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Reviewer: anna123 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 02:25 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

The tissues sure came in handy this chapter! ...so sad :'( I hope you update soon!! 



Author's Response:

It is a tough one!

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Juliamine (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 02:23 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

I think this was more code scarlet than red!  Wow, Pomme, just wow.  I'm speechless.  My heart breaks for Edward.  I am grateful for kleenex at this very moment, this chapter is such a tear jerker!  I'll be honest, I'm freaking out just a bit!  Great chapter, I still love this story even though it always makes me cry! 



Author's Response:

I am sorry to make you cry so much, but at least I know it means I'm writing it correctly!

This is a TOUGH chapter.  That I know.

The teaser is on the thread.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Mom of 2 in WI (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 02:18 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

Blinking back tears...trying to not sob....wow....deep breath to calm myself...ok, feeling a bit better now. Great chapter.  Necessary, I'm sure, but painful to read.  A good painful though.  I was thinking as I read about my two day old baby girl (who is now 4 and a half) who was wrestled from my arms to be rushed into life saving surgery.  I remember that moment when we separated, too.  It felt like my heart snapped in two pieces when she left.  I held onto that warmth she left behind until it faded.  My arms literally ached until I could hold her again.  I felt like the most important piece of me was missing.  So that was what I was thinking about.  Hell, pure hell. I can empathize, Edward!



Author's Response:

Oh hell.  You just made me bawl like a baby reading a review.

I am a mother of a 2 yr old son and I cannot imagine.  I sincerly cannot imagine.  And I can picture you trying to hold onto the warmth.  My heart and soul goes out to you for every having to deal with that.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: whoopsie daisy (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 02:15 AM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End

Oh! This is good... so very good! It's the first thing I looked for when I turned on my computer and I was hanging onto every word, not wanting the chapter to end. I need more! It's SO good!! I just need to know what happens next! xx



Author's Response:

Oh, thank you so much!  You're too kind.

There will be more soon!

Reviewer: oceanwaters2006 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 02:14 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

Oooooooooooo this chapter is one of the worst. Poor Edward...thinking she isn't coming back. *sniff* Poor Boy! I wanna hug him.

Love you girl!

XOXOXOXOXOXO Jess



Author's Response:

This is probably the worst thus far, at least in the truly tragic way.  There are heart tuggers after...

Thank you, bb, for all you do!

::: hugs ::::

Reviewer: kstabb1001 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 02:12 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

Wow! Code Scarlet indeed!



Author's Response:

It is a tough one.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: poodleann04 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 02:10 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

I need that vodka and chocolate now.

Author's Response:

Yup!  Always read in the evening when shots and Hersheys are at hand!

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: caperves1979 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 02:10 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

The suspense is killing me!  Bella and the baby may live but your loyal fans are dying more with every update.  Please stop the torture and give us a little shred of happy.



Author's Response:

There are little silver lights of happy coming.  Have faith.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 02:09 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

Boy you weren't kidding about code red! I'm sitting here bawling my eyes out! I'm glad I had my chocolate! Poor Edward! It's amazing what a burst of adrenaline can do for a person. Don't keep us in suspense too long!



Author's Response:

Edward definitely had  ROUGH time in this chapter.  He's convinced, by the end, she's never coming back.

It was tough to write.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 02:08 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

oh, that broke my heart, PLEASe make it better soon!



Author's Response:

I will make it better.  It's a long road, but I will make it better.

Thanks for reviewing!

 

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 02:07 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

Oh my god!!!!!!!!!!!!!!This is horrible!!!! I'm freaking out!!!!Please update ASAP!!!!!!!!Poor Edward!!!!!



Author's Response:

It is a tough tough chapter all around.  Poor all of them.  But yes, Edward is completely devastated in this chapter.  He honestly thinks if he lets them take her, she'll never come back.

But it will be okay.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: KristenSwan (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 02:06 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

I am enjoying the story... I like that it's not an easy fix between Edward and Bella. You are giving a wonderful presentation... it's not drawn out and dull like some other stories I've read.



Author's Response:

I was disappointed at how easily Bella forgave Edward in NM.  She'll get through this hear, but it won't be nearly so easy.

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: marrisa (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 02:04 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

wow, intense. Edward's perspective was so heartbreaking but beautiful. Is that weird? I don't know, it just was.



