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Reviewer: bellasunderstudy (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 10:47 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On

OW! This was so unbelievably beautiful and painful as always...The tears are streaming after this chapter. WOW! Alice POV was wonderful and I love the little pixie. Poor Bella believing that she's dreaming. Just amazing work and I am only hoping for her to wake in the next few chapters, though I know it won't be all fluffy bunnies when she does I can't wait to see what occurs when she realizes she's not dreaming and he really is there. Beautiful job!



Author's Response: Sigh, alas there is another wrinkle. It will all be okay in the end. 26 teaser is on the thread! Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Akelarre (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 04:50 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action

 Good story!  Right now you owe me 3 hours of holy sleep-, I m glue to the computer.


Love interaction between the family and friends and the  multy PoV.



Author's Response: I hope you enjoy the rest aa much! Get some sleep! Thanks for the review!

Author's Response: I hope you enjoy the rest aa much! Get some sleep! Thanks for the review!

Author's Response: I hope you enjoy the rest aa much! Get some sleep! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: nelln (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 03:47 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On

::sob:: my chest hurt reading this!  ::breath hitching:: my heart squeezed and my eyes were watering the whole time I was reading. 

 

This so depressing, but I'm still waiting to see what's gonna happen next.  Crap, even rubbing my chest won't make the ache go away!  Damn it!  Hurry up and update soon!

::sobbing in earnest::



Author's Response: Aw! I am sorry! It will be okay in the end! I am glad you read and thankful for your review!

Reviewer: Hazelnut4o6 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage

Emmett, Emmett, Emmett... Gotta love him



Author's Response: Emmett is the bomb diggity! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: LostCullen5 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 10:51 AM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On

"I'll send the Cullen of your choice, dressed in only an apron, to bake you cookies and possibly decorate them.  Or maybe they'll just drizzle the icing on you instead...."  -- Woohoo!  I'm all about having Edward, with or without the apron, show up at my house with cookies and icing!!  Damn, that's hot.  :o)

Anyhow, great chapter, very bittersweet.  Although I figured she could, I think it's really sweet that she can kinda hear them and that's what helping her.  Keep up the great work!  As always, we patiently await your every update.  :o)



Author's Response:

Ah, the Edward/icing combo is very popular!  I have one myself!

Thank you so much for reading this story and reviewing!

Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 10:35 AM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On

Need... more... :)



Author's Response: More...soon :) lol

Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 08:15 AM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On

Okay I'm out.

Oh Bella.  Baby it is going to be okay.  Edward is with you and he isn't going anywhere.  Alice is here too.  Carlisle is near and Charlie is on his way with Esme and Emmett. Just hang on baby.

Alice, doing what she does best.  How very soothing that in the face of adversity she in unfaltering and able to talk to Bella in such a familiar way.  To place myself in Bella's hospital gown, so to speak, I think that is exactly what I would want of my best friend.

And as sad as it is, and it is sad, the good news is that Bella is there.  She may be under the surface but she is there.  And in that I feel hope that she will break through.  Now if Edward can just keep talking to her bringing her forward because we really don't want to lose her, not now, not after she has come so far.

I am a bit concerned for Charlie now.  How this must be ripping his heart out, how it will rip it out further when he has a chance to see his baby girl.

And Esme.  Bella needs a mother's gentle touch and assurances now.    

And now that my heart rate is back to normal and the feeling of fail has passed I hunker in and prepare for the next installment .....

Sandra



Author's Response: What an amazing review! There is actually a lot of hope in this chapter as well. Both that she is still there and that, at her core, she still loves Edward. Charlie is up next and it is so not pretty. Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 07:53 AM · On: Chapter 24 - Leave the Weapons Behind

Leave it Emmett to "get on with the gettin'". 

Once again things went pretty well considering the circumstances and all.   Why Emmett even brought a bit of comic relief and we've all had a chance to catch our breath.

One more and I'll be caught up.

Box of kleenex by my side.  PPIP (power panties in place).  If I do not leave the next review in a timely fashion send in reinforcements.  1-2-3, deep breath, going in .........

