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Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 06:32 AM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End
Oh man. Such a good first chapter! You jumped right into the story, didn't waste time with introductions and other stuff like that. Those can come later. I always hate reading first chapters bc they're typically boring. But this? Perfect. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! What a compliment!?
I am glad you enjoyed the intro.
Reviewer: culleniwish (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 04:58 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome
Poor Carlisle, Poor Bella, Poor Edward, Poor everyone! So Edward is going to see Bella, that's probably not going to go so well if Carlisle had such a hard time seeing her. I know Bella's not responding but maybe she'll be able to sense that Edward is there. :0) I'm holding on to hope. Congrats on all the reviews!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Edward will see Bella in Chapter 23. We have another voice coming next instead. But when he does see her, you're right, it's *not* pretty!
Reviewer: fanpire123 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 04:21 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome
Wow!!! That was amazing! I have been reading this story from the beginning, but this is my first review, shame on me. This story is wonderful! You put such emotion into these characters that I feel like I am them. What they understand, I understand. What they feel, I feel. This whole story is a rollercoaster of emotions, and I love it!!! This is possibly the best fanfic I have ever read, it is simply remarkable, no better way to put it.
Please update soon:D
-Maddie
Author's Response: Holy Smokes! You may have waited, but you certainly came out with a bang! Thank you *so* much for this amazing review! I am truly honoured you feel this way about the story and that it makes you *feel*. It means the world to me.
Reviewer: Abimaddevil17 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 02:12 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome
Brilliant as usual! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: phips16 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 12:30 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome
love the chapter from carlisle's pov. great chapter. cant wait for the next one when edward see's her. hopefully bella wakes up soon
Author's Response: Alas, the reunion won't be until chapter 23. Someone else is dying to be heard in the interim.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: hmogburn (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 12:05 AM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
This is intense. Leave it to Esme to have all of the right words.
Author's Response: Esme so rocks! Thank you for your reviews!
Reviewer: hmogburn (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 11:33 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
I love Emmett, but WTF? Its one thing for him to rant and rave against Edward. But the WHOLE famliy left. Edward is a child. No one had to listen to him. They CHOSE to. ALL of them. I know Emmett didn't agree with Edward's choice. But he still went along with it. He didn't sneak away to tell her good bye. He didn't try to contact her. He didn't stage a protest and refuse to move. The whole family did this.
Edward may have pulled the trigger, but the ENTIRE family went along with the murder and drove the get-away car.
This isn't ALL on Edward. I hate it when people play it out like that. Edward only has a god-complex because they do EVERYTHING he tells them to. They enable him.
Author's Response: I completely agree in that they all did make poor choices, some far worse than others. At least Emmett out up the biggest fight! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: hmogburn (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 11:18 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage
"New car for the first one who finds her?" That was good.
Author's Response: Lol! That is Emmett for you! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: hmogburn (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation
I don't understand why they hide things from Edward. Wouldn't the best way to slap him out of his funk be to show him what a mess he made? Instead of letting him think he did the right thing.
Author's Response: This whole story is about decisions and consequences as seen from an emotional perspective. There are loads of questionable decisions. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 10:52 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome
I just read this whole story straight through... all 21 chapters. I'm gobsmacked dumbstruck or something. I don't know what I am, but I'm anxiously awaiting more.
Author's Response: Wow! I am glad you found us! Thank you so much for the amazing compliment and the review!
Reviewer: hmogburn (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 10:45 PM · On: Chapter 2 - The Last Day of My Life
NOTE TO PREGNANT PEOPLE: Just because the father of your child doesn't want to be with you, DOESN'T mean they don't want to know their child. Just because the father of your child doesn't want to be with you, your child still DESERVES the right to no their father. It isn't just about you anymore (your pride, and your broken heart). Its about whats best for your child. And whats best for your child is to know both of their parents.
I know this is a story... and its all about the angst... but people do that stuff in real life... so I just wanted to put that out there.
"I should tell him. If he doesn't know, doesn't he deserve to? No."
Pregnant with a child is NOT the time to be selfish. If you aren't mature enough to handle ALL of the possible consequences of getting pregnant (putting yourself last, putting your child first, being LOGICAL), then you aren't mature enough to have sex.
OK... lol... I'm done ranting. But someone needs to say that stuff. Because there are too many single mothers out there who are selfish, and put their own pride and happiness, over the needs of their child.
But im sure this is going to be a great story! Im really excited about reading it.
Author's Response: Lol! For what it is worth, I agree with what you said. Alas, it just had to be this way to make this particular story work. Loved your review!
