently waiting. Happy writing.
Reviewer: sassyf (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 10
Poor Bella. I can't wait to see what happens at school. I'm hoping for Edward to come to the rescue of course!!
Reviewer: Autumnmissa (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 10
urg, so the next entry is school? I am excited, if you can't tell. :) More please.
Reviewer: MidnightSapphires (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 10
Longer chapters!!!! PLEASE! (It's a good story)
Thanks!
~Sapphire
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 10:38 AM · On: Chapter 10
Well, can't wait for school!!!!!!!!!!!!!And Edward!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: WickedMind1901 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 10:36 AM · On: Saturday 1st January 2005 - 1:30pm
This dr. West fellow is a real ass whole. Lol, anyways good story! :-)
Reviewer: Abfabany (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 10:21 AM · On: Saturday January 1st 2005 - 12:35am (V)
I am really enjoying this story. I like the format and it also gives you some free space for expression; since it's a diary, you don't have to worry so much about sentence structure (commenting on previous review). However, I do wish the plot would pick up some. I feel like its taking forever to get to the good stuff! Regardless, I am still looking forward to the next chapter. Keep it coming!
Reviewer: mysticsavantpixie58 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 10
i really wish the chapters weren't so short. at least put 2 entries or something but i want more!!!
Reviewer: rengisol (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 08:46 AM · On: Chapter 9
First off, sorry I didn't review previous chapters. The story is good. I am looking forward to seeing how the Cullen's are introduced and incorporated into the strory. Keep up the good work!
Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 03:47 PM · On: Chapter 9
i like it... i really like it... i saw it earlier and passed it up and decided to give it a chance tonight and i love it... it's very different... can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: nothing_is_as_it_seems (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 12:52 AM · On: Chapter 9
hey loved this chapter too - i like this story and really feel for Bella how she hates attention entirely and she gets loads of it becuase of her Mutness :( poor Bella. hopefully another great update is coming soon :)
Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 9
My gosh this is heartbreaking. I could slap that dumb flight attendant! I am guessing just guessing this is going to proceed with people picking on her at school and Edward coming to the rescue?!?! Either way I'm excited about it. I am happy to be getting to the meat and tators so to speak of this story. I really like it. It is a very interesting plot.
Reviewer: roze (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 02:01 AM · On: Chapter 9
good chapter i like it.
Reviewer: Sweetheartwithfangs (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 12:32 AM · On: Chapter 9
Please bring out Edward soon! Bella really needs him. (or so I think.)
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 11:32 PM · On: Chapter 9
Nice
Reviewer: sweetcrimefighter (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 9
Love it!
Reviewer: sassyf (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 03:28 PM · On: Chapter 9
Yeah...Im glad she is finally in forks!!
Reviewer: TaintedDarkInuShemeeko (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 9
I'm very interested to see what will happen when Bella meets Edward at school. Especially since she has the whole mute thnig going on for her. this story has my attention so keep them coming when you can.
TaintedDarkInuShemeeko
Reviewer: Autumnmissa (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 9
School tomm? please?? hmm...how does she communicate then?
Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 9
No, I like this story and the underlying idea, but if it just took you so many chapters to get Bella to Forks, how long will this story be? It would outshine Meyer's book! But at least that one could be read from the beginning to the end.
You must have pity of your readers! Please consider that we all read also other stories (I have 50 favorites) and one tends to forget what happened previously while waiting for a new chapter and maybe have to re-read the previous ones....
Please fasten the pace a little, if you can..
Reviewer: FairyAsylum (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 9
That was good. There's progress and I still don't get what's going on with bella and the "mutism". Can't wait for the update.
Reviewer: Elisabethe (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 9
Hey thanks for the UD! Unfortunatly I am starting to get really bored! Your theme and plot are great, however, I think you should try expanding it a bit for the chapters to come. Iknow this Bella is your Bella, I just wished she would be a little more optimistic. Well once again thanks for the UD!
Reviewer: SecretlyObsessed (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 01:49 PM · On: Chapter 9
Loving it! I'm so ready for some Edward action I might die in anticipation!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 01:40 PM · On: Chapter 9
OK. I'm liking this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ready for her to met Edward!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!And I'm HOPING my previous guess willl be that in your story, Edward CAN read Bella's mind, so he is the only one who can tell what she is thinking
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