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Reviewer: xtothey (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 05:53 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity

This chapter actually choked me up more than the previous chapter did. **sniff sniff**

Great writing! I voted for you.



Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review and for your vote!

Reviewer: twilighted007 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 05:38 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity

The Esme POV was very ... tear jerking.
I'm still chanting the mantra: “She believes in Happy Endings”. 



Author's Response: Tough stuff in this chapter, for sure. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 05:28 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity

Cries screams NO!!!!!!!!!  I begged for relief not more drama!!!  Pleae help Edward please give them a sign of hope Iknow you say its there but I don't see it sniffle sniffle...



Author's Response: Well you will definitely see a ray of hope in the next chapter. Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 04:49 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity

Yeah this was a really rough chapter!!!! But I do give you kudos you are telling the a whole story not 1/4 of a 1/2 and to do that it takes time, guts, and angst! :)



Author's Response: Hugs!!! Thanks for all of the support!

Reviewer: heatherdawnc (Anonymous) · Date: July 09, 2009 04:30 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity

I really liked Rose's POV in this one. The beginning with Esme cleaning the floor, was hard. Great chapter.



Author's Response: Definitely some tough stuff this chapter. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Megan_redemption9688 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 04:28 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity

'she believes in happy endings'



Author's Response: I do! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: twilightchick (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 04:17 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity

Wow this is really getting good. I can't wait for more. EXCITED!!!!!



Author's Response: So glad you are enjoying it! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: sorelle (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 04:07 AM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On

Can you please write a chapter that doesn't have me crying through the entire thing!  She believes in happy endings, she believes in happy endings, she believes in happy endings.... LOL



Author's Response: Lol! There is hope in the next chapter! Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: loveroftwilight (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 03:54 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity

Aw poor Rose, I'm glad she called. Please update soon.



Author's Response: Rose is definitely struggling here, but she still managed to do the right thing. Thanks you for review.

Reviewer: VampireInTraining (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 03:52 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity

Gah!!! you need to make it better :_(



Author's Response: I will! There is hope in the next chapter. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: hannahjanson (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 03:40 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity

oh god, please say she's ok! i've been crying my eyes out for the past like five chapters and chanting. if edward was making her better, then how did she just like start bleeding out of nowhere? are they going to die, like, for real? she believes in happy endings, she believes in happy endings, she believes in happy endings



Author's Response: No one will die. It is just a rough road. Hang in there!

Reviewer: mika429 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 03:35 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity

I keep repeating the mantra to myself....  I just can't wait to find out what happens to Bella and the baby.  Maybe this was mentioned before and I don't remember, but where is her mother? 

Please update soon!  I am always left speechless every time I read a chapter.

Reviewer: mika429 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 03:34 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity

I keep repeating the mantra to myself....  I just can't wait to find out what happens to Bella and the baby.  Maybe this was mentioned before and I don't remember, but where is her mother? 

Please update soon!  I am always left speechless every time I read a chapter.



Author's Response: You will get an update on Bella and the baby next chapter. As for Renee, she just doesn't fit the story so I just assumed she is no longer in Bella's life in any way. Thanks so much for reviewing.

Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 03:24 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity

OK, i think now is time for you to give our poor hearts a break. We need something positive to hold on to. We know the baby will be OK but I can't help it but worry. Too much angst. I've never cried that much with a fic... but honestly, it is damn well written.

Please update soon??



Author's Response: There is hope in the next chapter. I promise! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 03:06 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

Your pleas to us to believe that you believe in happy endings are making me chuckle now...  hahahaha

I don't know why but I see you (though I have no idea how you look like) with big doe eyes ready to duck if anyone attempts to through something at you!

hahaha

Honestly, if I didn't believe there is going to have a HEA after all this angst I'd have stopped reading it long ago! Just it is good to have your reassurance.

So thanks!



Author's Response: Lol! Yup, that's me! Ready to duck flying potatoes! Thank you for believeing in me and for reviewing!

Reviewer: spidermonkey_09 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 03:04 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity

OMG

i love you 

:D:D:D

this story is the best story i have ever read 

i love it. i love you thank you

i cannot wait for the next chapter 

i was so sure that this was going to be the one in

carisle POV but i like this one alot it shows others 

only one word to describe this story 

STUNNING!!!!!



Author's Response: Oh my gosh! Thank you for the amazing review! So glad you love the story!

Reviewer: twilight girly 1901 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 02:58 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity

OME! this is heartbreaking, but i can't stop reading! PLEASE UPDATE! :]



Author's Response: It is tough but there is hope in the next chapter. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 02:29 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity

I feel like my only review for this story is always how sad it is. Esme cleaning up just broke my heart. I am looking forward to better times, but loving the story!



Author's Response: Well there is a little hope in the next chapter, so hang in there. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 02:00 AM · On: Chapter 22 - Sound of Music

yes.. Jasper has one dirty mouth too. Very funny!



Author's Response: I love writing Jasper. He is so much fun. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 01:46 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity

So sad but so good.

Author's Response: Thank you for your review. It will get better.

Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 01:33 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless

Wow! Go Angela!! Someone has to bit the shit out of him! He should be glad it wasn't Emmett!



Author's Response: I think Edward even would agree! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: mom2kandg (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 01:31 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity

Like you said I am telling myself over and over that Ellie believes in happy endings, that everything is gonna be okay but it just doesn't seem to be working right now...too much heartache and pain at the moment.....



Author's Response: Keep the faith. There is hope in the next chapter. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 01:28 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity

I have faith you will make it all better. To be truthful, I love the stories that make you wait for the happy endings. If you get your happy ending to soon the story is just Blah. Great chapter.



Author's Response: I am so grateful for these words. Also, when you get the happy ending, it's over. Thanks so muvh for reviewing!

Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 01:20 AM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

I really liked to see a bit of Carlisle&Esme's love. His devotion and dependance...

And Esme last chapter was just like a mother should be.



Author's Response: You will see much more of them in the future. Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: secamimom (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 01:19 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity

You had me in tears again.  Esme scrubbing at the floor and Rose hearing Edward's wails just broke my heart.  Loved it.  Can't wait for more!



Author's Response: It was rough in its own right! Thank you for reviewing. The teaser is up on the thread.

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