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Reviewer: venomousgal (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 01:08 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

Fucking wonderful Ellie!  The worst is coming....I love it!  I absolutely love it!



Author's Response: It absolutely is! Thank you so much for all you do!

Reviewer: Kina666 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

Ahh!! Finally the hospital chapter is approaching! Can't wait!

Reviewer: twitina (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

I really need the next chapter...really!! ;)

 

Angst - but finally some action!



Author's Response: This needed to happen. There is almost too much action from this point on. Grab onto these chapters as relief. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: BethBSB5 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

So glad that Edward is stepping up to his responsibilities! Thanks for the quick updates.



Author's Response: Edward will turn into the man we hoped he would be. It just takes time. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: sjones5199 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

So good!  Can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

It will be up soon.

Thank you!

Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 01:01 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

PLEASE don't give Bella too much abdominal trauma, if you know what I mean!  Love your story, it makes my heart ache!



Author's Response:

It's a long road, but they will all be okay.  Promise.

Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: guccisassy (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

I love the story, but you know in real life Carlisle would not be dictating when Edward would see Bella, even if his ideas where the smartest.

I just want Edward to get to Bella and put their lives back together!



Author's Response:

Ah, but this is fic, or none of this would work!

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: jlou10dun (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

so many different povs for this chapter/time period!



Author's Response:

There are a lot of POV's to cover, some you haven't heard from yet.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: swingate (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 12:57 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

WOW, really you are amazing!  It was so terribly sad, but very hopefull for the future.  It is amazing how much depth you are showing us in each character. 

Keep up the speedy posting!  LOL, you have yet to make me cry!  (Take that as a challenge if you like!)

Susan



Author's Response:

Challenge away!  If the reviews keep coming in like this, I feel OBLIGATED to post fast.  You are wonderful.

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: dancing_in_my_underwear (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 12:56 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

Okay not as sad as I was worried about I didn't need the tissues this time but I suspect that with the next chapter they will be required so I'm gonna put the box next to my computer lol. Love CPOV and I can't wait to find out what happens when they get to the hospital!



Author's Response:

They will finally make it to the hospital in the next chapter, so there is angst to come...

Thanks so much for your support.

Reviewer: Amillyna (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 12:55 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

Great chapter, as usual. I'm so happy you were nominated for all those awards! I can't tell you how excited I get when I get an email saying this story has been updated. Keep up the great work, you are so talented!



Author's Response:

I am so grateful that you like the story and believe in me!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 12:54 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

I feel all this anxiety from them all. There has to light and happiness soon.



Author's Response:

Alas, it will be a while before puppie and rainbows, but it will come!

Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: lulabelljane (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 12:53 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

As much as I love their plan...and how much they want to make things right with Bella and all of them...I just have this feeling that something else is going to throw the whole plan into a crazy tailspin....ahhh! Especially once Charlie gets there and he knows what happened and why Bella left. Sooo much drama still to come!

I don't know about you but I need some sweets....chocolate chip cookies??? Brownies??? Both?? Yeah, both will work for me. :P



Author's Response:

Yup.  Crazy tailspins ahoy!  There is far more to come.

And Charlie.  Yikes...

YUMMMMMY.  Choccie cookies?  On Nekky Cullens?

 

 

Reviewer: flute_genevive (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

I have, no lie, been waiting for this chapter all day long! I'm so glad that you posted. I adore this story, as you well know, and I cannot wait to see what a) Bella has to say about Edward being back and b) what Edward has in store to redeem himself to Bella. More please, preferably before I go crazy.

Author's Response:

LOL!  I will get it out quickly! 

I am so grateful for your playlist!  It's AMAZING.  Thank you!

Reviewer: tisaveeone (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

lightening speed woman...lightening speed.

that hospital chapter is gonna be so emotional...but I really want to know how bad off Bella and the baby are...is it a boy or a girl? So many questions.

