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Reviewer: smalls (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands
i don't know why, but charlie's reaction is harder to take than edward's...this chapter was much harder than the last one. i'm so nervous about what will happen when bella wakes up!
Author's Response: Charlie's reaction is tough to take. It hurts to be him. He's afraid and angry and ... gah! Overwhelmed.
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: fletchmartin (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands
OMFG! That was heart wrenching. Charlie's reaction was definitely understandable. But I hope he calms down once he talks to Carlisle. I'm just glad that Edward's presence is helping Bella.
Author's Response: I think Charlie will surprise you in the end, with or without Carlisle's guidance. He's a good guy, under all the bluster.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: lulabelljane (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands
AAH...Charlies reaction...you had that down PERFECTLY girl! Just perfect! By the way...Edward pleading with him to let him stay in the room... :(
Freaking loved it my dear! :)
Author's Response: I am glad I got Charlie right. He's so different from any of the Cullen's, I had to think about his tone of voice and his reactions. I knew what I wanted him to do but I wasn't sure if I got it across.
Thank you so much for reviewing.
Reviewer: Juliamine (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 08:34 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands
*sniffle* "Don't let her die." That line killed me. I was already tearing up, but reading that line and the flood gates opened.
My only hope for Charlie is that he can control his rage if not for himself but for Bella. Lord knows his rage and anger has the potential to only make this situation considerably worse. Im anxious to read what Carlisle will say to Charlie, my hope is he is able to calm Charlie.
Thank you for the update! Loved the chapter! We have come so far but still so far to go.
Author's Response: I think Charlie will surprise you in the end, with or without Carlisle's assistance. He's stronger and wiser than we think.
Thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 08:33 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands
Well I can't say Charlie's reaction surprised me. I can't say I wouldn't have reacted the same way if it were my child. But at least he's understanding enough that Bella could still choose Edward and he might have to accept that.
Simpy great! And thank you so much for updating so regularly!
Author's Response: I think this is a perfectly natural gut reaction for a parent. But Charlie may surprise you in the end.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: twitina (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 08:31 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands
Yeah - I totally expected Charlie to want to kill Edward!! No rational thought involved when you see your child in a situation like that. He's actually doing pretty well by the end of the chapter, considering what he just found out!
I'm holding my breath. She won't be unconscious forever...
Author's Response: I think Charlie will end up surprising the hell out of you in the end, but of course his first reaction is primal. He is furious and afraid and he needs to channel it somewhere. I think most father's would act in a similar fashion at first.
Sigh, there is another wrinkle to come in the next chapter...
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: smalls (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 08:31 AM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
gah! i read this while traveling between st. louis and kansas city in a mini van with 6 friends...probably not the best decision, but i kept the tears at bay. i'm being an optimist here. :)
Author's Response: Atta girl! Keep the faith! It will be okay!
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: kuntrygal (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 08:29 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands
*sniffs* Awe poor Charlie! I don't know who I felt worse for this chapter, Charlie or Edward when Charlie yanked him out of the chair. Great chapter bb! And I totes voted for ya!
Author's Response: Aw, hun! Thanks for the votes, and for the review, and for your thread posts and for generally being you:)
Reviewer: Panda1499 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 08:29 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands
Exactly the response I expected from Charlie.
Good job.
Manda
Author's Response: Wow! I finally did something expected! LOL!
Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: Sweetheartwithfangs (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 08:28 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands
ok, breathe Charlie, pomme_de_terre said she believes in happy endings, and I believe her so it's all going to work out.
I love your story! Once again you have managed to deliver an amazing, gut wrenching chapter full of angst, love and sorrow! *applause* I'm ready for more!! Please please please update soon! Popcorn and Twizzlers anyone?
Author's Response: LOL! I know it's such a tough story to read at times. You can't help but feel for Charlie. He truly is an innocent in this. Or at least mostly.
Thanks so much for the review!
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 08:27 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands
Amazing chapter. Very vivid Charlie moments. Loved Edward's reactions, too.
Author's Response: I am glad you liked it. Poor Charlie!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: amkh (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 08:25 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands
wow...edward's a baby :P but I understand why and I still love him :D
Author's Response: I think he's just so overwhelmed right now he can't formulate an adequate response. Plus, he's scared shitless!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Sunfeathers (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2009 06:00 AM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
*swallows lump in throat*
That was achingly beautiful. I hope when she wakes up she can hold onto the hope and the love she's hearing in their voices, feeling in their touch.
