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Reviewer: GinnyW (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 06:07 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity
Cripes, you're gonna kill me with the angst woman! Gah!
Author's Response: Oh no! Don't die yet! There is finally hope in the next chapter!
Thank you for ALL of your support!
Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 06:06 AM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell
I couldn't review the past few chapter because I couldn't stop reading. I am just glad I'd only found your fic now that it has over 20 chapters. I'd die if I had to wait what comes next.
But now that Edward knows I can stop a bit to let you know what this fic just rocks!
Honestly, they are all damn right for being that guilty. Everyone allowed Edward lead not only his relationship with Bella but the relationship each of them had with Bella. Even Emmett, the Action Man, set down busying himself around facebook with hos over 2000 friends, calling Edward names but never raised a finger to check on Bella. They should have guessed she wasn't alright looking at the example they have at their own home. They all failed her.
But I know if they haven't done we wouldn't have this fic but that is my insight.
Now, let me see what is next!
Author's Response: They all made mistakes, save for maybe Angela. The whole tale is about mistakes and their emotional consequences.
Now, let's see if we can repair the damage.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: BethBSB5 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 06:00 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity
Another well-written chapter. It was interesting to get Rosalie's take on the situation. The whole time I was thinking, "man, what a time for her and Jasper to show up at the hospital!" Please let us know how Bella and baby are doing in the next chapter!
Author's Response: You will get more info in the next chapter!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: nlankin (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 05:58 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity
OMG, how am I suppose to wait for another chapter! That was great, soo sad, but great! It went so fast, hopefully the next chapters are on the way! Thank you for a great story!
Author's Response: I try to keep 'em coming.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Deex (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 05:47 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity
Holy crazy shite!!!
I've just read from beginning to 28 and fuck me... this is one incredibly well written story!!!
I have 2 children and this totally reminded me of my first, which was 6 years ago, but I spent a lot of time in hospital bleeding with that one. I had something called Placenta Bipartite, which was basically a heart shaped placenta (which sounds cute in theory). Unfotunately, this meant that it was gradually splitting down the middle and parts were breaking away and every so often I was passing them. When he was eventually born (3 weeks early), they barely got the placenta out in one piece and it was pretty much calcified. My poor boy was only 6pound 4oz. He's 6 now and strong as an ox, so there are such things as happy endings!!!
You are doing a wonderful job with this story and I love the angst and that the descriptions are so vivid, I feel what they feel!
Thanks.
Author's Response: Wow. Thank you for sharing.
My son was born 3 weeks early and was 6 pounds so I can relate. I had an emergency C section due to a congenital joint disorder. I don't know the bleeding, but I do know the fear. That is why I won't go anywhere too painful for the moms of the crowd. It's not necessary to tell my tale.
Thanks so much for sharing and for reviewing!
Reviewer: mzvez (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 05:35 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity
Excellent as always. Evil as always with the cliffhangers.. I love it though!!!!!!
Author's Response: I am glad you are enjoying it.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Hev (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity
are you seriously kidding me... picture this........ It is 2am i am drenched in tears and sobbing like a freakin baby and i scroll down and that is it... no more chapters. PUT MORE UP NOW.... I AM LITERALLY GRIEF STRIKEN HERE
Author's Response: Oh, I'm sorry. Please console yourself with the fact that I update often so you will probably get another chapter shortly.
Hang in there. There is hope in the next chapter!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: duchess_amy (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 05:29 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity
I came upon your tale just the other day...I am enthralled. I always love a good cry...especially when a happy ending is promised. I would also like to see a strong Bella in your story, not that you haven't written her as strong. I love that even though she was drowning in her grief, she fled to try to do this on her own. But with family closing ranks around her while she is in the hospital, I would like her to put all of them in their places and call her own shots. Doormat Bella never appeals to me. I like a strong Bella who makes her own decisions and demands things be her way. From what I've read so far, I think this is the direction your heading with her. Bella is the sun and all others are planets and moons who revolve around her because she is strong, beautiful, selfless and brings light and warmth to everything she looks upon. I know this is fanfic but yours is one of the most original and well written. I hope that you are thinking of writing something other than fanfic because I would rush to the book store to buy it. I rarely review what I read but your story moved me to do so. I will wait impatiently for the next chapters and to pass the time, contemplate an Ed-bot, Jazz-bot, and an Em-bot jumping out of one of those sleazy stripper cakes wearing no more than a smile...hmm....sigh.....Thank you for taking your time to write.
Author's Response: LOL - first off, go read Cullen Robotics. I'm one of the writers and you'll get your wish:) Pure smut tho!
OK, as for NLT, THANK YOU!. This is an amazing review that really makes this worth it. There's a lot of emotion in this story and I have to go there to fetch it and bring it to you. I'm so glad it's allowing you to connect to the story and enjoy it.
Bella is NOT a weak Bella in this story. There will be no Prince Charming kissing Sleeping Beauty awake and all is right with the world. That being said, I do believe love can conquer all. I do believe in Happy Endings. But it won't be easy.
Thank you so much for your kind words and review!
Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 05:21 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity
I can't say it enough, but you amaze me with the amount of emotion you can evoke in each chapter! My heart was pounding in my chest like crazy the whole time! I hope we get some good news soon!
