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Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 04:59 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome

Carlisle was my hero in this chapter.  So loving, so brave fighting with everything within himself to hold it together for Bella, for her friends, for his family ~ Bella's family.  I was touched with his conversation with Angela.  And I was touched that Angela wanted Edward to be the first one to see Bella.

Once again I find myself lying on the couch.   Please hold it together, please hold it together is the chant running thru my mind as Edward prepares to enter Bella's room.  Will he sit quietly as she lies on the bed beaten and broken fighting for her life and that of her baby?  Will he take her hand and softly brushes her hair from her face as he apologizes over and over?  Will he hold her hand as he tells her everything will be alright that he is there and they will get throught this together?  Will he hold her hand as he hums softly willing her to come back?  Will he place his hand on her stomach and talk to the baby?  Will Bella open her eyes, see a broken Edward filled with sorrow and reach her hand to his hair and give him strength?

Yes, I am the one lying on the couch that you are hiding behind.  I will do my best to throw the angry readers off your trail.  However those with kindred spirit will be asked to stay and hold vigil as we await word of Bella....

Sandra



Author's Response:

What an amazing review.  Thank you for this.

I wish I could say you would get your answers in the next chapter, but we need to hear from someone else first.

You *will* get those answers though.  Chapter 23.  And I think it will probably break your heart...

Thanks for your wonderful thoughts.

Reviewer: Lyanna Whitlock Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 04:59 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome

please update soon



Author's Response: I shall. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Beth818 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 04:53 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome

It's getting soooo good! Now please don't torture me with a chapter of Esme and Charlie next! I wanna hear from Edward! Please?

Author's Response:

Alas, you have another chapter to wait for Edward.  But no Esme or Charlie next.  It's someone we haven't heard from yet.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Saturn (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 04:49 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome

You were right about needing Prozac - Damn, that was a hard chapter...

I know I have said this before, but I can't wait for the update :-)

 

Reviewer: Saturn (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 04:48 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome

You were right about needing Prozac - Damn, that was a hard chapter...

I know I have said this before, but I can't wait for the update :-)

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for the sweet review.  I appreciate it!

I will try not to keep you waiting long.

Reviewer: eclipse_me (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 04:41 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome

i really love this story so much but i wanted to ask a few medical questions in relation to it...firstly how far is bella along in her pregnancy? just because sometimes when the pregnancy hits a certian point they can end the pregnency especially when it is causing harm to the mother...i just wonder...im not trying to dampen your amazing story!!

KEEP UP YOUR GREAT WRITING UP!!!



Author's Response:

NO!  You're welcome to ask questions.  She is about 8 months.  They probably *could* take the baby, but, at this point, there is nothing to say that will improve Bella's condition, so they are waiting it out a bit to see how she recovers.

Thank you so much for your review!

Reviewer: lucyv (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 04:37 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome

Poor Bella. I honestly can't see how you're going to give her her happy ending. She's so damaged now. I can't imagine her forgiving and taking Edward back...

And I'm so sorry for Edward - he could have never imagined his great love would almost ruin the person he loved. Poor boy...

I still find this story truly fascinating. Please update. Can't wait for Bella to wake up. And I'd really love to hear from Charlie's POV.

Thanks again!



Author's Response:

There will be a happy ending.  Don't underestimate the sheer power of love.

Poor Charlie.  That gets ugly.

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Twilight_Girl_Ox (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 04:35 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome

oh come on!

you cant do that!

thats the moment i've been waiting for!!

please update asap.



Author's Response:

Ah, the Edward//Bella chapter is coming... in 23.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: my2galspal (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 04:26 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome

Come out of there you big coward!  If you're going to put the rest of us through this mess you better be willing to come along and hold our hands.  ;)  Besides, there's no need to hide from those of us who come to you for our recommended daily allowance of angst and heartbreak as well as to use our quota of Kleenex.

That was an excellent chapter.  I'm eager to see how the Catch 22 gets dealt with.  You're right about the problem too.  The person who caused the Broken Heart Syndrome is right there to heal it if the shock of having the Cullens back doesn't send Bella into heart failure first.  Hope you've got something great planned for the resolution.  When I say that I'm really hoping your plans don't include Bella dying, Edward committing suicide, them meeting up in the after life and then healing each other.  That is not my definition of "happily ever after".

Thanks so much for sharing this beautifully angst filled story.  I'm eagerly anticipating the next heartbreak.

 



Author's Response:

LOL!  There is no afterlife episodes.  Promise.  They will be together again in real life:)

Thanks so much for your thoughtful review.  I'll hold your hand.

