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Reviewer: lachica Bella (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 12:01 AM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix
I'm glad that he's not cowering and wants to be strong for Bella and their child. I just hope that he can keep it together when he is finally able to see her. Because she will definitely be a SORE sight to take in.
Author's Response: It will not be pretty, no.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: lachica Bella (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 11:33 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
Oh yay for Esme. She found her voice. Now let's hope that Edward heads her warning!
Author's Response: I love Esme. You will hear from her again in the future.
Thank you for your review!
Reviewer: lachica Bella (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 11:22 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile
Oh you are evil! THank goodness I'm reading this now and the next chapter is up. I would have died waiting for the next one. Of course this is not acomplete fic and you'll probably get your chance to make feel like Edward feels now- "Tell! Me!...Please!" lol =)
Author's Response: Lol! Not too far to go before you get to that point! I do update often, though.
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: lachica Bella (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:48 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary
I'm not going to comment on this chapter- instead I'm going to comment on you A/N. I would just like to say that this is a fictitious story. That being said- I completely understand why Bella would have collapsed. She's not under care of a physician, she's not taking vitamins to fortify herself and the baby, she's malnourished, she's under a heavy strain, extremely stressed out, totally and completely hoplessly depressed- just one of these can send spiral you into having contraction which would lead to premature labor. All of these compounded are sure to lead her to the ER- and who knows what unstable future for her and the baby. So I see that your story is on target- and yes I'm a mother too- and reading it breaks my heart, and reading your AN did the same, but I understand it's just fiction. I do not and would not ever think that you are sadistic in anyway- I would actually venture to say that this makes your story allthe more believable and realistic in nature. As hard as it maybe- if it were RL Bella would have collapsed and ended in the Hospital much sooner. I love your story- It's heart wrenching, gritty, and conceivable. =)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for understanding both my story and my A/N. I have no intention of hurting any baby in this story! Not my style. Still, Bella's condition is tenuous at best and something was bound to happen.
I appreciate your review!
Reviewer: lachica Bella (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:33 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response
The question is do you believe in happy endings because so far I don't think so. Please don't let anything happen to the baby. I think that's the last shread of sanity that Bella has to hold on to. She would dive into a world of solitude if she lost the one thing that has forced her to fight for life on a daily basis.
Author's Response: I promise, swear, that no harm will befall the baby. And I do believe in happy endings, we just have a way to go to get there.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: lachica Bella (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Strong Enough
I lke carlisle- he's such a man of action. And he's definitely a negotiator.
Author's Response: I love writing Carlisle! Such a complex, compassionate man.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Steph29 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:08 PM · On: Chapter 2 - The Last Day of My Life
Poor Bella!
Author's Response: Bella just got the shock of her life and now she has to face it alone. Poor girl.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: lachica Bella (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Grandfather
Wel yeahit's not going to be so simple. One: Bella is super stubborn and she's had 8 months to drill it into her head that the Cullens-Edward in particular- didn't want her, didn't love her. So now she's full of doubt, self-loathing, and feels like she's less than pond scum. Of course it's not gonna be the white knight rides on his white horse and makes everything better.
Author's Response: Edward has a lot of strength to find before he makes it to white knight status, but have faith!
Thabks for reviewing!
Reviewer: OperationNautilus (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
looved this chapter. It's one of my favourites. Love the BPOV especially. Great job can't wait for more.
Author's Response: I am truly glad you anjoyed it. A lot of my heart went into it.
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Steph29 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End
Ooo, just stumbled upon this and liking it already!
Author's Response: I am glad you found us and are enjoying reading!
Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: lachica Bella (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 09:48 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Nightmare of a Love Story
Um yeah it just makes you feel even more desperate for Bella. This is soooo sad.
Author's Response: Bella has definitely had a rough time of things!
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: ElizabethGere (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 07:05 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
awww I can't wait to see what is next. I love how your writing this. it might be sad and scary but its playing out like a real life story would happen! keep going.
Wish i could rate higher than a 10
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you. I am glad you are enjoying the story and how it is written. It means a lot to me!
Reviewer: taylach (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
It's got to be really hard writing something like this, so full of roar emotions. Your done a good job. Can't wait for an update
Thanks
Author's Response: It absolutely is. You have to put yourself in their head and feel it.
Thank you so much for your review!
Reviewer: hmogburn (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
"No one deserves forgiveness. We are all granted it. All of us."
That was beautiful. I just hope she feels the same way when she wakes up.
I know you keep saying its going to get worse... and that scares me out of my frappin mind. How could it possibly get worse? The only way I can imagine this getting worse is I guess them losing the baby... or Bella denying herself and pushing Edward away. But I don't even want to think about that.
"She believes in Happily Ever Afters"... thats what I'm supposed to be chanting, right? lol
Author's Response: It does get worse but not much! And I really do believe in HEA's!
There is hope in that Bella's unfiltered emotions are still of love and togetherness. You are right though. It will be harder once she is alert.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
Augh! You are the queen of torture!!!
*sigh* I read these in like 1 minute!! It's like drinking water - *gulp*gulp*chug*
Author's Response: Lol! They are just dozens of small pictures of the inside workings of the characters minds woven together to make a story.
I am glad you read and reviewed!
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
Sweet woman. Oh how I cried with this chapter. You DEFINITELY did it right.
God, it was simply heart breaking and beautiful. Thank you for that.
Thank you.
Author's Response: I am so glad you connected to this chapter. It is an important one to me and holds much of my heart. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 03:47 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
I hate my unresponsive tear ducts! It was so amazingly beautiful, but I didn't cry. :(
This story is beautiful. Thanks for sharing it.
Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 03:47 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
I hate my unresponsive tear ducts! It was so amazingly beautiful, but I didn't cry. :(
This story is beautiful. Thanks for sharing it.
Author's Response: I am really worried I didn't do it justice.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Please_BiteMe (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
Well crap... I'm just a blubbering pile of goo.... but so so so glad she's listening... And Alice always brightens my mood even when her part makes me cry too.... Please post soooooon!
Author's Response: Bella hears him and still loves him, but she can't bring herself to believe him. There is hope, but so much damage to heal.
I heart Alice!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: lachica Bella (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
emmett is da shiznit!
Author's Response: I love me some Emmett!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: lachica Bella (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Social Networking
yea- just hope bella doesn't beat feet when she learns that the cullen clan know her whereabouts.
Author's Response: That would not be good.
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: LoveSunshine (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
Just a small snippet of happiness please? I know it will be rough, but I need some joy please!! Beautiful story, as always. I am moved by your writing.
Author's Response: Look to the hope in this chapter. Bella's raw, unfiltered emotions show that she still loves and wants him. There is hope.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
TOTAL SNIFFLE! Quick write more!!!!
Oh oh oh send me Edward, or mmm Emmit would be yummy to, no I think Edward, or course Jasper would be fun, Oh just suprise me.
Author's Response: Lol! No Big daddy C?
I am so glad you read and reviewed the story!
Author's Response: Lol! No Big daddy C?
I am so glad you read and reviewed the story!
Author's Response: Lol! No Big daddy C?
I am so glad you read and reviewed the story!
Reviewer: ThatOnePVkid (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 02:38 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
omg. i serious can't wait
Author's Response: There is more to come, my sweet. Thanks for reviewing!
Author's Response: There is more to come, my sweet. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: lachica Bella (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
Oh i feel overwhelmed by the emotions that over-power when I read Bella's pov. Edward's too but not as much as Bella's. You have really captured her broken spirit.
Author's Response: They truly want the same things and are still so connected. Thanks for reviewing!
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