Author's Response:

No, there can be beauty in anything.  I am glad you saw it there.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: jermak99 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 02:03 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

OMG! Ok, when you say no harm will come to the Swan/Cullen spawn...please say that doesn't mean harm will come to Bella...I mean, no more than she's alread had...GAH! It's only 9am but I need a drink....LOL Anyhoo, can't wait to see what happens next!

 

xo



Author's Response:

Always read NLT when you can do a shot to numb the pain!  LOL!

It is a TOUGH chapter.

Yes, she will be okay, but it will NOT be easy, quick or clean.

Thanks for reviewing!

 

Reviewer: kellyliz82 (Anonymous) · Date: July 06, 2009 02:00 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

Oh, my heart.



Author's Response:

It does hurt, hunh?

Thank you for reviewing.

Reviewer: VampireInTraining (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 01:59 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

happy endings happy endings happy endings happy endings!!!!!! THIS *points to screen* IS NOT HAPPY!!



Author's Response:

No.  It definitely isn't!  But it's also not the end!  Keep the faith!

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: fletchmartin (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 01:53 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

And I didn't think this could get any harder.  This was absolutely heart wrenching.  What's going on in Bella's mind?  Why is she bleeding again?  I was hoping that part would be over.  I'm hanging on to your notes that everything will turn out okay, especially the baby.  I do look forward to your updates because this story has me on the edge of my seat.  I'm desperate to find out how this will all get resolved. So much has happened.  So many people have been hurt. This is such a sad but good story. Please update again soon!!!



Author's Response:

There is just *so* much damage to be repaired, it's almost insurmountable.  Almost.  But this is Edward and Bella. 

Keep the faith.  I know this hurt, but I'll fix it.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: juliebutterfly (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 01:49 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

Hmm... I'm sure you aren't lying when you say you believe in happy endings ;-) You better not kill Bella, I will not be happy!

But another great chapter, sad and horrible, but great still. You can really feel Edwards pain, it's heartbreaking

 



Author's Response:

It will be okay.  Honestly.  Hang on.

Thank you for connecting with the chapter.  I know it's a tough one.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: mika429 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 01:48 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

Wow...is all that I can come up with at the moment.  Please update soon...



Author's Response:

It's definitely a tough one.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: guccisassy (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 01:46 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

OK, that was awesome.  You really captured the despair poor Edward has.  Hope you'll be able to update as fast as we all reviewed!  Hint-Hint

Thanks



Author's Response:

And boy did ya review!  Wow, I've been answering (gratefully) for hours!

I will update quickly.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Roselover2 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 01:40 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

Do not hang your head hon you are doing great I love the suspense and the drama I keep the faith that you belive in happy endings and it will all be worth it in time

 

 



Author's Response:

::: hugs :::

Thank you for your kind words and your review!

Reviewer: amkh (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 01:36 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

blah another chapter ended! Although it's kinda reassuring knowing that you beileve in happy endings and won't kill Bella...

I hope that you're not one of those authors who go 'haha i tricked you! never expected that did you!'

really hope not...



Author's Response:

I PROMISE you, I am NOT doing that.  I may not tell you everything when asked, but if I say it, it's true.  I said I won't kill the baby, so I won't.  I said there will be a happy ending and there will.  I assure you.

Thank you for reading.

Reviewer: chasityc (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 01:34 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

:( awwwwwww... i don't know what to say.. i know you'll make it better, but for right now i'm just sad! post soon, i love quick updates! thanx for that!



Author's Response:

It is a tough chapter.  I think this one is the most scary and sad of the chapters for a while, but there are some very emotional chapters to come in a different way.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 01:34 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

Oh, the angst!  I know, I know.  I read your notes, but dang it!  Do you have to put us (and poor Bella and Edward) through this?  Stop hiding and get to writing! *giggle* Yes, that means I like it and I want MORE!!!



Author's Response:

Yup!  I have to keep putting all of us through it!  Do you know how hard that was for me to write??  Wow.  Hurt.

Thanks SO much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Sunshinemommy (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 01:28 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

What a cliff hanger!  Thankfully, you update quickly!!  Great chapter.



Author's Response:

I had to end it there!  It was Edward's tale and there was nothing left for him at that point.  I know it was a tough one.

Thanks for the review!

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