Sandra



Author's Response: Poor thing. It is like waiting for a truck to hit you! Glad you enjoyed Emmett! He is so fun to write. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: spidermonkey_09 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 07:15 AM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On

omg 

im howling like a baby 

:( its so hard 

i ccannot wait till she wakes up 

i wanna know what happens to the baby

to edward and bella 

i cannot wait 

you write so good it atually feels like its real

xxx 



Author's Response: You will get all of your answers and your HEA. I am glad it feels real... I wanted it to seem like someone's true life experience. Actually' several someones! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 07:10 AM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On

I need a darn tissue! That was beautiful writing!



Author's Response: Aw, thanks! I appreciate your review!

Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 07:05 AM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition

I have been out for a few days so I am behind.

I have to say I expected much, much worse so this was't so bad.  The fact the moniter showed an improvement as Edward spoke to Bella and touched her made my heart do a bit of a flip ... in a good way. 

Sandra



Author's Response: I am glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Steph29 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 05:54 AM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On

All caught up and really enjoying it, hoping for a happy ending!



Author's Response: There will be. We just have a ways to go yet!

Reviewer: iyaaan (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 05:12 AM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On

yeah... so.. you need to update soon. i just really love this story.



Author's Response: I trry to update often! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: tnkrbl1970 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 04:51 AM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On

Love the story but have to say I don't like the super short chapters!

Author's Response: Alas they are short for a reason - there is a discussion of why in a prior author note. It is necessary for the flow. I so much appreciate you reading and reviewing the story!

Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 04:25 AM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On

that was so sad :( WAKE UP, BELLLA! EDWARD LOVES YOU!!!!

 



Author's Response: We have a ways to go before it gets better! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: twilighted007 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 02:47 AM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On

I have to say, this was not what i was expecting - Which is a good thing!
The end was amazing:)
Do you even know how good of a writer you are?
It blows my mind sometimes.



Author's Response: My beta has to tell me every day when I worry how bad a chapter sucked! So thank you, from me and from her!

Reviewer: lachica Bella (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 01:49 AM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On

Please keep reminding us that you love happy endings. Cuase it's hard to see through the haze that is my tears.



Author's Response: I really truly do. It will just take time. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: lachica Bella (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 01:37 AM · On: Chapter 24 - Leave the Weapons Behind

OH yes, reprieve for all the mental anguish. Fuckin Emmett...he can make a funeral funny. I just absolutely love how you write for him. He's dead serious, and grief stricken but oh he kightens the mood with wise-ass remarks. TY!



Author's Response: He has such a real perspective but manages to keep his humour! I am glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: lachica Bella (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 01:21 AM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition

Uhh. Yeah, Edward, is the only one that will bring Bella back. Uh, I really can't think of what to say- too many emotions clouding my thought process. this is amazing.



Author's Response: Edward is what she is subconciously living for (and the baby) and she reacts ro his presence. Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: lachica Bella (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 01:03 AM · On: Chapter 22 - Sound of Music

Yay something fun to read. I like this familial banter between Jas and Rose- it was warm and fuzzy- not to mention giggly. Hee,hee! =)



Author's Response: Jasper is a blast! Enjoy the angst break!

Reviewer: Boom_Ox (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 12:59 AM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On

hope she doesnt die :'(

they need a happy endinggg!!



Author's Response: There will be a happy ending. Just a way to go before we get there. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: juliebutterfly (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 12:49 AM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On

You can do this Bella, stay strong! Pull through girl



Author's Response: Hang on! Let's help them repeat it into truth. Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: lachica Bella (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 12:47 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome

Oh. It's too much. No words...my mind is blank.



Author's Response: It is a tough one, huh? Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: lachica Bella (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 12:28 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless

I think it's like what the SM's Edward said: Angela Weber has the purest and kindest thoughts and heart he'd ever encountered in his long existance, and I think you've encompassed on to that perfectly.



Author's Response: Angela is so wonderful. A true friend. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: twitina (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 12:14 AM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On

Just - sigh!  Hard to even review...so much pain for them all.

I'm holding on to the HEA.



Author's Response: Hang on tight. It will come! Thanks for reviewing!

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