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Reviewer: twitina (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 03:11 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity

Esme is an angel!!  How hard would that be - to clean up the scene of such a tragic event for someone you love?  And Charlie.  He is a man who is broken right now.

Rosalie's assessment of the scene is so good.  Traumatic and difficult.  She also has the presence of mind to get Charlie back to the hospital. 

Great chapter.  I know more is coming (stuff that we all really want), but this chapter gave us some insight into all of the characters outside of Edward and Bella.

Keep 'em coming!!



Author's Response: Esme is the embodiment of hope and love and strength. Poor Charlie - so much to take in. And Rose is onw of the few to watch this with "new" eyes so I thought her perspective might be interesting. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: guccisassy (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 03:09 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity

Ugh. 

When I read Roslie say "Mom-,"  I could hear my own daughters voice.  It's a lucky parent that hasn't heard that pain or fear... 

Panic and dread.

Very moving.

Thanks



Author's Response: A lucky parent indeed. Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: prettykisses (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity

I'm numb. Sad. Desperate for this all to go away and everything to get better.  I know it will. 

 

Poor Charlie.  Poor Edward (sorry for wanting you to pay for what you did to Bella, please understand that was like back on chapter 14, plz say you forgive me. i am a different person now, seriously.).

So much grief and regret and hopelessness.  I know they all want Bella and the baby to be ok but can someone express a little hope.  Alice we need you to put some positive thoughts through to Edward. Or maybe in this story it will be Emmett.

I've never been one to warm up too much to Rosalie.  With the little I've heard from her in this story I like her.  She is always so tough, but I guess now I know why.

I really need a nekky Cullen right about now. And a drink.



Author's Response: There are some rays of hope starting in the next chapter, although still a lot of heart ache. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity

You are the freakin' QUEEN OF TORTURE. You own it! 

HOLY HELL. You deserve every single award you can get your hands on. WOW.



Author's Response: Wow! What a compliment! I am so glad you are enjoying the story. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: msclark2008 (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity

I'm speechless. Poor Edward



Author's Response: Poor all of them! This is horrible all around. Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: annetted (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 03:04 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity

Mrs Potato you've done it again and I love you for it, even though I feel like I'm being torn apart from the inside out.  I love having others POVs because it does help to round out the story.  It gave us a bit of insight into Rose and the bad memories it brought back. 

I want a tormented and distraught nekky Edward please.



Author's Response: Lol! Will you be comforting said Nekky Edward? Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Beautiful_Distraction (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 03:03 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity

Ughh....this story just tears at your heart, girly! 

Another great chapter!  I really enjoyed hearing from Rose for the first time!

Ellie, CONGRATULATIONS on the most reviewed list!!!!!!  :)  That's awesome!!

XOXO

-Whitney



Author's Response: Hugs you!! Thank you for all of your support with everything!! I'd be lost without you! I cannot believe we made the list. I am still stunned! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: marrisa (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity

I really loved Rose and Esme's point of view's. Esme's was perfect when it came to dealing with cleaning up Bella's blood. Edwards reactions probably rip a hole in anyone's heart who reads it. You said you believe in happy endings?



Author's Response: I do believe! Promise! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: amylouwho (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity

Wow, I didn't think Esme's POV would hit me so hard. The way you had her thinking of Bella's last moments at her "closet" got me choked up. Great Job. Also, thank you for the Nekky Cullen references in the chapter notes. They always make me feel better. :)

Author's Response: Nekky Cullens make everything better! Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Juliamine (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity

Of course I loved the chapter, even though it was hard as hell to read.  I didnt realize from your teaser Esme and Charlie were in her hell hole apartment packing it up.  Makes sense now.  Wow, amazing chapter Ellie, you are amazing! 



Author's Response: The teaser was a little vague, but I am glad it makes sense now! Thanks so much for all of your support!

Reviewer: apricot (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity

congrats for making it to the the most reviewed list! you deserved it.. this chapter as evidence. great as always.. it didn't really occur to me that we haven't heard esme and rosalie's POV..but it's both beautiful and heartbraking just the same..what struck me most actually is esme's thoughts of "How did we get so far from the happiness of that time? " because she's right... it's been an awfully short amount of time and their world had turned upside down... but i guess everything will turn out alright in the end. i believe you and your promise of happy ending.. =)



Author's Response: Esme's pov is so bittersweet. She mourns the loss of happiness but she always has hope. Poor thing. Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: loolupe (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity

I'm glad this story is getting told, it would be a shame if these words had  never been read.



