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Reviewer: oceanwaters2006 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
Ooooooooooo *wipes eyes furiously*
I am not even sure how many times I've read this and it still gets me every time! GAH!
But still....hold on. Hold on. Oh God...It's coming...along with the weepathon to follow it! AHHH!
NEED MORE TISSUES!
Hey, at least costco is getting good buisness out of the whole thing, right?
Love ya much girl!
XOXOXOXOXOXOXO Jess
Author's Response: LOL! You cried and you were prepared???
And Hang On is coming up fast. Hell. We need to set up suicide prevention hotlines and shit. GAH!
Thanks so much for all you do for me. You be the bestest all around.
WORD!
Reviewer: AS Blythe (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
And so it begins, the long road back. It feels like everything else has been build up to this moment. Your gift for imagery continues and that scene was completely vivid and heartbreaking. I just hope that love really does conquer all.
Author's Response: Yes. This is the beginning of sorts. I am glad that you were able to see and feel it as it unfolded. And yes, in this world, love does prevail... it just is a long long road.
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: twilighter767 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 12:28 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
love this chapter....please make bella wake up soon....!!!
Author's Response: We have a ways to go before we get there. She's fairly messed up. But I do believe in happy endings and lots will happen in between.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
Please Bella, open your damn eyes and forgive Edward.LOL... Waiting is killing me. I'll live but only if you post again real soon. I almost wanted to cry when Edward was pleading with Bella. The emotions and feeling in your words screamed to me... "CRY LIKE A BABY, YOU KNOW YOU WANT TO"... LOL
Author's Response: Aw! Well, I guess I am getting it right then! Thank you so much for reviewing and I will submit the next chapter soon!
Reviewer: edwards_debussy (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
Oh, Edward! You did such a fantastic job of making me feel his grief through your words. His grief is so hard to read about, and I dread what's to come. But I'll keep chanting to myself--happy endings, happy endings!! I'm willing to go through the darkness to get to the light. Great update!
Author's Response: Edward is feeling so much now as well. Grief, guilt, longing, loss, fear. His head is a tortured place to be. I thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: dancing_in_my_underwear (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
Woah. That was heartrenching. I started crying as soon as Edward said that he wasn't prepared. All his prayers and how he keeps asking forgiveness...I just want to give him a huge hug and tell him everything is alright and when Bella wakes up I want her to take him back straight away....but then I don't cause this story will be over too soon lol. All day in my head now I'll be repeating "She believes in happy endings" in my head.
Author's Response: Miles to go before we can sleep, dear. Thank you for all of your support, here and on the thread!
Reviewer: spidermonkey_09 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
wow!!!!
wow!!!
wow!!!!!!!!
i absoutley love this story
cannoott wait for the next chapter
love it, love you for coming up with this idea
xxx
10/10 as always
Author's Response: I was shocked no one else had! Thank you so much for the amazing review!
Reviewer: sassyf (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 12:22 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
UGH! Torment. Heartbreak.
Happy endings coming our way!!!
Author's Response: If you believe it, it will come! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Beth818 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
Awe poor Edward! I wish she would have woken up at his touch
Author's Response: Ah, no sleeping beauty here. She has far too much going on for that. But you will get a glimpse inside her head soon. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 12:19 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
Oh you are just mean!!! but i love you for it....you're just loving the angst, the saddness, and clinging on to the HEA :)
What a great chapter, I love how we are seeing Edward's consequences for his actions...whatever his intentions!
Author's Response: There are just so many mistakes. So much damage to try and repair with ALL of them. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Purple83 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
you make me cry...well the story does...I guess it's the characters that took a lie of their own and they are broken and in pain and...it feels so real it's scary :(
Author's Response: There were so many tragic mistakes made and so much damage to heal. Thank you for your review!
Reviewer: LisaLoo (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
"My love. My loves." This killed me. Thanks for the chapter. I'm always thrilled/terrified when I see you have posted. This one did not fail to deliver.
Author's Response: Thrilled and terrified! Lol! I know that line is a tough one. I teared up writing it! Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
Heartbreaking, but hopefully a step in the right direction. I'm hoping that Bella is at least aware of what's going on around her even if she is unconscious.
I can't say it enough, I love this gut wrenching story! More soon, please!
Author's Response: You will hear more from Bella soon and all will be revealed! I am so grateful for your review!
Reviewer: sjones5199 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
AWESOME!!!! That was the scene I have been looking forward to over the past weeks...even as heartwrenching as it was just having them together in the same room was great! As always...counting the days till your next update!
Author's Response: I will submit very soon! I am glad you felt I did this scene justice. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Juliamine (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
Phew, I think I held my breath through this whole chapter. You wrote Edward seeing her again exactly the way it should have been. I can feel his remorse, his pain and suffering. I can only hope she can find it in her heart to realize the mistake he made is somehow fixable. They are soul mates, we all know that. This is my glimmer of hope for a happy ending. Wow, lady, intense! I get so excited when I see updates, even though I know the chapter will most likely make me cry. But I am ok with that. This story is so powerful, filled with so much sorrow, but somehow I have to believe you have a plan and trust that.
Author's Response: I swear, I do! It will be ok, just not at the moment! I am so grateful for your amazing review!
Reviewer: Amillyna (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
You write emotion so well. It's amazing. Really, really great chapter. I feel so sad for them. :( Keep up the great work!
- Amil
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words and your review!
Reviewer: Abimaddevil17 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 12:12 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
omg tht was so sad. i had tears in my eyes. it was good tho :) i know u literally just have but plz update asap!
Abbie :D
Author's Response: I know, right! Thank you for the review.
Reviewer: tatie87 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
So sad to see Edward's interaction with Bella.
Author's Response: Edward has so much grief and guilt right nowo. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
*SNIFF*
Author's Response: I know, right? Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Sadielady115 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 12:07 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
umm .... Wow god it was so sad. but so well writen! I perfer storys with longer chapters but I love this story. please update soon!
Author's Response: This story lends itself to longer chapters but more of them. I am glad you enjoy it anyway! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: anna123 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 12:07 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
I'm feeling so bad for Edward right now! Hope you'll update soon!!
Author's Response: Edward is having a rough time right now. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
Bella needs to wake up!!!!
Author's Response: We have a way to go before that time, but there is a lot going on in between! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: hmogburn (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
*tear*
Author's Response: This one is a heart string puller. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: t1nkerbell9598 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 12:04 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
Poor, poor Edward and Bella. I really hope that she gets better and that they will be fine. Thanks, Jennifer
Author's Response: It will be a long road, but everything will be ok. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: lulabelljane (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 12:03 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
I was seriously holding my breath the entire time I read this chapter...cause I knew 23 was going to be hard to read...and damn you were right! :( He was breaking my heart begging her to forgive him and asking for Bella and the baby to both be fine...ugh!
Good thing I had my big girl panties on today!
Ellie...in case you forgot....YOU ROCK! :)
Author's Response: Aw! Thank you so much for your support with everything. I hope I did this one justice.
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