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Reviewer: mmc74 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 01:02 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
Wow, another amazing chapter, thanks for the prompt update.
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing.
Reviewer: Laxmom (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 12:59 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
Another excellent chapter. Emotional stuff.
Can't wait to read more although your notes made me nervous...It sounds like it is about to get tough...
Author's Response: Yeah, we are back to code red next chapter. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: JessicaB923 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 12:57 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
Good for Angela
Author's Response: Angela rocks!
Reviewer: flute_genevive (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 12:54 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
Guh!
I love your Edward, he's so damn determined and so selfless all at the same time. I feel for him every second of this journey. You're doing a fantastic job at conveying the emotions. I think that's why I love this story so much; the emotions are so raw and powerful. It's like they're pouring off the screen.
And hooray for Angela. I give her major points for taking care of Bella the way she has been and grilling Edward about his intentions. She would make a great mom.
Sorry to hear that you've been sick, hope you're feeling better. In the meantime, I'll be eagerly awaiting an update. :)
Author's Response: I am recovering. Thanks for the well wishes! Edward has a long way to go, and his next chp is a killer, but he is rising to the challenge! Thanks so much for the review!
Reviewer: angmclure (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 12:28 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
Hope you get to feeling better. You still rock. Loved this chapter and all that it showed. Angela's great and can't wait for the next one.
Author's Response: I am getting over the flu! Thanks for the well wishes! The next chapter will be up soon!
Reviewer: UR_PERSONAL_HEROIN (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 12:25 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
LOL, THE COOL WHIP COVERED EDWARDS SOUNDS PRETTY GOOD!!!! HAHA, THIS WAS A GREAT CHAPTER. IT MADE EDWARD LOOK LIKE HES READY TO EXCEPT RESPONSIBLITY FOR EVERYTHING
Author's Response: Edward is slowly rising to the challenge! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: secamimom (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 12:22 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
I just wanted to let you know that this is one of those stories that I immediatley drop everything to read. I get so excited when I get the alert. Anyways, I loved this chapter. Angela is a really great friend for asking all those questions. I am glad that she is Team Edward. Edward has me in tears most of the time when he talks. i know that this is nothing and that there is more heartache to come. I hope I can handle it. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Edward has only just begun his journey. Angela helped him a lot! Thanks for the review and support. Teaser will go up tonight!
Reviewer: laylieb (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 12:12 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
I'm so glad that he finally made it to her!!! I hope that Bella realizes how hard this all has been for Edward too!!! Poor Bella, Poor Edward!!!
Author's Response: And they are only teenagers! It is going to be a tough road. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 12:08 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
I love Angela :) This is starting to get pretty angsty! I can't wait to see where you're heading with it...
Author's Response: Yup! The next chapter starts it off. Thanks so much for the review!
Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 11:50 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
That was really sweet. Can't wait to see what happens next! I love Angela too.
Author's Response: Angela so rocks! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: eliza3ame (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 11:50 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
yay edward is back, please post soon..
Author's Response: He has a way yet to go, but he is coming back. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Mom of 2 in WI (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 11:49 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
Oh boy, tears in the way of typing. Good stuff there. I also adore Angela for her steadfast friendship that is always trying to find the best for Bella. Liked the slap and also liked the quiet conversation at the end. At least she will feel good about the choice she made in contacting them. That is important for when Bella realized what she did in going behind her back. I hope she isn't too mad at Angela. She doesn't deserve any crap. I also liked steadfast Ben who is her rock. Good guy. Keep writing! I'm on vacatioin and run for the laptop each morning, where I have to sit on the front porch wrapped in blankets to keep warm just to read my stories! Husband just doesn't get it! It's worth it...
Author's Response: Lol! You should see my man's reaction! I am so glad you enjoy my story and so grateful for the reviews!
