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Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 11:19 AM · On: Chapter 24 - Leave the Weapons Behind

That's what I love about this story- you update faster than anyone else!

I love Emmett's outlook on life, so carefree but still very caring about those who are important to him!



Author's Response: I try to update quickly! Emmett has such a clear, simple view if everything, yet he completely understands the situation. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: fletchmartin (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 11:13 AM · On: Chapter 24 - Leave the Weapons Behind

Wow, Emmett has manners!  It was actually cool to see him being a gentleman.  I think it's cute that he tries not to cuss around his mom.  He's such a lunkhead sometimes but quite adorable.  Please update soon!  I'm gearing up for Code Scarlet!



Author's Response: I am so glad you liked Emmett! He just needed to be heard. The next chap will be up soon! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: giada marsielle (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 11:13 AM · On: Chapter 24 - Leave the Weapons Behind

This story is awesome, P. I love how you keep adding unexpected perspectives... I would have expected to see this scene from Charlie's POV, or even Esme's, but Emmett did it much better than I think they would have.

 

Can't wait til the next update!



Author's Response: Thank you! I am so grateful you understand the story! Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: littletags99 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 11:10 AM · On: Chapter 24 - Leave the Weapons Behind

This is a great story and I am looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response: It should be out soon. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: BethBSB5 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 24 - Leave the Weapons Behind

Another great chapter! I think it's a good thing that you held off on giving Charlie the "big" news in Forks...he would've gone into the hospital with guns a blazin' (literally)!



Author's Response:

Not to mention, Esme and Emmett don't really know the story at this point.  Only the basics.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: edwardandbellabelong2gether (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 10:58 AM · On: Chapter 24 - Leave the Weapons Behind

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE put it up soon...you've got to stop leaving us hanging like this.  I am GOING INSANE!!  I check this stupid site every five minutes looking for an update!



Author's Response:

LOL!  I am sure it will be up shortly.  If you add the story to favourites, you will get an email when I update!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: goldsnitch0118 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 10:46 AM · On: Chapter 24 - Leave the Weapons Behind

I don't know if I'm ready for the next chapter, but I sure want to read it! haha



Author's Response:

Just hang on to your hat and put on the big girl panties, and you'll be fine!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: 8vamp8 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 10:30 AM · On: Chapter 24 - Leave the Weapons Behind

I love when you write in Emmett's POV.

More than any of the others.

He really is a sweetheart. and he loves Bella so much! : )

Keep up the amazing writing!!



Author's Response:

I am glad you love Emmett!  He's such a sweetie.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: april09 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 24 - Leave the Weapons Behind

I love Emmett.  Can't wait to see the next one, even if it is a code scarlet.



Author's Response:

I am sure it will be up soon!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: alicenative (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 10:05 AM · On: Chapter 24 - Leave the Weapons Behind

I was on the edge of my seat with this one.  I hoped that Charlie wouldn't go off the deep end.  Can't wait for your next update.



Author's Response:

I am sure I'll have it up soon!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: dancing_in_my_underwear (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 09:55 AM · On: Chapter 24 - Leave the Weapons Behind

Emmett POV!!! I like how matter of fact he is about everything. It was great to have a break from the tissues lol. YAY Charlie is coming!!!



Author's Response:

He is such a breath of fresh air.

Thanks so much for all of your support both here and on the thread!

Reviewer: edward08 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 24 - Leave the Weapons Behind

it was great cant wait for update



Author's Response:

I am sure it will be up soon.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: guccisassy (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 24 - Leave the Weapons Behind

OK that was great.  Ready for the next chapter....



Author's Response:

I am sure it will be up soon.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 24 - Leave the Weapons Behind

Aww, I love Emmett. Leave the weapons here? I love it! Too cute! Good chapter hun!



Author's Response: He has to protect his brother, no matter what. It is best Charlie is unarmed! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: iponeddyou (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 09:25 AM · On: Chapter 24 - Leave the Weapons Behind

Emmett is... like the sunshine in Forks, I think.
He's so humorous, and he tries to lighten even the worst situations.
He might not think he's good at the whole comforting thing.
But he gives me hope.

