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Reviews For Not Like This
Reviewer: Dragon81 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 12:12 PM · On: Chapter 24 - Leave the Weapons Behind

Not fair distracting us with Cullen sundaes before the start of the chapter :-(.  Always love hearing from Emmett.  Esme is right, that boy wouldn't know subtle if it kicked him in the rear.  I have my big girl panties ready for the next chapter, bring it on!



Author's Response: Emmett rocks though. I thought his pov was most fitting for this chapter. Next will be up soon! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: OCD - ObsessiveCullenDisorder (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 12:10 PM · On: Chapter 24 - Leave the Weapons Behind

Oh how I love your Emmett... he makes me smile....

Poor Charlie =o(

Next chapter asap please....

<3



Author's Response: Emmett is the bees knees! Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: twitina (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 24 - Leave the Weapons Behind

I've been waiting for Charlie!!  He only knows part of it.  The fireworks are on the way with him!!

I'll be here, waiting for your next update.  Deep breaths...just keep taking deep breaths!!



Author's Response: The next one is coming soon. Get a new tissue box! Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: twilighter767 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 24 - Leave the Weapons Behind

hahaha i love emment!!!!gud chapter!!



Author's Response: Emmett rocks my socks! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: secamimom (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 12:02 PM · On: Chapter 24 - Leave the Weapons Behind

I love Emmett!  Can't wait for more, even if it is a partial code scarlett



Author's Response: We needed to get Charlie into play and Emmett was just the man to do it. E/B back in a big way next chapter. Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: sweetishbubble (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 12:00 PM · On: Chapter 24 - Leave the Weapons Behind

I loved it!!  Can I have my sundae with a side of naked carlisle? Thanks.



Author's Response: Carlisle on his way wearing nothing but a lab coat! Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: luckymac (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 12:00 PM · On: Chapter 24 - Leave the Weapons Behind

Big fan of Emmett. I huffed when I saw I was not going to get my wish for more E/B action, but will admit I like Emmett. Very excited to see what happens next. Update soon! I'll take that sudae, by the way with chocolate body paint and whipped cream. ;)



Author's Response: The Cullen is on his way, riding the cookie filled unicorn! E/B is back in in a big way next chapter. But we needed to get Charlie into play. Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: smb (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 11:56 AM · On: Chapter 24 - Leave the Weapons Behind

I really can't wait to read the next part.  Your story is incredible.  Hopefully we will get to read more soon.



Author's Response: I am so glad you are enjoying the story! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Mom4Carlyle (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition

I started reading this story this morning while waiting for some things to finish running on my computer at work.  But I could not stop reading.  I read all 23 chapters and was furious that there wasn't more.  All work related activities completely forgotten.  I guess that means I actually need to get some work done now.

I have a new favorite to look forward to updates on. 

 



Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so much for your kind words and your review! I am glad you are enjoying it!

Reviewer: memmem95 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 11:51 AM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition

So... that was really good writing but I'm really worried about how many times I'm going to repeat she believes in happy endings.

The chapter really was amazing. I really loved it even though it was code red. Well not loved as in I like the super sad chain of events happening right now. But more like loved the way it was written.

Can't wait for more!



Author's Response: I honestly do believe in happy endings! Hold on! Thanks so much for your review!

Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 08:46 AM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition

Wow. Now that is some serious groveling. I wonder what she'll do/say when she comes around. Good chapter hun, very dark.



Author's Response: There will be some light in the next chapter, but then once more into the abyss. Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 05:20 AM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition

Wow.

 

I am not a fan of the "human" stories, in general, because I feel they take grave liberties, but wow.

 

This is an amazing story. Brutal but beautiful.  I will definitely be waiting for the updates.



Author's Response: Gosh, thank you so much for your kind words and amazing review!

Reviewer: LoveBugged (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation

I'm so tired right now, gah, I feel so bad, I'm only at ch 3 and I'm already beat. I ditched the cheesecake and ate the cookie n cream icecream cake. Sleepy..I'll continue this tomorrow, effin work...