Reviewer: mrspace24 (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
DAMN! I am SOOO ready for he and Bella to be face to face again and I want to know about the baby. Hun, you have me on some serious pins and needles. I check my favorites every single day (sometimes repeatedly) for your updates. I am way too impatient. So this is my small attempt and begging. PLEASE PLEASE write a big ol' long chapter full of all the fluffy wonderful baby-filled goodness! PRETTY PLEASE with an angsty, sexy Edward on top....... or bottom if you prefer. Ha ha! Sorry, I crack myself up at times.
One more thing, before I go. I hereby dub thee : Queen of the Cliffhangers.
Author's Response: Ooh, that is much nicer than my current title of Mean Bitch! You will see Bella in the next chapter, although not hear from her. Hang on! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: caperves1979 (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 11:42 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
Well done. Now bring on the shit-storm!
Author's Response: Oh, it's coming! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: StephanieCullen (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 11:40 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
Excellent Chapter!!!! I LOVE Seeking Absolution Edward much better than Emo Edward. Hope you are feeling much better! We can't have a favorite fanfiction author under the weather.
Author's Response: Lol! His next chapter is called Act of Contrition. Fits right with your comment! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: lillred (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 11:21 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
wow..that's all i can say :O)
Author's Response: Thanks for saying it!
Reviewer: Sunfeathers (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
Ooh, the tears are cascading down my cheeks, pomme! I know it gets worse, but at least we know how much Edward loves her, how much he hopes for a future together. I'm afraid those hopes will be dashed in one way or another for a while ...
Loved the Angela pov, she's a really good friend. Maybe Carlisle pov next so we can find out how Bella and the little one are doing?
Hope you're feeling better. :)
Author's Response: You will definitely get an update on Bella in the next chapter. Just don't hurt me, ok? I will put up a teaser tonight. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: lulabelljane (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 11:18 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
Oh, Ellie...this chapter! I must say that I was waiting for the Angela and Edward cause I was dying to read how it would go down. And in all honesty...just perfect! I loved Angela for that slap...I love Edward...but the boy deseved it! But his expression after she did it... :( Just cause I'm a big old baby...I would have pulled him into a hug after slapping him...lol! Their talk at the end about about his wishes...that was beautiful! Sad but beautiful. Especially the line wishes are pointless..cause it's true...cause at this point all he can do is hope. :( And yes....your Angela rocks! :)
Big girl panties and kleenex are ready...I reaaaaallllly want the next chapter already...like I've said to you before...your story is just too damn addicting!
And letting my mind wander for a second....a naked cool whipped covered Edward...... :P Yummmm indeed!
Author's Response: Keep the nekky Cullen image in you head to soften the next chapter! I will put a teaser up tonight! Thanks so much for your support and reviews!
Reviewer: sambois (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 11:07 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
well at least he will have angela on his band wagon that will help right?
Author's Response: It definitely isn't going to hurt! There is a lot of damage to repair though. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 11:05 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
GO Angela, nice smack!
Author's Response: She definitely knocked him one. He kinda ad it coming!
Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
Are you trying to drive us insane!? I want the Bella/Edward face-off! No instant forgiveness, please.
Author's Response: That is not my intention! You will see more of Bella in the next chapter and it will make more sense. Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: amom2my3kids (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 10:52 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
I can't wait until they see each other again.
Author's Response: It is coming. Slowly but surely! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 10:51 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
Heartwrenching, but freaking awesome chapter! And yay, we are one step closer to having Edward see Bella. Now I'm pretty sure that this first meeting or two or three isn't going to perfectly, but I'm hoping Edward stands his ground to show her he's not running this time and that Bella can let go some of the hurt. Only time will heal all of their pain, but these two love each other so much that I hope the despair and pain won't drag out too long!
Great job, as always.
Author's Response: Well you will see Bella again in the next chapter, although not with Edward. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Sunshinemommy (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 10:40 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
Great chapter. I loved Angela's POV. Who next? Carlisle maybe? Thanks for updating so quickly!
Author's Response: Angela rocks! I so appreciate your reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: latinabeauty70 (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
I agree I just love Angela. I hope Bella won't take this against her, but I can tell that Angela will be Bella's rock.
Feel better!
Author's Response: I am getting better, thank you! Angela so rocks!
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