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Reviewer: jenalpz (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 02:07 PM · On: Epilogue the Final - Full Circle

I seriously put off reading the end for as long as I could. I can't believe its over. But it was a great ending. I would never have thought it, tho that's why you're the author and I'm the reader. Thanks for using up so much of your time for our entertainment.

Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!  It just... felt right to me, the way it ended.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: rpattzdude (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 01:53 PM · On: Chapter 34 - Deals

big fat progress i am quite impressed with fuckward ;D thank you sweetheart

Author's Response:

Jasper definitely knows how to straighten his lil bro out!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: rpattzdude (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 33 - Sisyphus

oh it felt like i was a part of B and drowning me too :'( sweet sweet chapter beautiful you know

Author's Response:

She's sort of lost and found at the same time, isn't she?

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: rpattzdude (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 01:35 PM · On: Chapter 32 - Classics

you know i shiver thinking about this chapter so perfect so sweet ;D

Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: rpattzdude (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

oh i am all jumping like shit over here wanting to know the name of that little baby girl ;D

Author's Response:

LOL!  Hope you approve!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: rpattzdude (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 12:53 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls

honey i dont like it i love it with all my heart takes my heart away so easly thank you.

one question: is E 17 or 18? sweet boy sweet sweet life...

Author's Response:

When Elizabeth is born, they are both 17.  I think, in canon, it was 18, but for this story, it was better that they were minors.  Also, like Bella, my birthday is in September and I was 17 for my entire senior year.  So I went with what I knew.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

 

Reviewer: rpattzdude (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings

you are amazing you know that? not killing that little child? oh i am sorry to tear your own wounds, but your lost of your twins reminds me of my cousin, she lost her twins too, but at the same time reading that you have two (three) beautiful children, i have hope for her too. Thank you for being you and sharing a part of you with us xoxo



Author's Response:

As you read, I have been there, so there is *no* need in this story to drag others through the emotions surrounding that. 

I have one child and another on the way:)  So there are happy endings...

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: rpattzdude (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity

oh god tears running down tears for the love that lost its power for the love that never died for the light since long gone for the darkness...



Author's Response:

There is much to grieve.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: rpattzdude (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 11:07 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

oh god what a chapter oh i am sobbing i am crying so quietly for a life so fucked up so so broken she was supposed to be better? her heart beat... her flowing oh the only mantra i hang on to is 'she wants happy endings...'

Author's Response:

I would say, at least from my perspective, this was probably the hardest chapter of all.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: rpattzdude (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands

oh god a father asking such a thing oh it just breaks my heart in hundred and thousands pieces goddess so aweful so painful so so sad



Author's Response:

Charlie actually handled this pretty well, all things considered!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: rpattzdude (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On

oh honey i am crying so hard it is so painful to read this in its purest form oh honey what a story what a brave Al, what a heartbroken B, what a destroyed E...



Author's Response:

It was written as being a bit of a duet between E/B.  I hope that came through...

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: rpattzdude (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 24 - Leave the Weapons Behind

haha great with Emm as always thinking of everybody : )

Author's Response:

Em does his best to keep things even and maintain his humour, but he is definitely still perceptive!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: rpattzdude (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition

oh honey what a chapter so so beautifully written so powerful so full of love still not crying...

Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!  It was a difficult chapter to write.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

 

Reviewer: rpattzdude (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 09:31 AM · On: Chapter 22 - Sound of Music

i never think a feeling as strong as guilt can go away in several years.
i love it how you still make it sound like if they where vamps, or other genius things like that ; ) thank you very much for your awesome imaginary

Author's Response:

There are a couple of references to vampire fiction in the story to related it back to canon.  Another one would be the venom in Edward's chapters on the plane....

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: rpattzdude (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome

no babe you dont have to duck, but oh so hard it is to read this story so much pain wow i never knew there was a term for such a syndrome. good thing i learn stuff from reading FFs :D thank you as always for this fantastic story

Author's Response:

Alas, it's real.  This is just the lay term for the syndrome, but it's very common among the elderly.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

 

Reviewer: rpattzdude (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless

wow light in the damned tunnel so beautiful chapter warmed my heart. i wanted to cry with Ang, but i think i will save it til later thank you writing and sharing



Author's Response:

The first real sign of hope, as small as it is...

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: rpattzdude (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 08:43 AM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

oh darling thank you very much for all of your replys warmed my heart, yes indeed i believe that it will be worth it in the end and thank you for all your encouraging words and making my heart warm : )



Author's Response:

I do my best to answer every review.  Sometimes I get behind between this story and ...Becomes the Swan, but it takes a while!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

 

Reviewer: rpattzdude (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 05:40 AM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell

oh goddess what a rollercoaster of emotions so many so deeply each and every single one wonderful chapter in all its purest angst and hurt

Author's Response:

Another rough one.  Edward went from boy to man in a split second.  Not an easy task....

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: pixiebella88 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 05:28 AM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls

wow, that was a intense chapter, i dont cry ! but my eyes are leaking just now!



Author's Response:

I would say that was the chapter that brought out the greatest reaction in folks.  Not so much the hardest one to read, but the most... poignant?

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: rpattzdude (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 03:38 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile

ooooh my gooooood! How will he react? Wanna read more!

Author's Response:

Not well, alas.  Not well....

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: rpattzdude (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 02:10 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary

he followed wow big step so proud of my broken E

Author's Response:

Somewhere, I think he's realizing that something going on is bigger than him and his black and white decisions...

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: rpattzdude (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

oh no.. I dont want to rase my voice inside of a bus, i am shaking, i am all crying. Oh goddess why this not a god day at all no not for one second...

Author's Response:

This is definitely a tough chapter.  Not the worst, IMO, but a hard one....

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: rpattzdude (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Grandfather

shit my eyes hurts you know and i cant even talk about my heart it is beyond repair. Beaitiful story!

Author's Response:

Aw!  I know it's rough, but it will all be worth it (I think) in the end.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: rpattzdude (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Nightmare of a Love Story

oooh what a pain they share how big it is how fucked up it is is beyond words oh honey... =(

Author's Response:

This is one seriously messed up love story, hunh?

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: b7u3 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 08:48 PM · On: Prologue - Pretty and the Starlet

the story IT'S AMAZING....... !!!!

PLEASEEEEE....... DON'T STOP to write this story...

^^



Author's Response:

Alas, it has to end sometime!  But at least you have the entire story, complete, to read!  Some chapters would be hard to wait through!

 

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