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Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 12:02 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
Wow! that was great... WAKE UP BELLA!!!!! it is so sad... but brilliant.. thanks for the great chapter..
Author's Response: Sigh, alas there is another wrinkle to come.
I am so glad you enjoyed the chapter. I appreciate your review!
Reviewer: caperves1979 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
At least she can hear them, that's good right? I just keep reminding myself that you won't let Bella and the baby die and that you believe in happy endings. You've promised. "Happy baby, happy ending" is my mantra while reading this story.
Author's Response: Keep repeating, sweet! I mean it.
I never said I wouldn't make it hurt and scare the hell out of you in the interim!
Thanks so much for the review!
Reviewer: xxDevil18xx (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 11:37 AM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
Oh My God....you are offically my favorite author on Twilighted. I cried while I read this and I've only do that if the story is really really good. And I was bawling like a baby. I can't wait for the next chapter, you have no idea how much i wish you had the next chapter for tomorrow. =) I love you, and this story and am so happy you wrote it. I mean how Edward was clinging to her, and whispering those bittersweet things I almost died. You are just awesome. Every time I read a chater from NLT (Not like this) I always think about whats going to happen in the next chapter. Im always wrong of course, you always seem to take me by surprise. I can't wait for the next chapter. Good Luck!
Author's Response: Holy Smokes! What an amazing review!? I'm so flattered that you feel this way about my story (and me!) and that you are connecting to the story in such an impactful way.
Thank you so much for your kind words and for reviewing!
Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 11:23 AM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
wow very intense
Author's Response: It is a tough one.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Panda1499 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 11:14 AM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
I liked seeing that Bella is hearing them. And the reactions she's having to the voices, it makes me think she'll be kind of accepting of letting them back into her life!! More please!
Manda
Author's Response: We are seeing her unadulterated thoughts and feelings with no rational thought to temper it. It won't be easy at all once she is alert again. But you're right. The fact that she still loves him, still wants him there, is so hopeful.
Thanks so much for reviewing.
Reviewer: saranic (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 11:12 AM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
Mos def code Scarlett! Wow, that was so emotional. I love how she is hearing him, though.
So good!
Author's Response: I am so glad you are enjoying the story!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: enthralled (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
Loved Bella's POV...
Author's Response: I am so glad you are enjoying!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Maplestyle (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:59 AM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
Well my tears will attest to you doing this chapter right! Man that was powerful! Great job!
Author's Response: Wow. I'm so glad you connected to the story like that. Thank you!
I appreciate the review!
Reviewer: kellyliz82 (Anonymous) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:58 AM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
I love the way Alice takes care of Bella, uses what she knows as a source of comfort. Of course alice would do a makeover, even if it is dry shampoo and hairbrushing. It was nice to finally see Bella's POV again. Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Alice does what Alice *knows*. If she looks pulled together, she feels better, so the same must be true of Bella. But really, she just wants to do *something* to improve Bella's quality of life.
I'm glad you enjoyed hearing from Bella again. As she's not awake, we only get unadulterated thought, but I thought I'd give a glimpse anyway!
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: stupidsuckedinreader (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:54 AM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
Definitely tears. Keep writing. Love the short little chapters and frequent updates. :)
Author's Response: I am glad you enjoy the way I post the story. I have definite reasons for this!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: sassyf (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
Too short!! I want more!! Great chapter and yes it was heart wrenching!!
Author's Response: There is more to come soon!
Thanks so hard for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: twilight girly 1901 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:42 AM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
OME! PLEASE UPDATE! i must read more :D is bella going to wake up the next chapter?! this is so intense, i love it <3
Author's Response: Sigh... there is another wrinkle to come.
We have more time before Bella wakes up, alas.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Beautiful_Distraction (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:39 AM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
Whoa, there....any of the Cullen men, naked, with desserts??!?! Well...well...let's ponder this....
Jasper...sexy eyes, hair, body...and DIMPLES!!