My real concern is when charlie shows up. I can see him trying to bar edward from seeing bella and the baby. now, because edward is the father, charlie really doesn't have any say about what goes on with the baby, but when it come to bella that might be a different story, he may be able to keep him away from her...oh my there are so may ways that this could go really badly.



Author's Response:

I think Charlie will surprise you, in the end.  But he'll probably be right on target at the beginning!

There is *so* much more left to tell.  Too much.

I will post more soon!

Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: saranic (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

So the plan sounds good, but things don't always work out like they are planned.  I am so worried about Bella's reaction to the Cullens being there.  She mos def doesn't need any stress, I am sure it will be a slow process.

Something stuck with me from the last chapter.  When Esme told Edward he could be a child for a little longer, I just keep thinking how Bella never got that chance and never will again.  My heart just ache's for her and I hope she is open to what is offered to her.

Excellent update! :)



Author's Response:

Oh, you made me teary with that, but you're right.  Bella's childhood is gone and she won't have the opportunity to grieve.

Hang in there.  You will get more soon!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: AS Blythe (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 12:42 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

Good choice on POV here--I think Carlisle's narrative provided a good overview heading into the reuniting and likely drama there. Still loving it, keep up the great work.



Author's Response:

I needed him to tie everything together before we hit the hospital in the next chapter.

Thank you so much for the review!

Reviewer: Iwant2sparkle (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

Way to man up, ED!  Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

He will take quite the journey.  Hang in there.

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

Arrgggh!  The suspense is killing me!  Loved the chapter though, but my heart went out to Alice in this one.  When you described her sitting in the back seat, rocking and singing to herself I just wanted to cry.

I'm proud of Edward and the way he is handling this so far.

Another well written chapter.  Can't wait for more.

I'm thinking the next chapter is either from Alices' POV or Carlisles?  Mind you, I would like to get inside Edwards head right now and see what it is he is thinking.



Author's Response:

You'll get lots more Edward, although not right away.

I'm so grateful for all of your support and reviews.  Thank you so much.

Reviewer: secamimom (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

Loved it!  Can't wait for the Code Scarlett even though I know it will kill me!  Looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

No Code Scarlet in the next chap.  More of an Orange.  Lots of info though.  And lots of questions.

Thanks for your support and reviews!

Reviewer: stupidsuckedinreader (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 12:32 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

Love this story. Cannot wait for the next chapter. Must say I prefer shorter chapters and a more frequently updated story vs. longer chapters and updated once in a blue moon.



Author's Response:

Thanks:)  I'm glad someone understands!

I write the short chapters because of the nature of the story.  It's about the emotion, however long that takes.

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: just me (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 12:31 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

I am so enraptured with your story. I am checking my email from my hotel, just to see if there is an update. Can't wait for the next.

Author's Response:

YAY!  I am glad you are enjoying it!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: just me (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 12:31 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

I am so enraptured with your story. I am checking my email from my hotel, just to see if there is an update. Can't wait for the next.

Author's Response:

Oh my gosh!  I am so honoured!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: iponeddyou (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

Okay so, Alice singing and crying — Heartbreaking.
I liked hearing from Daddy C! And I like our Phoenix.
I didn't expect a sudden happy ending! I knew there was gonna be more code red's. Even a great lifestyle can suddenly go down the drain.

I'm anxious for the next chapter! I don't know who we will see next. But I knew I should invest in some kleenex. Especially if we get the next chapter before Wensday. xD I'm so emotional.

Keep up the excellent writing! You rock!

XOXO - Cherolyn



Author's Response:

You should have it before then.  We'll be in the hospital by then, so hang in there.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: chloey24 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 12:28 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

Hmm. Can we have another Carlisle and an Esme or Charlie POV? I'd really like to know Charlie's reaction to the Cullen's arriving on his doorstep!



Author's Response:

Oh, you will definitely see that.  Not quite yet, but it's written.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

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