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Reviewer: prettykisses (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix
GAH! The suspense is killing me!
EPOV PLEASE! PRETTY PRETTY PLEASE WITH A GINORMOUS CHERRY ON TOP!!!
But if we can't - I want POV to be from Alice. OOOOh... or angela.... yeah, i don't know. tough-y. Ok I will commit to a preference... Alice POV. She knows Edward inside and out so next best thing to EPOV.
You are doing an awesome job on the story. I am going to try out Cullen Robotics next to try and keep my mind off Not Like This.
Thanks for the updates! I WANT MORE!!!!
Author's Response: Well, chapter 20 is now up, so I hope you enjoy it! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Shell_Linkin (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix
Am so hooked on this story! Please please update soon, I'm out of chapters and I can't wait to see how things go down at the hospital!
Author's Response: The chapter should be up really soon. I am so glad you are enjoying it! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix
This story is just getting better and better. I am up WAY too late reading it! I would love to hear Emmett's POV...do you have a chapter with his mind speaking?
Author's Response: Yup. The chapter in which he and Esme go to get Chief Swan is from Emmett's POV. I think he'll probably get more chapters as well.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: caperves1979 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 03:21 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix
A tear in an artery! That sounds serious. Update soon. The suspense is killing me.
Author's Response: Our dear Bella is going to have a long road, but all will be well in the end.
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: edwardnbella4ever (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 02:34 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage
That Emmett just steals every chapter he's in, doesn't he? I love that Rose willingly helped in the search
Author's Response: Emmett likes to be the center of attention. Then again, you still haven't heard Jasper...
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Brie Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix
I don't normally do reviews but I started your story like 3 hours ago. My cousin suggested it and I was confused at first but now I love it. I can't believe you are leaving us not knowing if Bella is okay. You've said the baby will appear later on. Don't make us wait too long please. I know you have other chapters. Next chapter in Angelas POV, possibly. Thanks for being an amazing writter. I actually love how you write and layout everything.
Author's Response: The next chapter is already in queue for validation, so you should have it shortly. Trust me, all will be well in the end.
I am so honoured you came out to review my story. Thank you!
Reviewer: edwardnbella4ever (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 01:48 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Enough
I feel so bad for Charlie, poor man. I loved the perspectives of Charlie and Carlisle. Great job on getting into each characters headspace.
Author's Response: Both of these men are good people who love their families, but they are so very different. It was fun to write them in the same chapter.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: edwardnbella4ever (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
"Right in front of me, was a pop-up with a huge, handsome man with dark hair and dimples asking if I wanted to be his friend.
Oh, he has no clue how much I want to be his friend right now."
My two favorite characters, no doubt, Angela and Emmett. I absolutely love Angela for convincing Bella to make contact with Charlie. I hope Bella doesn't go too postal when she finds out that she contacted the Cullens. I'm sure there's the whole "she'll thank you later" aspect, as long as Bella doesn't run, but I hope poor Angela doesn't get too beat up on. She's only trying to make Bella's life better, after all.
Author's Response: Emmett is a hoot! Then again, you haven't met Jasper yet. Oh my!
I think Bella will forgive Angela. Once everything is dealt with, there will be nothing to forgive her for. Angela simply can't do this alone and Bella most certainly cannot, so Angela felt she had no choice.
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: edwardnbella4ever (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 12:30 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
"She was happy."
"It seemed so simple, in a way that made no earthly sense."
You can almost see Angela's shock and disbelief as if the whole conversation's happening in front of you. The visual of Bella is heartbreaking. You do an excellent job of painting the picture. I loved the line "Considering you live in a closet, it's beautiful." I can't wait to see the Cullen's reaction to her apartment and neighborhood.
Author's Response: Angela has a lot to take in in that scene. None of it makes any sense to her. Or to anyone else, at this point.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: nursecullen (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix
POST!!!! Love it! Hope Emoward can get it together!
Author's Response: Chapter 20 was submitted today. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Author's Response: Chapter 20 was submitted today. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: TheIsabellaCullen (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 08:48 AM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End
I just wanted to tell you how much I love this story, and I can't wait to read the next chapter. I actually might go back and re-read while I'm waiting. :)
Author's Response: Lol! It will be up soon! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: edwardnbella4ever (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 08:31 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation
“Oh look, it's God. Got any more brilliant proclamations that we can all be forced to live by?”
Absolutely brilliant! I love Emmett so much!
Author's Response: Emmett rocks! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: edwardnbella4ever (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 08:17 AM · On: Chapter 2 - The Last Day of My Life
So sad! Poor Bella :*( Poor Charlie and Renee. Edward should find out that if not for the baby, she would probably have killed herself. Currently he's realized, I think, how wrong and stupid he was to leave. He's got self loathing down pat. But I don't think he knows near the ammount of damage he did to Bella or how badly he broke her. I really want Angela to punch him.