Carlisle...I can call him "Hey Big Daddy"...and well, he's GORGEOUS!
Emmett...broad shoulders, bangin' body, enough strength to make "our" time very interesting...HOT!!!
Edward...smoldering eyes, tousled hair, and rippped abs/body...BEAUTIFUL
Can I put in an order for all of them?!?!?!
LMAO!
Love this chapter...love the story...love you!
XOXO
-Whitney
Author's Response: Let's just invite them all over in just their aprons with chocolate body paint and take turns! LOL!
Thank you so much for all of your support both of this story and my mess of my life! I couldn't have made it through the last two weeks without your girls!
YAY for reviews!
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:34 AM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
so sad...
can't wait for more
Author's Response: I know it's sad. I wish I could say that's the end of the sad, but it's not. However, there is a happy ending!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: dolphin62598 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
Holy Christmas!! That was AWESOME! I think you are doing a great job of coding the sections!! It was definitely code scarlet for that last part! Sheesh! Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: I am so glad you think I did this justice. I know it's a hard read, but I hope you hang in there and follow us to the HEA!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:30 AM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
Wow. So she's finally coming around and hearing them. Now she just needs to get her body to respond and wake up. This was a very sweet chapter. I don't think it was sad, I think it was more sweet than anything. Great chapter hun!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for thinking I did this justice! I appreciate your review!
Reviewer: LisaLoo (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
sigh. The pain is unbearable. I love the image of Edward whispering to her with his forehead pressed to hers. So sweet. Thank you for a great update.
Author's Response: I've got a lot of comments about that imagery! I'm glad it was that powerful!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: cjngrls (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
please keep updating... I love this story and want to follow it till the end...
Author's Response: I hope you do!
I will never leave this story incomplete. So hang on and tag along!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
Okay, so I know you say you believe in happy endings and I'm going to cling on for dear life the fact that Bella wants Edward and isn't pissed at him in her "dream" that when she wakes it won't be full of angst on her part when it comes to forgiving him. I know there's still a lot these two need to talk about, but the love has always been there. I'm sure there will be other factors like Charlie that may not want them together, but I'm hoping the resolution won't drag on too long. These two have been through enough pain for a lifetime!
Absolutely wonderfully written chapter. Now I'm off to take a Xanax for my nerves! LOL More soon, please!
Author's Response: LOL! Alas, there are still miles to go before we sleep.
There is a lot of hope in this chapter. Nothing can break the connection between the two of them, even though there is so much damage to heal.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: kenziemorton (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
edwards and bella awww! loved it. you rock
Author's Response: Aw! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: angmclure (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:17 AM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
Oh, I got choked up on that one, luckly I was off work when I read it. You are doing a great job and I can't wait for the rest of the story.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading it and reviewing! It means a lot that you're connecting to the story!
Reviewer: kerbear (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
Beautiful! Awaiting patiently, forget that impatiently, lol. keep it coming.
Author's Response: LOL! I love your honesty!
Thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: PLV (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:12 AM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
It's ok no Cullens need to show up. Just needed extra tissues is all. Nice chapter, except I was crying. I am glad Alice is there to and can Bella ca not only hear Edward but Alice as well.
I am pleased it is not ending yet and you have a ways to go with the story. I will patiently wait for it. =-D
Author's Response: Thank you so much for all of your kind comments and reviews! I am so grateful you are enjoying the story! Yes, there is much more to go, so hang on to your hat!
Reviewer: twilightchick (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:07 AM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
Each chapter just gets better and better!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am grateful you are reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: kuntrygal (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:03 AM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
*sniffs* She does believe in happy endings.......she does believe in happy endings.....
Great chapter. I gotta go find some fluff to read. All of my favorite stories are in serious heart fail mode.
Author's Response: I do! I promise, I do!
The teaser is up for 26, the arrival of Charlie, on the thread.
Oh, and go try Cullen Robotics. Nothing like smut to distract you!
Thanks so much for your review!
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