Reviewer: ibleedmaizeandblue (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 10:27 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome
Dear Lord this chapter broke my heart… and I only have more heartbreak to endure. Why am I doing this to myself? Oh yeah, because you have created a beautifully moving story and I can’t seem to quit it. When Carlisle begged Bella to trust them I couldn’t help but tear up. This entire family is going through so much and it all could have been avoided. I can’t imagine how Edward must feel when his father suggests that her current condition is likely (or at least partly) due to her mental condition… to her broken heart. I can’t imagine what that must feel like. Gah.
During this chapter, and during Carlisle’s previous chapter, he mentions that he wants to take Bella ‘home.’ Is he referencing Forks or back East? I’m curious as to whether the family plans on moving back or if they wish to bring Bella with them.
Oh Angela. She is amazing. Her desire for Edward to see Bella before her offers a little bit of hope in this sea of desolation. If Angela can be turned into an Edward believer after a few hours than surely Bella, the love of Edward’s life, can forgive and believe in him eventually.
Author's Response: It truly is a sea of desolation and there are so many mistakes and wounds to heal. When Carlisle says home, I think he is more referring to togetherness rather than any particular place. Back into the fold. But I would hazard to say the Cullens would move back to WA rather than put Bella in the position of moving to ME. Thanks SO much for the amazing review!
Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 09:34 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome
Yeah you better run and hide after a chapter like that!!!!!!!!!! So unfair....
You make us care about Bella and Edward then give us cliffies like this!!!!
Of course it goes without saying that - we're waiting on pins and needles for the next chapter! Please just give us a lil something...before you do this again :)
Author's Response: Lol! E/B in 23, I promise! There is another POV that needs to have his say first. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: twilighter11 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome
oh boy! I cant wait for the next chapter! when is charlie coming into this??
Author's Response: The next chapter is a little change of pace and from a new POV. We will come back to E/B in 23, then to Charlie in 24.
Reviewer: nessiebells (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome
uuuuuuuuuuugggggggggggggghhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
just gotta do it again-- didn't ya. I can't wait for the next chapter.I think I'm obsessed.Please hurry.
Author's Response: Lol! I feel like wherever I stop it will seem a cliffie! Next chapter should be out soon!
Reviewer: MeiSun (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
wonderful.
Author's Response: Thank you. I appreciate the review!
Reviewer: Jaenelle Masen (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome
i was in tears reading this chapter...hell, i am in tears as i read every chapter of this story....my heart is breaking for Bella...not to be wierd or anything but her situation in this reminds me of Padme and Anakin's story in Star Wars...thats exactly what she died of after giving birth to her children, a broken heart...
Author's Response: Not weird at all! In fact, we were watching the DVD last week and I said the same thing! Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: iponeddyou (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 08:04 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome
My throat hurts.
I forgot my tissues.
Angsty music doesn't help.
God; you make me feel like I'm part of the walls.
That was, WOW.
I can't wait for the next update.
xoxo - Cherolyn
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so much! I want you to be able to see, hear and feel the chapters. I will put up the teaser for 22 on the thread tonight!
Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome
YAY, I finally got my computer back & I can review again. I have loved the last few chapters, although the whole time I have done the "She believes in happy endings". Keep up the great work.
Author's Response: Welcome back! Glad you liked the read! I will put a teaser for 22 up tonight on the thread! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: thunderstorm (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: The next chapter will be up soon. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Beautiful_Distraction (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome
Ellie...come out of hiding and play!! lol!
Eek....chapter 23 is a coming...my favorite b/c it makes you just want to wrap Edward in your arms. Love the story girly!
XOXO
-Whitney
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! I needed the virtual hug! Thanks for everything you do!
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome
Oh how painful everything is.
Author's Response: It is a very painful story, until the end. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Nicole March (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome
Wow, I'm crying right now, not that you didn't warn us. ;)
Excellent chapter - Carlisle's POV was well-written, as always, and the emotion of what was happening in this chapter came across loud & clear. Now I really, really can't wait to find out Edward's reaction to actually seeing his love in this condition. Is E's POV next (pretty please?) Great work! Keep 'em comin'!!
Author's Response: Nope! Chapter 23. We need to hear from someone else first! I think you will enjoy it. Thank you so much for the amazing review!
Reviewer: MeiSun (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 2 - The Last Day of My Life
This is beautiful. Sad, but beautiful. She's so strong, even though she's on automatic pilot.
Oh, and I where can I get a kinky Edward!Bot of my own? :)
Author's Response: Thank you for your compliment and your review! Hmm... On the Bot...
Reviewer: Gidget (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome
oh poor bella.
Author's Response: Poor Bella! Poor Carlisle! It is difficult all around! Thanks for the review!
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