Reviewer: MyBloodSmellsBetter (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 04:25 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome

I demand longer chapters!!! lol! j/k. but seriously though, I can't wait for the next one! :)



Author's Response:

It should be up soon!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: angmclure (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 04:25 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome

I'm nervous for the next chapter.  How will Edward react to seeing her like that?  I can't wait to see her reaction to everything when she wakes up and don't forget Charles reaction to finding out what happened to her and what he might do to Edward.  Can't wait hope you know your the best.



Author's Response:

The next chapter is actually a break.  Edward will see Bella in 23...

Thank you so much for the compliment and the review!

Reviewer: mayian2 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 04:23 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome

Ugh!  I am weak...I can't handle waiting for another chapter.  Would it make it faster if I said I was sick and another chapter would make me feel better?  Ok...not really sick...just a small fanfic addiction!  I need another fix...any offerings?

BTW...love your story!!!

 



Author's Response:

I try to keep them coming for you!

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 04:22 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome

"SOMETHING HARDER THAN THIS"? OH NO!!!!!!!!SO SAD!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Much much harder, unfortunately.

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Panda1499 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 04:17 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome

It wasn't as bad as some of the other chapters, I don't think you need to be in hiding.  More please!



Author's Response:

I am glad you survived okay!

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: ejdisme (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 04:16 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome

gaaaaaaaaaaaah i neeeeeeeeeeed to know what happens!

don't torture us any longer, pahlease!



Author's Response:

This *is* what's happening:)  Just hang on and let the story take you there.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: twitina (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 04:16 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome

Yes, code red.  But, we needed to see her condition.

 

More...more...more.  (I wouldn't be so insistent if I didn't know you had more chapters ready.)   ;)



Author's Response:

The next chapter is a bit of a relief, then on to the total heart fail!

Thank you SO much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: amkh (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 03:59 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome

geez. I've been waiting for Edward to see her for 10 CHAPTERS. THIS IS KILLING ME! :P



Author's Response: Be careful what you wish for! It is coming in 23! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: maravilla (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 03:53 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome

Whaaaaaa Whaaaaa...I can feel the pain!!!



Author's Response: It is a hard one! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: DamagedGirl (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 03:44 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome

Heart breaking. Please update quickly so I can breathe again. *gulp*



Author's Response:

The next chapter is definitely relief!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: oceanwaters2006 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 03:42 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome

Oh *sob* This chapter shows how very much Carlisle cares about Bella and how close he feels to her and how much he wants to make things better.

Then...having to tell Edward what was going on....GAH! Ripped my heart out.

Love it and love you!!

Now onto damage control!

XOXOXOXOXOXOXOOX Jess



Author's Response:

Poor Carlisle!  Poor Bella!  Poor Edward!

Alas, as you WELL know, things get far worse.

Thanks so much for all of your help.  I lurves you bb.

Reviewer: VampireInTraining (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 03:37 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome

*curls into fetal position* go to happy place... go to a happy place... Damn you can be such a downer when needed. I was looking forward to a great day now i will be wondering if Bella will forgive Edward, if Edward will forgive himself, if this Baby will make it. Pomme de Terre you will drive us all to the brink of insanity i swear.

Now hurry your butt over to the computer and get to typing... or else *aims rather large potato at Pomme de Terre's head*



Author's Response:

LOL! Ducks from flying potatoes! 

The next chapter should be up soon!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: 8vamp8 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 03:30 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome

It gets harder?!? I don't know if I can handle it!

haha, but seriously, keep up the amazing writing! I am totally loving this!



Author's Response:

The Edward/Bella chapters and the baby chapters are TOUGH.  But I give you some relief in between.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: mom2kandg (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 03:30 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome

I got through it and Lord knows it was tough, I had to look from the screen to gather myself but I kept reading.  I know the next couple of chapters are going to be harder than this one but Carlisle's description of Bella was just heartbreaking.  I was kindof figuring that he would go with the Broken Heart Syndrome but I didn't know for certain if that was gonna be brought up...Update SOON PLEASE!!!!!



Author's Response:

Well, the *next* chapter isn't tough at all, thankfullly.  I put it in to give you a break before the hell of Edward seeing Bella hits.  I'll have the next chapter up soon.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: dolphin62598 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 03:25 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome

Great chapter!  I'm glad we heard from Carlisle about how Bella really looked!  It's a complete shock and I can't wait to see Edward's reaction!  I have a feeling he will have a hard time keeping it together!



Author's Response:

You will get him in chapter 23.  It's not a pretty sight.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: ThatOnePVkid (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 03:24 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome

ahhhhh.....you tease.jk. but awesome btw but i need more!!!!!



Author's Response:

There will be more soon!

Thanks for reviewing!

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