Author's Response: What an amazing compliment. Thank you.

Reviewer: JessicaB923 (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity

God, how heartbreaking!  Update soon, please.



Author's Response: This is a tough time in the story. Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: Please_BiteMe (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 02:53 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity

Code orange with red moments?!?!?! Are you serious? That was horrible! I'm a mess.... this damn story is so beautifully tragic, I can't wait for the light to come... And huge thanks for putting in Rose's POV... I love her and she had a very practical voice in this.... that helped... keep on bringing in these quick posts... I'm getting spoiled!



Author's Response: Lol! I need to crank out a few more chapters or I will run out of pre-written work! Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: dandyvamp (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity

guh! tears....



Author's Response: It is painful! Thank you for reviewing.

Reviewer: latinabeauty70 (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 02:48 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity

Thank god for my insomnia!

Wow! Amazing - your mind really work wonders. My god, you are simply amazing!

Please update again like NOW please. ;-)



Author's Response: Wow, I am honoured! Thank you so much for enjoying my story and reviewing!

Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 02:48 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity

OMG, the floor cleaning did it for me...*SNIFF*



Author's Response: That was rough. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: jermak99 (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity

Wow. Again...*wipes-tears* this story really gets to me. Thanks for letting us hear from Esme and Rosalie. Honestly, I have been wondering about those two. I still have my fingers crossed for everything to turn out ok. I am chanting "she believes in HEA's" in my head over and over...LOL Srsly, thanks so much for the update. Can't wait to see what happens next.

xoxo



Author's Response: I think a lot of folks were wondering about these two. A different perspective. Thanks so much for reviewing.

Reviewer: Jaenelle Masen (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity

I knew that once they saw Bella's living conditions that they would surely be in so much pain....and hearing this from the motherly devotion of Esme's eyes...that was brutal! i think that she will have nightmares for months about this incident for years!  wow...Rose's PV...i think she cares about Bella in her own way, not as much as the rest of them, so i guess it is easier to hear about this dire situation from her side, but it think this situation with Bella will allow Rose to grow a little out of her shell and maybe release some of the hard stuff that she has been carrying since the death of her parents....



Author's Response: Esme will definitely be haunted by this, but she is basically made of hope so she will overcome. Rose really does care for Bella but she closes herself off as a means of protection. The ultimate dispassionate observer. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity

It is good to get Esme's and Rosalie's POV. The description of Bella's apartment, and particularly her bed, is heartbreaking.  And Edward's reaction at the hospital is making me cry..............Is there any way that the next chapter will be better?



Author's Response: There is always a chance. Seriously, this is the crux of the story and it is very dark. But there are a few rays of hope to come. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity

sad ud soon



Author's Response: These are some tough chapters. Hang in there! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: AstonMartin823 (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 27 - No

I'm in...SHOCK. This is a fabulous story!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!



Author's Response: I am glad you are enjoying it! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: fuzzyv (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 06:25 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

Great addition to this fanfic site- you are doing a great job and have a very interesting perspective for us to see. Keep up the great work and I can't read the rest as your twisted tale unfolds!



Author's Response:

I am so glad you found us and are enjoying!

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: tarebear015 (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 04:45 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

Tears. Nothing but tears. Absolutely heartbreaking.Must keep repeating to myself: She believes in happy endings. She believes in happy endings.

 

Awaiting your next chapter.



Author's Response:

Keep repeating it!  It will be okay.

Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: Hazelnut4o6 (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 03:27 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

When you say nothing will happen to the baby, it kinda ruins the story. Because if you know it will be fine, then how can we relate to Edward now after reading that intense chapter?

Great story, but I wouldn't put those little things in your notes. It's kinda redundant.



Author's Response:

Sorry - it's there from feedback in reviews and on the forum.  Many readers of this story have suffered miscarriages and other horrid things in their own real life and have asked that I keep that clear in the author notes or they feel that they cannot read the story.  I respect that and if that is all people need to enjoy it, I can respect their wishes.  I hope you can understand that.

As for Edward, you just have to put yourself in *his* head when you read.  Forget that you know it'll be okay in the end.  Remember that he doesn't read my author notes and he doesn't know it's going to be okay.

Again, I am sorry that you dislike it, but with the sheer amount of requests I have received, I continue to reassure the folks that need reassuring.

Thank you for reviewing.

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