Thing's will work out fine, in due time.
Now to search out that damn pack of travel tissue's.

You. Rock.
May I have your autograph? >:D

xoxo - Cherolyn



Author's Response: Thank you so much! Emmett has quite a good grasp of the situation, but he chooses to overcome it with wit. Thanks so much for your support.

Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 09:14 AM · On: Chapter 24 - Leave the Weapons Behind

That went pretty well. I don't envy Carlisle for his portion of the explanation.



Author's Response: The question is, will Carlisle even have the chance to give it? Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: sassyf (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 09:10 AM · On: Chapter 24 - Leave the Weapons Behind

Poor Charlie....poor Edward....Poor Bella....Poor everyone!!  This is heart wrenching to say the least!  I hope Bella wakes up soon.



Author's Response:

Yup.  All of them are suffering and all of them will suffer FAR more.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 09:09 AM · On: Chapter 24 - Leave the Weapons Behind

oh...i'd like an edward sundae with chocholate body paint please...lol

can't wait for more



Author's Response:

LOL!  Sending him over on a cookie filled unicorn!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Nicole March (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition

Ouch is right - I cried alright, and the intensity of this chapter actually gave me a headache in, like, 5 minutes!  A beautiful portrayal of two broken people - I could picture the scene clearly, and it's a heartbreaking one.  Edward's speeches in this chapter are powerful, but I know that's not going to be enough when Bella regains consciousness, so I am curious now as to what the next step is on their broken journey.  Great writing, as usual!!



Author's Response:

Chapter 25 will show you the next glimpse into this tangled mess...  It's a long long road.

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: corriander (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 24 - Leave the Weapons Behind

WOW! Emmett and Esme sure got the shitty end of the stick eh... But at least the chief know Bella is alive!!! Im sitting her patiently waiting for the next chapter while I write this... I cant explain the point I stopped reading this tory because I was too anxious and impatient LOL but just like an addict I popped open the tab and read to catch up from flight of the phoenix and now Im back to my addict ways checking every few hour for updates! I Cant wait to see the Bella and Edward response!



Author's Response:

LOL!  Welcome back! 

The next chapter will be up soon, and there is a sneak peek on my thread, if you would like to see.

I'm truly happy you have stayed with the story!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: annetted (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 24 - Leave the Weapons Behind

Great chapter and I love Emmet.  I know you've said that this story lends itself to short chapters but, Jeez I wish they were longer.  I feel as though I'm just getting into it when it ends.  Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

At least I update often!  Truly, the chapters need to be this way.  They are snippets of the characters mind at one particular moment.  Like a dream sequence.  What happens in our heads takes mere seconds but feels like hours.

I am glad you are still reading!

Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: ktleigh (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 08:49 AM · On: Chapter 24 - Leave the Weapons Behind

Good idea to disarm Charlie! Can't wait for an update...I wanna see how Charlie takes the news!



Author's Response:

You'll get Charlie again soon, but it's E/B and Alice all the way next chapter.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: sgk39 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 08:47 AM · On: Chapter 24 - Leave the Weapons Behind

I love how you get in Emmett's head. Brilliant, really!!! More, please.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it!  I SO love Emmett.  He's a big teddy bear who keeps his wits about him, but still understands the seriousness of it all.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: 1twilightfan4ever (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 08:47 AM · On: Chapter 24 - Leave the Weapons Behind

I'm so glad that Charlie is finally on the way there.  Even though he will have alot to deal with...he needs to be there and see her for himself. 

I just absolutely LOVE Emmett....totally takes the edge off of things!  Got to love him for it.

Looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Emmett manages to keep his wit while still completely understanding how dire the situation truly is.  I am glad you enjoyed it.

Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: VampireInTraining (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 08:44 AM · On: Chapter 24 - Leave the Weapons Behind

awwww!!! I love emmett!! Hurry with the next chapter or prepare to be potatoed!!!! *aims rather large potato*



Author's Response:

LOL!  My nom de plume comes to haunt me!  Don't throw!

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