Author's Response: It is a draining story! Thanks for reading it again and reviewing! Now get some sleep!

Reviewer: Couture Girl (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition

ok ok so im like totally obssed by this! when r u going to post the next chapter??!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response: It has already been submitted for validation. Thanks so much for your enthusiasm and your review!

Reviewer: LoveBugged (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 2 - The Last Day of My Life

Never thought I'd see the day that I'd say this but, OMFG, arigato gozaimasu stephenie-chan! The weaving of New Moon with Not Like This couldn't been any better, it's utterly perfect! Sorry that I'm just soo....overwhelmed.



Author's Response: Wow! I am overwhelmed by your review! Thanks so much!

Reviewer: LoveBugged (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End

I just noticed the the earlier chapters are a tad longer, but knowing you woman, you planned everythaaang out for a reason. Now re-reading the story, the title flows so well with all the aspects/situations. It broke my heart when Bella mentioned it was the last week of her life. I loved the picture she had painted out of her and Edward, getting married, going to college....having kids. God it kills--now that I'm being reminded of what had came later on. Bella and Edward's first time......hmmm.......probably every high school's dream of the sort, but definitely, not like this.



Author's Response: Thank you! With the chapter length, they talk until they are done. The current chapters, at the middle of the story, are more frenzied and therefore shorter with more impact. They vary a bit, but not by much. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: LoveBugged (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 08:04 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End

Hi pomme! This is Ever--if you remember from the forum. Sorry, I was an ass for neglecting the reviewing for the chapters, blame my laziness. lol. So hubby is away tonight so it is just the cheesecake and I. I think I'm going to read the story again, yay....haha, wataloser.



Author's Response: No worries! Glad you are back! Enjoy the read! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition

That is just heart-wrenching!



Author's Response: It is a tough one, I know. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: bellasunderstudy (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 10:40 AM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition

Dear Lord! That was just....wow. Yeah, Ouch isn't even any where near strong enough. Bless both their hearts, Edward is just as broken as Bella. I'm going to continue the mantra that you believe in happy endings cause Sweet Baby Jesus this was painful. 

Beautiful writing and even though my heart feels like it's been ripped out and stomped on with every chapter, I  love the story!



Author's Response: Aw! I will make it better! Pick up your heart and shove it back in, because some of the future chaps need something to rip at! 24's teaser is up on the thread! Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: ellenaor (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition

Love, Love, Love!!! When I got the update I did a happy dance and now I'm doing another happy dance because I love, love, love this story. 



Author's Response: Wow! Thank you! I truly appreciate your review!

Reviewer: bella2k9 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition

wow. its so intense. i cant wait for the next updates

thanks x



Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words and review!

Reviewer: rosamistica (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 08:33 AM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell

I cried, clinging to her, arms wrapped tightly around her waist as she sang and rocked and I bid farewell to my childhood.

“Then come,” Esme whispered, pulling my head to her chest and kissing my hair, rocking me steadily and humming softly.  “You can be a child for a moment longer.”

 We imagine that it is the child letting go of his childhood. However, we forget that the mother too is confronted with the reality that her baby now needs to be a man. I dread and yet look forward to a moment like this, with five "babies" of my own.

Beautifully written, pomme_de_terre. Kudos!



Author's Response: As do I with my son. And it is her youngest as well. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: hugsandkisses1320 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 07:57 AM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition

This is just way too sad!! (and this chapter was too short!!) Must. Beg. For. Update!!!!!! Please update again soon!



Author's Response: Lol. They are all about the same length. There is more to come though! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: ablissfulday (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 07:39 AM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition

So, I just read start to finish, and I need more. Please?



Author's Response: I post fairly often so more should be up soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: ShannonMcK (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 07:30 AM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition

WOW...is all I can say. This chapter was incredible. I love how you incorporated his prayers. This felt so real, it made me cry. Thank you for sharing your story.



Author's Response: I am so glad I did this chapter justice. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

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