Eager yet afraid for next chapter ... :)
Author's Response: There is hope that her raw, unfiltered feelings are still of love. When she wakes, they will be mixed with thought and insecurity. Definitely difficult.
Thanks for reviewing!
Author's Response: There is hope that her raw, unfiltered feelings are still of love. When she wakes, they will be mixed with thought and insecurity. Definitely difficult.
Thanks for reviewing!
Author's Response: There is hope that her raw, unfiltered feelings are still of love. When she wakes, they will be mixed with thought and insecurity. Definitely difficult.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: LittlePixieStick (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Sound of Music
Oh Jasper's love of Alice, so sweet! And just such a defining characteristic of his personality! How wonderful!
The Jasper/Rose relationship is beyond words, I have a relationship with my brother that's somewhat like theirs, so it really made me smile (despite the somber tone of the story at this point).
Gonna be interesting to see the whole family all together again.
Author's Response: I love this Jasper. He doesn't have much of a voice in the books or movie so I gave him one that I thought fit.
So glad you enjoyed it!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: xtothey (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
**SOB**
Author's Response: It is a tough chapter, huh?
Thanks for reviewing!
Author's Response: It is a tough chapter, huh?
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: LittlePixieStick (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome
Another intense chapter, but so needed. Loved the nod Carlisle gives to his love and devotion to Esme. His need to have her near him, as his calming presence is wonderful, an inspired touch to their enduring love.
Keep it up girl, it's great!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words and your review!
Reviewer: c_tap77 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
Beautiful
So simple, and yet so perfect and moving.
Do we get to hear this experience from Bella's POV at some point? Sorry I really want to know what happened in her apartment before all of this. If not that's fine too, you're the author and I'm sure it will be great.
I choose Emmett for this apron deal btw ;)
Author's Response: Alas, I had not planned to. Many folks have asked for a sideshot of what Jasper saw in his childhood. Maybe there is a need for a sideshot from Bella as well.
Thanks for reviewing!
Author's Response: Alas, I had not planned to. Many folks have asked for a sideshot of what Jasper saw in his childhood. Maybe there is a need for a sideshot from Bella as well.
Thanks for reviewing!
Author's Response: Alas, I had not planned to. Many folks have asked for a sideshot of what Jasper saw in his childhood. Maybe there is a need for a sideshot from Bella as well.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: canadian_twilight (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
please e mail me when you update :)
Author's Response: You know, if you favourite my story, then it will automatically send you an update each and every time I update this story. If you add me as a favourite author, you will get an update any time I post a new story!
PM me if you need help!
Reviewer: Akelarre (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 01:54 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
I need a huge chocolate ice cream and a bar just to de-wrinkle my heart after these chapters. Now you owe me a diet.
Author's Response: LOL! I'll send over the Cullen of your choice as a personal trainer!
Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: ashboo713 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 01:27 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
gahhh!! i get major goosebumps everytime I read an update! you are such a wonderful writer! can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind review! I completely appreciate your sweet words.
Reviewer: SpunkyLuv (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 10:12 AM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
WOW!!! I mean just...WOW. I'm in love with this story. It's so sad and heartbreaking and...beautiful. And all that love. I have cried so much reading this. And that last Bella POV, I had to step away for a sec. to rid myself of all the tears so I could read it. And again just WOW!
Author's Response: Wow for that amazing review! I am so grateful that you are connecting to the story in such a profound way!
Reviewer: Lalaranya (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 09:10 AM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
ok, i actuli cried during this story-i started reading it all from the beginning. i think my guinea pigs were slightly alarmed tho, coz i had 2 keep goin past them, out of my room, then come running bak in with loads of loo roll...so sad...but incredibly awesome.....
Author's Response: I hate to frighten small animals, but I am glad you are enjoying the story!
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: xNOMx (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 04:55 AM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
aww that was so sad!
ths is really good and i hope u post more soon!
=]
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
I appreciate the review!
Reviewer: Beans827 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 04:04 AM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
Oooooh, that is so painful. I ache for all of them. I do hope it gets better soon but I understand that it won't be easy. You're doing a wonderful job with it though so keep up the good work! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words and your review!
There is so much damage yet to heal.
Reviewer: jermak99 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 04:02 AM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
Oh my! What an emotional rollercoaster! This story is really good. I cannot wait to see what happens next...
Author's Response: I am so glad you are enjoying it!
Thank you for reviewing!
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