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Reviewer: edwardnbella4ever (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Grandfather
I loved Alice's verbal bitch slapping of Lauren. Also, what kind of receptionist answers the phone "hello"? Once again, poor Alice. I picture her as a little girl in her dad's office, not knowing what to do. I'm sure Carlisle felt as though he was punched in the stomach as well. Terribly sad.
Author's Response: Lauren is an irretrievable git. Alice and Carlisle have so much on their plates. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: edwardnbella4ever (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Nightmare of a Love Story
Poor Alice. I keep saying that about everyone, don't I? Such a heartbreaking chapter. I think I said on my first review of the last chapter that I hoped it was in Alice's POV, but I'm really glad you put it in both hers and Angelas.
Author's Response: Thank you! I enjoy writing both of them! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: edwardnbella4ever (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 08:03 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
“This situation calls for a 'fuck' or two,” I answered, then thought about what I just said. “Fuck,” I mumbled
Poor Carlisle might just have to attach a permanent deaf ear when it comes to Emmett. I loved the Cullens reactions to the chat and that Emmett immediately deleated the cookies for fear of Carlisle looking at his facebook page.
Author's Response: Lol! Carlisle definitely has his hands full! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: RingTheBella (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 07:40 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
(I read through this as a reccommendation from Burrberry Bugsy.)
ok, that's not totally true, I was so anxious to get to the end that I may have skimmed over several parts. Shame on me! I enjoyed everything I did read and I look forward to the next chapter. :)
Author's Response: The next chapter should be up soon! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: edwardnbella4ever (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 07:36 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Social Networking
"I hated to manipulate her, but she looked like a skeleton that swallowed a basketball."
Such a sad, yet funny visual. I feel like I'm on repeat, but I love that Angela is taking such good care of Bella, even buying her groceries and guilting her into eating.
"Please don't think I'm some girl from school trying to take up an unrequited crush. As if."
Ha ha, that's exactly what Emmett and Rosalie do think at first.
Author's Response: Angels just rocks! She's so honest yet so compassionate. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: robpattlover (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
EEEkkkk!Such a heart freakin clenching story! I think I cried on every single chapter!Not kidding trust me!Update really soon plzzz!x
Author's Response: I am so glad you like the story! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: memmem95 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
Angela is definitely amazing. Is next chapter going to be Bella filled? I hope so! Even though the reaction is going to be rough ithasto happen going to be rough it has to happen.
Author's Response: There will be Bella in the next chapter. Just be prepared! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: giada marsielle (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 09:08 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
more more more!!!
Author's Response: There will more soon! Thank you for reviewing.
Reviewer: Hollywood_678 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 05:50 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
Fantastic to see her perspective again. I loved the slap, I loved the forgiveness, I love Edward dammit!
Author's Response: You just want to hit him and hug him! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: OperationNautilus (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 04:06 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
Love this chapter. Angela is such a good friend always being there for Bella and protecting her. You did a great job on this chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! I am glad you enjoyed it and reviewed!
Reviewer: hugsandkisses1320 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 02:27 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
Aww... I keep tearing up. In both the good way and the bad way. Please update again soon!
Author's Response: There is a lot of hope and pain in there! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: xmutexbuttonx (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 02:09 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
I freaking love it. I've been reading it all day, and I need to read more. So please??? I pretty much cried my eyes out. <3
I wish Bella wasn't unconcious because I want to hear more from her. Also I can't wait to hear how it goes with Charlie. And I am so ready for Bella and Edward to reunite...no matter how that goes.
Happy endings, happy endings. :)
Author's Response: You will see Bella. In the next chapter but won't hear from her for a while, alas. I am glad you are enjoying the story and that you reviewed!
Reviewer: Please_BiteMe (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
whoops! posted twice for 19.... the latter was meant for 20, but whatev... you get it! I love you and this story is amazing.... last night I was 1800 and you've already got over 1900! At this rate you'll close 2k in no time! You're a genius and Not Like This is gold! :)
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you! I am so blown away by the response. Thanks for all of your reviews!
Reviewer: nwalto (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 04:33 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
Oh, thank you so much. But really, we CANNOT wait for the B&E reunion ...
Author's Response: They will meet again in chapter 23, but it may nor be what you expect. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: nelln (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
::dabbing eyes uselessly with a shredded tissue:: umm...yeah. I can barely see as I'm typing my review because my eyes won't stop watering. I'm so happy that ginnyw_31 rec your story on Twilighted Forums.
What I love about this story is the angst and the realness of the situation. I can feel the heartbreak and the hopelessness and the gawd awful pain everytime Bella thinks/speaks.
I can't wait to read the reunion. I have a feeling its gonna be a 5 hankie (out of 5) sobfest. Please update soon!
Author's Response: There are several multi-hanky chapters to come, the next one being one of them. I am so glad you found my story and enjoyed it! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Please_BiteMe (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix
But I hope to be! Alright Eddie do your best! Make this better.
Author's Response: He has a long way to go, but he is on the way now. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: venomousgal (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
Wow....I am speechless my dear! I am going to put my vote in fro you, I only wish I had known about the awards sooner so that I could have nominated this!
Mad love to you bb!
Tammy
Author's Response: Aw shucks! You know I would be lost without you ladies! Thank you so much for the review and ALL of the support!
Reviewer: Please_BiteMe (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 02:33 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
Progress! Sweet, sweet progress! How can you not feel bad for him now?! This is a lot to take in and have to accept in a matter of hours. I hope he'll tone down his more dramatic responses from here.
Author's Response: Edward will always be a bit dramatic, but he will pull himself together! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Please_BiteMe (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 02:27 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
She was pregnant!!! Why did you have to write that!!!! GAH... I don't think I even need to let you know I'm crying anymore... just know that I can't stop at this point.
Author's Response: I think this story is improving the stock price of tissues! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Please_BiteMe (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary
Come on Edward! He's starting to come back to us... I can't wait until they're together again... I'm sure it will be pretty explosive but still, it needs to happen soon!
Author's Response: They will see each other again in 23, but it is not what you expect. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Please_BiteMe (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 02:20 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response
OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD! This is so damn hard to read again.... Just reading this situation hurts... it's so real and it happens all the time to expecting mother's... Alright I'm following your advice
She believes in happy endings.....
Author's Response: Keep repeating! It will be ok! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: TheIsabellaCullen (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End
Another wonderful chapter! Can't wait for the next. I read the teaser on the thread, and I must say, I'm on the edge of my seat. :)
Author's Response: Carlisle's reaction is hard to read. Just hang in there! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Please_BiteMe (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Strong Enough
I can't wait for the plan to be put into action!
Author's Response: Alas, plans must always change! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Please_BiteMe (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Grandfather
Alice can bring this shit storm together...right? At least everyone's starting to get the story.
Author's Response: Let's hope she can! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
Loved it!
Author's Response: I am so glad! Thanks for the review!
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