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Reviewer: JennieGirl (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 11:14 AM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
She believes in Happy Endings.... She believes in Happy EndingsShe believes in Happy EndingsShe believes in Happy EndingsShe believes in Happy EndingsShe believes in Happy EndingsShe believes in Happy Endings :) I am in the corner rocking back and forth :)
Author's Response: ::: pats you on back :: :It'll be okay. Keep repeating the mantra.
Thank you SO much for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: JW11 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
Well at least he got there. I hope his presence helps. Looking forward to the happy moments.
Author's Response: We have a way to go before the happy. But there is relief, a little, in the next chapter.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: UR_PERSONAL_HEROIN (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 10:58 AM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
this chapter was so sad. but i was glad to see that bella was responding to edwards voice. i got to say that im not really looking forward to the chapter that you say will be worse. but i guess once things get so bad, theres nothing left but to finally get better. i just hope she forgives edward and is able to have a healthy baby.
Author's Response: Everything *will* be okay in the end. I promise. Just hang on.
It does get worse, but not for no reason. There has to be pain before their is healing.
Thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: alicenative (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
Whew, poor Bella. Poor Edward. What a sad situation they are in. I can't wait for Bella to awaken and for her and the baby to be ok.
Author's Response: We have a way to go before we see them speak about their situation, but there is a LOT to go in the interim.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: scottslass (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 10:53 AM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
Beautiful...
Author's Response: Thank you.
Reviewer: Piper Smith (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 10:48 AM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
Aw, even sobbing Edward is cute.
Author's Response: Well, that's a plus. There's lots of sobbing Edward to come!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
*tears* *Bawl*
OMG...when Edward's hand flew to his mouth when he walked into Bella's room for the fist time...it was so unbearably sad :'(
he keeps calling her "my Love" *sigh* This is so heartbreaking...his hand entwined with hers moving unconsciously to her belly *awww*...and him telling her he wants this :)
CRY**** Edward crying like a baby is soooooo sad....i've been waiting for this chap for so long...you did not let us down *sigh*
Author's Response: I am so very glad I did this justice. It was a pivotal chapter, and a difficult chapter, to write. That it turned out well is so encouraging to me.
Thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: VampireInTraining (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
I cried, and not just little tears either. Full on bawling. This was a heartwrenching chapter. I can't do more than wit somewhat patiently for your next chapter. This was so amazing. I am utterly speechless.
Author's Response: I will do my best to get the next chapter up soon.
I'm sorry this hurt so badly, but, alas, it was meant to.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
That was a wonderful chapter! I could really feel the emotional pain Edward was/is in.
Author's Response: Edward has so many feelings swimming around in his head right now. It's a scary place to be.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: ThatOnePVkid (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
so sad. i honestly can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: I will have it up as quickly as validation allows.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Sweetheartwithfangs (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 10:21 AM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
...*burst out sobbing*...She believes in happy endings, She believes in happy endings She believes in happy endings She believes in happy endings She believes in happy endings She believes in happy endings She believes in happy endings She believes in happy endings She believes in happy endings She believes in happy endings She believes in happy endings She believes in happy endings She believes in happy endings She believes in happy endings She believes in happy endings She believes in happy endings She believes in happy endings She believes in happy endings...I need reassurance!!! ok I'm going to go bake to try and stop the tears. *sniffs* ok subsiding now. Love your story! Update soon Please!!
Author's Response: Just keep repeating the mantra, love. It'll help. I promise.
Support groups forming on the thread.
Thanks SO much for reviewing!
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 10:18 AM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
Ugh I wish you had More words & Less spaces!! Or at least longer chapters
I check this site almost daily now, waiting for you're updates! This one is my favorite. *sigh* You should have it published! It's thee most awesome Twilight variation I've seen
~Shawna
Author's Response: Alas, the story is meant to have short, impactful chapters. The spaces are a function of my word program's relation to Twilighted's system. I am sorry for both.
Wow, thank you for those amazing compliments. It just stuns me that anyone thinks that way about me or my story. Thank you!
Reviewer: annetted (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
Thanks for making me bloody well cry at work!!! Only one complaint - it wasn't long enough. I like to wallow in my misery! Please keep posting. I would love some of those unicorns.
Author's Response: This story is just made for shorter chapters and more updates, so I'll make you a deal to keep trying to update often...
Thanks so much for reviewing, despite me making you cry at work!
Reviewer: smalls (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 10:01 AM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
ok...that was pretty sad...but carlisle has hope so i'm going with that. :) it's going to be bad when she wakes up, isn't it...and when charlie sees edward...oh boy.
Author's Response: Oh yeah. It's going to be rotten.
I do appreciate your review, and your hope!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
SO VERY HEARTBREAKING..........TEARS:(
Author's Response: It is a tough one, I know. Hang in there!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Maplestyle (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 09:49 AM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
Code Red is right! I need a breather after this. Great chapter though, can't wait for the next ones.
Author's Response: You will get a bit of a breather in the next chapter. You'll need it before 25.
Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 09:45 AM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
What a beautiful way to ask for forgiveness.
Author's Response: He will ask any way she'll allow him and a lot of ways she won't.
Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Cedwardsgirl (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
awwwwww. Poor Edward :(
Author's Response: It's a little of 'poor everyone' right now, hunh?
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: stupidsuckedinreader (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
:)
Author's Response: Works for me!
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: ninachr (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 09:27 AM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
She believes in Happy Endings,She believes in Happy Endings,She believes in Happy Endings,She believes in Happy Endings,She believes in Happy Endings,She believes in Happy Endings,She believes in Happy Endings,She believes in Happy Endings....and so do I...Please don't let it get too bad.. ;D
I can't wait for them to be happy together.
Author's Response: That's right, love. Repeat the mantra. Alas, it gets worse before it gets better...
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: mashley13 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 09:24 AM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
WOW...
you are a great writer.
can't wait for the next post!!!
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you for the amazing compliment and the review!
Reviewer: Shell_Linkin (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 09:20 AM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
Oh how my heart is breaking! I just couldn't wait till I got home so I read this at work.....big mistake, I've been crying all over the place! This is a story that will stick with me for a long long time, thank you for writing something so moving, emotional and original.
I'll be excitedly waiting for your next update.....
Author's Response: Oh my gosh! What an amazing review? I feel like putting disclaimers on the story about not reading in public! Thanks so much for your kind words.
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 09:18 AM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
so sad.
can't wait until the next chapter
Author's Response: The next chapter is a wee break, but I hazard to say, 25 is worse than this.
Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Rachael (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 09:14 AM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
So sad. :(
Author's Response: This is one tough chapter, I know.
Thanks so much for reviewing.
Reviewer: caperves1979 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 09:10 AM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
I just want to hug them both!
Author's Response: Yeah. I did too, when writing. So tragic, what they did to each other and themselves.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
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