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Reviewer: Beth818 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 12:27 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

love love love it!!!!! Update like u had the speed of a vampire please!

Author's Response:

LOL!  I promise.  Teaser will go up on the thread tonight...

Reviewer: LisaLoo (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 12:27 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

So good. The phoenix analogy is perfect. Edward is taking baby steps to emotional maturity. I'm seriously dreading the code scarlet. As much as I squeal when I see you've updated, I do kind of dread opening the email. Thanks again for sharing your angsty gifts.



Author's Response:

LOL!  I think that's the right reaction.  I'd be a little nervous too.

No Code Scarlet for 20, but some pimp-smacking of our boy Edward!

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: sweetishbubble (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

Gosh............. I dn't know who i feel more sorry for in this chapter: Carlisle for knowing what could happen or Edward for not knowing anything. I mean, he knows that Bella's injured, but... man, can't wait to see what happens! :)



Author's Response:

Oh, his response when he finds out is bad, but when he *sees* her for the first time... Make sure you have Prozac or vodka or some such.  My poor beta told me she cried all day...

Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Sweetheartwithfangs (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

AHHHHHHHHH!!!!I mean it this time who ever has the remote control if you don't give it up now I will retreive it by force!!! *munches on twizzler, while opening a box of junior mints* Please, please, please make it 4 chapters this week! I<3 your story!! tell me how to vote and you'll probably nominated for as many awards as I can give you. This story is awesome, albeit the chapters are a little short (which drives me insane. I am hyped for the next chapter! Junior mints-check, popcorn-check, twizzlers-check, reese's pieces-check, reeses cups- check, marshmellows-check, chocolate-?. I'll get some during this (hopefully brief) intermission. Please update soon!



Author's Response:

LOL!  I will have the next one up soon, as well as the links to the nominations sites.  Voting hasn't begun yet.

Hun, I know the chaps are short, but I know you understand why.  The characters just tell you what they need to and fade to black...

We'll be in the hospital in the next chapter.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: drkvctry (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 12:22 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

thank you for updatung so reguarly..this would be sheer torture if made to wait

oh and thanks for the link to Cullen Robotics..hysterical!



Author's Response:

Cullen Robotics totally rocks my socks.  Sexy and funny:)

And I try to keep it up.  I think you can keep expecting 2 chapters a week (this one had THREE, so far!).

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: TLP (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

I'm glad Edward's been able to man-up (as much as can really be expected in this situation)

My heart breaks for what Charlie's about to go through though -- to find his baby girl only to discover THIS condition (and then to see Edward there. Oh boy)


Thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

I've written the Charlie confrontation and yes, massive code Red. 

But Edward will continue on his journey to manning up.  He's no where near where he needs to be... yet.

Thanks for review!

Reviewer: southern belle (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

I will be honest I suck at remembering to review. But I love this story and you have created one helluva emotional ride. I hope that Bella and the baby will be okay and I hope that she will forgive Edward and he will in turn forgive himself. I love this and can't wait to see what you come up with next.



Author's Response:

Hey, I am just glad you let me know how you feel now!  I am so glad you are enjoying the story.

Things will go far downhill from here, but there *will* be a happy ending.

And the baby is right as rain.  Promise.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: tigger12 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

oh my god! hurry!! :)



Author's Response:

We will be in the hospital in the next chapter.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: amkh (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 12:19 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

I really hate the endings for these chapters. they are always cliffies and I really wanna read more :(



Author's Response:

Hang in there.  They aren't true cliffies - just the end of what that character had to say.

I do update quickly, so you shouldn't have to wait long!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: AMusefan77 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 12:18 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

Dr. Volterra!  How clever.  I really love this story.  I've been poring over it every time you post.  The suspense is great and I can't wait to get to Bella and Edward's reunion.  :) Please update soon.  



Author's Response:

I always do (try) to update quickly!

We will be in the hospital with much more news in the next few chapters!

Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: latinabeauty70 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 12:18 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

Wow! Again your writing is amazing. Carlisle and Esme are amazing.

Hey what is the website to vote for your fic!



Author's Response:

LOL!  Voting starts at the end of the month, so I'll get the sites out to you in the next few A/N's.

Thank you for all of your support!

Reviewer: oceanwaters2006 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 12:17 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

Carlizzle keeping the faith....I feel bad for him when he has to seperate from Esme...made me choke up.

