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Reviewer: geo 1231 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 11:31 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome
That was amazing (:
Really, really good, but please, please finish it :(
I need to know whats going to happen to Bella and the baby.
Please :(
Author's Response: Thank you so much! The next chapter is in the queue for validation, so it should not be long!
Reviewer: heatherdawnc (Anonymous) · Date: June 19, 2009 09:49 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome
Yes, reviews help to make the fixing of this mess go that much faster! Fantastic, even though it hurts it absolutely fantastic!
Author's Response: The next chapter is a little break before I put the big hurt on ya! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: heatherdawnc (Anonymous) · Date: June 19, 2009 09:26 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
Glad she's on team Edward too! I can't believe you answered hundreds of reviews and are busting out chapters...much appreciated, if it makes you feel good, you can have one less to respond to and it won't hurt my feelings, I don't do it to get a response from you. I do it so you know there are people out there reading your hard work and loving every minute of it, even if I have to grab the tears!
Author's Response: And I will answer it because I am so grateful to you for reading and telling me your thoughts. That is what makes this worth it!
Reviewer: xtothey (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome
OMG!!!! I need more!! i just read this for the first time tonight and am dying for more!!!!!
Author's Response: The next chapter is just waiting for validation! Should be up soon. Thhanks for the review!
Reviewer: oceaneyes85253 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome
this is amazing so far! Please keep writing!
Author's Response: I am glad you are enjoying it! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: ElizabethGere (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome
wow very heart tugging story. Keep up the great work. I look forward to the next update!
Author's Response: Thank you! The next chapter should be up soon!
Reviewer: loveroftwilight (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 06:36 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome
OMG I just read this in one sitting and it is AMAZING!!! Please update soon so I can find out what happens!
Author's Response: The next chapter should be up soon! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 04:43 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome
Oh, god worse than this?
I reviewed PLEASE FIX IT!!!!
great emotional chapter.. well done.. loved it.....
Author's Response: On the bright side, 22 is nice and easy on the heart. After that, welcome to the abyss. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome
Good chapter! Hey, what do you mean she doesn't name the baby? You're kidding me, right? Right? Good job hun, can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Bella does not have the opportunity to name the baby, although the baby is named. That doesn't help much, does it? Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Sunfeathers (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 03:36 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome
Oh my. You weren't kidding about the depths of sadness to this story. I'm wiping the tears off my cheeks as I type ...
I'm guessing it's EPOV next? Oh my ...
Author's Response: Actually, a completely different POV next chapter. I hope you enjoy it! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: djgirl911 (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 11:45 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome
You are fantastic! im a late reader but i finished all the chapters so far.Please update soon!
Author's Response: Oh my gosh, thanks!
So glad you found us and that you are enjoying it!
Reviewer: Jojo3508 (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 09:19 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome
I just found your story, couldn't stop reading it and then ended on this chapter. I am left in tears. I like how you have everyone's pov without retelling the scene 6 times. Its a great story!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the great review!
The story is about all of the characters, not just Edward and Bella. I actually leave out much of the story as it's just a tale about their emotional states, not a narrative. Kind of an experiment to see if you can tell a complete story without telling every detail.
I appreciate your comments!
Reviewer: OCD - ObsessiveCullenDisorder (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 03:02 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome
As always AMAZING - so amazing I felt the need to pimp it out on my twitter page!
Cant wait for more.... I'm on the edge of my seat with a box of tissues, a huge bar of chocolate and some vodka.... please dont keep me waiting long
<3 x
Author's Response: WOW! Thanks for the pimpery! It's always appreciated.
The next chapter is a change of gears and no big girl panties are needed. It's actually a kinda fun chapter. But after that, it all goes to hell.
It's already submitted and should be up soon....
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome
WRITE MORE!!!! I am adicted to your story, need more now. Please write soon!
Author's Response: The next chapter has already been submitted! Thanks for reviewing!
Author's Response: The next chapter has already been submitted! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: LatinaLibra (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome
i'm so glad i stumbled upon this story!! How many chapters long do you anticipate this story being?
Author's Response: I am so dlad you found us! There is no ETA right now. But I wouldnast at least 40 chapters. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome
ARRRRRRRGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! You owe me a lorry full of hankies to replace these snotty ones!!!!
I think I love you ... in a totally non-sexual way of course :)
You have an amzing knack of powerful imagery with your choice of words. My favorite line of this chapter, although it made me cry and I'm not a prettier crier by any mean was "her cheekbones scraping painfully just inside of her skin." Holy shit lady! That was powerful stuff.
I'm a firm believer of the broken heart syndrome. And I can only imagine what Edward was going through hearing all this. I can't help but wonder what would become of him if something bad happens to Bella.
A fantastic hearbreaking chapter. Thank you for that, and I thank you in advance for the lorry load of hankies. If you *really* want to make it up to me, Edward can be the driver. I'll allow that!
K, now update already will ya?
Author's Response: Wow, thanks for the awesome review!
It's a painful chapter. I wish I could say it was the worst of the lot, but it's not. I'm glad you found the emotion in the story.
Broken Heart Syndrome is very real. I have seen it in action.
The next chapter is a wee bit of a break from the angst, but you will get MUCH more soon.
I appreciate your review.
Reviewer: pclo (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 06:26 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome
oh my God! What a story! thanks for taking the time to pen this story.
Author's Response: I am glad you have enjoyed! Thank you for reviewing.
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
I'm glad I'm behind (for some stranger reason I didnt get the update for this chappie.)
I totally loved your dialogue between Angela and Edward. Very realisitic and very loving. What a fantastic friend Angela is.
Can't wait for more, I'm glad I'm behind so I can just click *next*
Author's Response: I am glad you have some extra chappies to read!
I submitted 22 tonight.
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome
Aah! What a cliffie! Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: I will submit the next tonight. Thanks for the reviews!
Reviewer: twilight15 (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome
OMG! was just reading some of the reviews and I just thought of poor Charlie..... My heart is breaking (sniff!) He is going to see her like that, I just can't even imagine.
Author's Response: Oh it is not an easy Chapter. But Charlie is going to impress you. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: twilighted007 (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome
:(
Sad Face.
Author's Response: It is sad! So much to come. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: twilight girly 1901 (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 08:47 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome
oh my god. this is heartbreaking. edward is going to be so devastated when he sees bella. i want her to wake up and see him there with her! i can't wait to see what you have for us next :] love the story <3
Author's Response: Edward and Bella will be back in Chp 23, so hang on! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 03:26 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary
I'm at a loss for words but it's a be reaction. :)
Author's Response: Fun stuff, right? Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 02:23 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Strong Enough
Ah, the wrinkle. Can't wait to see what it is. :)
Author's Response: After you find out, you may wish you hadn't! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 02:11 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Grandfather
Ah, the action just keeps on coming!
Author's Response: That it does. Thanks for the review!
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