Author's Response: You will get a small sliver of hope in the next chapter!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Sweetheartwithfangs (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 05:17 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity
*sniffles*She believes in happy endings, She believes in happy endings, She believes in happy endings, She believes in happy endings, She believes in happy endings, She believes in happy endings, She believes in happy endings, She believes in happy endings *sniffles* get better soon Bella! (waiting for chapter 35 patiently) Love you and your story!
Author's Response: I do believe! You'll get a taste next chapter!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: nessiebells (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 05:16 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity
Ok, listen lady *wagging finger* I've had enough. I took stock in kleenex compay. It seems to me their numbers keep rising. I wonder why???? O_O
please hurry.
Author's Response: Hey, I am a financial advisor full time! You are stimulating the economy!
Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 05:11 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Strong Enough
Well, Edward won't be pleased when he realises he's the last one to know. But how can he complain... it is all his fault! Good intentions or not, his mistake!
Author's Response: You're right there. They had to keep it from him for now.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: my2galspal (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 05:11 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity
I'm still chanting, darn it! Too much more of this and I'm gonna change my mantra to "She enjoys torturing us. She enjoys torturing us. She enjoys torturing us. Oh yeah, she says she believes in happy endings." That being said it doesn't mean that I didn't love the chapter. It was nice to hear form a couple new voices.
Thanks for sharing your writing (and the fact that you do indeed like happy endings no matter what your story leads us to believe). I eagerly anticipate every gut wrenching moment of this story.
Author's Response: LOL! I do believe in Happy Endings. Oh, and I don't mind torturing in the meantime! Nah, I don't torture on purpose. This is the story as it came to me. It's difficult and painful but will end up okay.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: enthralled (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 05:08 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity
Update quickly...
Author's Response: I will do my best!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: cullenobsession (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 05:03 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity
OMG! You really know how to pull on heart strings. I am almost in tears.
Thanks for another great chapter.
Author's Response: I am sorry for making you teary, but glad you're connecting to the story!
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: mauge (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 05:00 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity
It was a really good chapter. Who knew Rosalie had a heart? Hahaha.
Esme is another sweetheart and stronger than I thought.
Post the new chapter soon!!!!
Author's Response: Esme is the strongest person in this story, in her own, understated way. You will see her strength more in coming chapters.
And Rose is a good person in this story. Just broken, like her brother.
Thank you for your review!
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 04:48 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity
loved this point of view. crazy! I am waiting for more!
Author's Response: I am surprised how well received this chapter has been!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: kellyliz82 (Anonymous) · Date: July 09, 2009 04:44 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity
It was nice to hear from Esme and Rosalie. The scene where Esme was washing the blood was gut wrenching. Listening to Rosalie fight back thoughts of her parents, chilling. Seeing Edward's reaction from someone else's POV, total heart fail. This was a great chapter. Thanks.
(She believes in HEA, she believes in HEA......)
Author's Response: I do believe. It will be okay.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: momsluvamps2 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 04:31 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity
Excellent... gave me goosebumps!! Can't wait for the next!!!!
Author's Response: I will have it up soon!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: sambois (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 04:24 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity
So sad!
Author's Response: It's definitely tough, I know.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Mom of 2 in WI (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 04:22 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity
Woooo Boy! Poor Edward. Poor Charlie. Poor everyone. I feel for every single person in this story right now. Nekky Cullens may be the only thing that will make me all better.
Author's Response: Nekky Cullens and all is right with the world!
Yeah, everything is tough for everyone right now. Too much.
Thanks so much for your review!
Reviewer: dolphin62598 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 04:16 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity
Great chapter! It was very nice to hear from Rose and Esme! I voted for you in the Razzle Dazzle awards too!
Author's Response: Oh my gosh! Thank you so much for your vote and your review!
Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 04:10 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
Honestly, a friend of mine have sex during her pregnancy until the last week! Bella said it all, pregnant but still a woman! And I so hope once I am pregnant my husband (whoever he willl be) won't forget that!
I absolute agree with you. It adds to the story. Of course they'd have these kind of dreams...
I am suffering here but enjoying thoroughly. Yes, I am a masochist!
Author's Response: Well, I have a 2 year old, therefore I was pregnant and I certainly didn't abstain. The hormones are amazing when they work to your advantage!
Thanks for seeing the purpose in this chapter. And the reality of the dreams.
I appreciate the review!
Reviewer: jamie78 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 03:58 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity
omg - that chapter made me cry starting with seeing the crib in the corner.......wow, your words were so powerful!
Author's Response: That part gets my beta every time and she's read it like a thousand times now. The one shiny thing in a dismal place. Bella's hope.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Sunfeathers (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 03:41 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity
I did enjoy this chapter ellie - very much. Hearing the way each of them react to this situation makes their love for Bella all the more obvious and, strangely, soothing to the reader. This story is so hard to read but it is so good I wouldn't miss it for anything.
Are we almost over the worst?
Author's Response: I thought these ladies needed to be heard. They have a unique perspective different from the rest. I am so glad that you enjoyed it.
We are almost over the worst ... for now. There will be one more dive into heart fail (Edward meet Bella. Bella meet Edward), but for now, we're going to level out and even get some more hope in the next chapter.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
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