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Reviewer: Hollywood_678 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 03:32 AM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

Carlisle and Esme's relationship was so beautifully yet understated here. I'm sure Edward will be a great Dad with such examples.



Author's Response:

They truly are wonderful role models for their children.  Their relationship is a large part of this story.

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: PLV (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 02:34 AM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

I am glad that Bella is okay. For now and I hope Carlisle can do more of an assessment on her when they get tot he hospital. Um I wonder what is goingto happen when Charlie finds out? I suppose he will not be to happy with Edward but I suppose it is par for the course. Besides Edward didn't know she was pregnant.

Please update soon.



Author's Response:

The Charlie situation will end up quite complex.  But you'll get more from the hospital in the next chapter.

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Alanna (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 02:33 AM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

i love this story! great chapter, i can't wait for the next one



Author's Response:

It should be up soon!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: tatie87 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 02:12 AM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

Great chapter. The Cullens have finally arrived in Seattle, I can't wait for them to get to the hospital.



Author's Response:

They will be there in the next chapter!

Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: 3 little cullen boys (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 11:37 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

love Esme and Carlisle



Author's Response:

They are wonderful in this story... other than letting Edward dictate their move.

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: kenziemorton (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 11:05 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

i think we should here from angela to let us know what has been going with bella anb the hospital. i want to see her reaction to edward! again you rock my socks i love this story and i love how you update more then once a week it is awesome.



Author's Response:

I am glad you are you enjoying it!  BTW, you are about to get your wish:)

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: OperationNautilus (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 10:46 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

love this chapter. Hope that all will be well. Pleeeaaase update soon!



Author's Response: I always do! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: kuntrygal (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

Great chapter!  Now, if we can keep Charlie from killing Edward when he arrives at the hospital.........



Author's Response: That is going to be difficult! Lol! I have written it and it is NOT pretty. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Abimaddevil17 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

Can't wait for the next chapter!! Update asap! I've never reviewed a story this much before but i'm totally hooked on this story!! and i need to read that hospital chapter!

Abbie :D



Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! The new chap should be up soon...

Reviewer: Twilight_Girl_Ox (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 09:59 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

great chapterr!!

update soon please..!



Author's Response: The next will be up soon. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: chasityc (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

this was a great chapter. we finally get to see edward grow some and realize what needs to be done. i can't wait to read bella's reaction to the cullens being there and the cullens reaction to bella being pregnant. its one thing to know someone's pregnant, but the see them, will still probably be shocking. especially knowing its your child/grandchild/neice or nephew



Author's Response:

You will definitely get those reactions, although at different times.

I am so grateful for your review!

Reviewer: HSE (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

cant wait to see charlies reaction to seein edward at the hospital...will a shotgun be involved?

i think next chapter might be from alices point of view...or angela

wens th next chaptr gunna be up lol



Author's Response:

Charlie will *definitely* be heard.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: spidermonkey_09 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 09:37 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

:D:D:D:D:D

i love it as always

you deserve them awards this is the most 

stunning story i have ever read and thats saying something

love it cant wait for the next chapter 

10 as always 



Author's Response:

Wow.  Thank you!  I appreciate your comments and your review!

Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

i can't wait to find out if bella and the baby is alright.....



Author's Response:

Well, I have already written the chapter where Edward meets his healthy, beautiful, baby.  If that helps.

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: sensuallyinlove (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 08:52 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

fantastic chapter!!! And congrats on your nominations, you certiantly deserve them. :) I can't wait until the next chapter. i'm bouncing up and down again so excited!!



Author's Response:

I love your enthusiasm!  Thank you so much for liking my story and for reviewing!

Reviewer: foxishot (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

Okay. Next chapter I hope to hear from Edward or Alice. Angela will be okay, but I want an insider's perception of the reunion. I'm enjoying the story a lot, and I hope you keep updating like crazy. Thanks!



Author's Response:

The lovers have a way to go, but not long now.  Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Please_BiteMe (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

Okay.. I have to post this review because I've been so addicted to reading lately that I've become a lurker! And this story has made me realize I just need to take a minute and tell all my favorite writers  how COMPLETELY WONDERFUL you are. I love this storyline. I love the way you've built up the chapters. And I can't wait for your next post. I'm so anxious to see how Bella receives her visitors... I'm sure even though she's unconcious she'll still feel her other half... but I need to read it!!! WIN! WIN! WIN! More please. 



Author's Response:

Oh my gosh.  I'm always SO grateful to hear from folks who never reviewed before but something or other triggers it.  I'm so glad you did.  It means the world to me, and I'm sure to other authors.  I write this... in it's strange but true format... for the people who love it.  I'm so grateful.  So thank you.

The next chapter should be up soon!

Reviewer: bella2k9 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 06:02 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

I love this story so much! please keep updating regularly i can't wait to find out what happens at the hospital.

x



Author's Response:

There is much left to occur.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: savemesuperman128 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

Can't wait for the next chapter. I'm excited to see who it is and what happens.



Author's Response:

It will be here soon!  On to the hospital.

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: XmissXStaceyX (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

love this story, it's so exciting! and a great story idea as well. please update soon:)

stacey



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

I appreciate the review!

Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

Oh you are just plain ole mean! :)  Carlisle POV, what next lint or maybe a mouse/rat pov???lol

Sorry had to vent!!! Can't wait to see the hosptial stuff!!!! Please post soon!!!!!



Author's Response:

LOL!  I could do mouse POV:)  (Mouse is my son's nickname.  It would probably consist of lots of "Juice?  Mama! Eat!   Love".  LOL)

The hospital will be up soon.  Promise.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: cdls1992 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

Finally!!! Can't wait to see the hospital part!!!! Plz update sooon!!!!!



Author's Response:

It will be up soon!  Teaser on the thread!

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: ejdisme (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

AHHHH!!!

I just, i neeeed to know whathappens. This is insane. I'm so nervous!!!!!

You are amazing!!!



Author's Response:

So much is about to happen...

Thank you for your review and your awesome compliment!

Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

So intense, I am so happy for lots of updates, but you still leave me constantly wanting more! :)



Author's Response:

I think that may be a good thing!

Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

"Yes.  Things may just be all right." 

What a wonderful final sentence.  With a strong family plan and Edward's new hope we can't help but feel things will be all right.  However, having lived in hurricane alley for 10 years I have also learned to feel the calm before the storm.  But what I like most about this chapter is the unity of the family.

This story is wonderful!

Sandra



Author's Response:

There is now, officially, hope.  But there is much still to overcome.  And we haven't even *seen* angst yet.  But it will be all right.  And Edward will rise to the challenge.

Thank you for all of your reviews!

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