Author's Response: He will definitely find out what kind of damage he has done. And will man up to the challenge. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: edwardnbella4ever (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 07:47 AM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End
I'm reading through it again. This story is so sad, but apparently I'm a drama queen and actually prefer the angst ridden stories to fluff (as long as there's a happy B/E ending... which you keep insisting there will be, so I'll trust you) But, like I stated previously, I'll usually only read Bella's angst. I'll usually avoid a story that centers around Edward's angst, seeing as it's his own fault for completely disregarding her thoughts and feelings, because, of course, he knows what's best for all aspects of her life. Sorry, pet peeve... ranting... I'll stop now. I loved the line " A watched pot never boils. Oh, please don't boil", and I thought the repeated thoughts, Oh, God. Oh, God.; and Not now. Not like this. were very realistic. I've had that happen, where my brain will sort of shut off and all I can do is repeat the same thought over and over. I'm itching for chapter 20, but for now I'll refrain from yelling in frustration and content myself with rereading. Happy writing:)
Author's Response: Chapter 20 was submitted today. You should have it soon. Isn't it strange that we're all so similar in times of great stress? I repeat things constantly in my head when upset!
Reviewer: my2galspal (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 07:08 AM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix
Okay, this is why I try to read only completed stories because now I'm at the end of what you have written and I gonna go batty waiting for more. Very appropriately namad chapter. I like thinking of Edward (and possibly his relationship with Bella) in light of a Phoenix. Given your indications you will not let us down in the happy department if we hold on through the mess. Please do not let us down. (Yes, there is a hint of desperation there.)
Author's Response: I promise, I will not! In fact, I was just discussing fluffy chaps at the end with me beta! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: my2galspal (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 06:46 AM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
I love what you did with Esme in this chapter. I think she had really been left out until now except for a few reactions. This portrayal was the true definition of motherhood. She demonstrated the difference between mothering and mother henning. During that conversation Esme did what any mother should, she helped her child grow up yet still demonstrated that she would always be the one person he could come to for comfort, unconditional love and understanding.
I love this story. Thank you so much for sharing it with the rest of us. I can't wait to read the next chapter even though I realize it will mean I'm caught up with the story and will have to wait for the updates just like every other Tom, Dick, and Jasper.
Author's Response: I love how Esme cam out in her chapters. She understands her children and the plight at hand. Thanks for reviewing and I submitted chapter 20 today!
Reviewer: Sweetheartwithfangs (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 06:30 AM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix
Let me say this....It's been a long weekend of waiting and waiting and waiting. It is now Monday...and you're killing me here!! I have run out of all of my candy/popcorn supplies and replenished my stock twice!! Please hit the play button and update soon!
Author's Response: Lol! The chapter is submittra! Just waiting for validation! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: my2galspal (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 03:53 AM · On: Chapter 7 - Enough
I just cannot express how much I love the multiple POVs. They provide insights that would otherwise be lost and add lots of interesting layers to the story. I'm not going to say much more because I'm just so eager to read more and find out what happens next, and who's POV it will be in.
Thank you so much for sharing this story. I just can't get enough of it.
Author's Response: Wow! Many thanks! I am grateful you see enjoying and reviewing!
Reviewer: my2galspal (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 03:27 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
Ain't Facebook a thing of beauty? Gotta go read now and see what happens next.
Author's Response: Facebook is an amazing invention! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: twilight girly 1901 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 03:27 AM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix
OME! i need an edward and bella reunion soon! this is so intense lol.
i love love LOVE your story! :]
please update lol :]
Author's Response: I will submit it today! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: my2galspal (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 02:41 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
Bringing Angela, or any other bystander for that matter, in to show us where Bella is in life right now is a stroke of genius. We already kind of know what Bella is feeling right now so the outsider perspective gives us a more well rounded look at Bella's life and state of being.
Author's Response: Angela is a stand in for Bella and Alice for Edward through much of the story. If we sat just inside the brains of the two "leads" we'd all probably be in therapy now! I try to give the story a more rounded out picture. Each of the characters are very affected by these decisions, so I want all of them to be heard.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: my2galspal (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 02:13 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation
I love the multiple POVs and the disappearance of Bella is an interesting twist. Great way to get Alice involved. Thank goodness there is one pro-active member in this family. Can't wait to read more and get even more insight into these happenings.
Author's Response: Well, I am submitting chapter 20 today, so there will be LOTS more to read!
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: my2galspal (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 01:45 AM · On: Chapter 2 - The Last Day of My Life
Wow. I think this situation would be even worse than the one Bella went through in the original book. I can understand why she would not confess her secret at that time though. If she did and he changed his mind and stayed she would never understand that it was for any reason than guilt and/or responsibility.
Thank you so much for sharing this story. I am really enjoying it so far and can't wait to go read some more.
Author's Response: I am truly glad you found us and that you are enjoying the story! Thanks for taking the time to review!
Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 12:02 AM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix
Another fabulous chapter! I'm proud of Edward pulling himself together for Bella's sake. He's going to have a rough time when he sees Bella for the first time, but I hope he can remain strong for all of them.
I'm a bit worried over Bella's reaction when she sees Edward and his family, and her father for that matter, for the first time in months. Will see go into protective mommy mode and push them all away or will she accept the fact that no one, especially Edward knew of her condition and accept her own responsibility for this mess?
Please post soon!
Author's Response: I know! There is so much to ponder!
Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: Snakehips (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix
I am loving this story. I check my email constantly to see if you have updated. I can't figure out what Edward's secret is & I am dying to see if Bella can forgive Edward. Great story. Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: I am so glad you are enjoying it! Thank you for reviewing!
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