OMG! You pimped my win! What is wrong with you?? LMAO!

Love you!

XOXOXOXOXOXOOXOX Jess



Author's Response:

HELL to the yes, I pimped your win.  You rock, girl! 

Thanks for all you do!

Reviewer: Panda1499 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 12:26 AM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell

I don't remember if I reviewed this chapter yet, so if I didn't the chapter was amazing.  The real reason for the review is to say CONGRATULATIONS on the Razzle Dazzle award nom! 

Manda



Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am still stunned!

Reviewer: nelln (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living

My heart aches reading this story.  My chest was so tight and my vision blurred with tears.  OMG it hurts me to read your story and that is sooo good!  You are so good at portraying emotions.  WOW...i'm suppose to be sleeping but I know I won't until after I've read this story to its end and checking everyday for updates



Author's Response: Just add the story to favourites and updates will come to you! I am so grateful for your comments and your review!

Reviewer: IsabellaSCullen (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End

This story is truly amazing.  You definitely have me on the edge of my seat.  I can't wait to read the next chapter. :]



Author's Response: Enjoy! There is so much angst to come, but it will be okay in the end! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Twilightrocks1984 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell

OMG wow ! I am in tears but they are good tears. I can not wait to see what the next chapter will have to bring. Update again soon please. I can not wait to see what Bella Will have to say once she sees Edward



Author's Response: The next chapter has already been submitted! I am glad you like the story and have reviewed!

Reviewer: Twilightrocks1984 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell

OMG wow ! I am in tears but they are good tears. I can not wait to see what the next chapter will have to bring. Update again soon please. I can not wait to see what Bella Will have to say once she sees Edward



Author's Response:

The next chapter has already been submitted. 

The question is, will Bella be able to say anything when Edward arrives...

Thank you for reviewing.

Reviewer: butterfly_kisses (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell

OMG!!!! UPDATE SOON!!! THIS WAS MIND BLOWING!!! YOU ARE A GENIUS!!!



Author's Response: Wow! Thank you! A new chapter will be up soon!

Reviewer: lucyv (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 07:57 AM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell

Please update soon and I promise I'll call my second child after you - no matter if it's a boy or a girl:)



Author's Response: Lol! I don't know if a boy named Ellie will survive high school! Next chapter should be up soon.

Reviewer: lucyv (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 07:40 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary

Edward smelled like hell? C'mon! That's just impossible!:) That guy ALWAYS smells divine:) No matter what!



Author's Response: Lol! Stinky Edward is better than no Edward at all!

Reviewer: lucyv (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 07:27 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

awesome! i knew they wouldn't get their happily ever after that easily. the story wouldn't be that captivating after all.

but... i know you're a good person and everybody'll be fine in the end.

thanks for a fantastic, fabulous, breathtaking, incredible story again!



Author's Response: Nothing will be easy from here on in, but that just makes the happy ending more satisfying! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: lucyv (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 07:01 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Grandfather

I cry all the time reading your story - that's a first for me.

Oh, and I love your notes:) - licking ice cream off a naked Edward... yeah... gonna review every single chapter:)

 



Author's Response: Reviews are appreciated! Hop to the thread for nekkid Cullens!

Reviewer: ejdisme (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 06:58 AM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell

Uhm, I. love. you.

This! Oh my god, this!

Is pure amazingment. That's not a word. But i don't care.

Just, argh! Beautiful, heart wrentching.

I had to read so many of these chapters over and over again because my tears would blur the letters.

Congratulations on such an awesome, beautiful story.



Author's Response: Oh my gosh! What an amazing review! Thanks so much for reading and letting me know your thoughts!

Reviewer: lucyv (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 05:19 AM · On: Chapter 7 - Enough

awesome, simply awesome. love it! a story that will make any girl happy! you're my Favorite Author - now and forever.



Author's Response: Wow! Thank you for the amazing compliment, and the review!

Reviewer: Juliamine (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 07:35 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell

Such an emotional story.  It really pulls the reader into the moment, and takes you on a powerful emotional roller coaster.  Bella is so sad, and Edward riddled with guilt.  I feel for both families living through months of hell.  Excellent writing!  I am thrilled I found your story, and am anxious for updates! 



Author's Response: I am so glad you found us and that you are enjoying the story! Thanks for the review!

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