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Reviewer: Lan (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 10:16 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity
to much!!!! what happen with the baby??? Bella??
i cant'wait to read the next chapter!!
Author's Response: The next chapter will be up soon! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: ElizabethGere (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity
oh no!!! i can't wait to see what happends next. update again soon!
Author's Response: The next chapter will be up soon! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Couture Girl (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 05:57 PM · On: Chapter 27 - No
OMG!
NOOOO
great job though
Author's Response: It'll be okay. Promise!
Thsnks for reviewing.
Reviewer: Couture Girl (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On
you truly did your job! i cried! and i never cry! wow keep up the good work! your a wounderful author! ooo and i choose edward to bake cookies lol!
Author's Response: LOL! Cookie baking Edward on his way!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Lalaranya (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 09:48 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity
oh crap...crap crap crappy-crap-crap...
Author's Response: Don't worry! There is finally some hope in the next chapter.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Ryansmama04 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End
sorry..I just got your authors response..didn't mean to bring it up a million times :)
Now I can't wait for more!!!! This is quickly becoming one of my favs..definitely in my top 5!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: No worries. I get it all the time and I answer the same way. The chapter length is on purpose and part of what makes the story have emotional impact. I try to update often to offset it.
Thanks so much for all of your reviews!
Reviewer: Ryansmama04 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity
I am in love with your writing..I feel like such a brat talking about how short the chapters are, but that is all I can see that is wrong with it.
Author's Response: I am glad you have enjoyed it. There should be more soon.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Ryansmama04 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 08:51 PM · On: Chapter 24 - Leave the Weapons Behind
again, is it just me or are your chapters really short? It usually takes me all day if not 2 days to finish stories..but I have only been reading yours for a few hours off and on. I love it though, don't get me wrong. I just want MORE hehe
Author's Response: It's just part of the style of the story. The story is an experiment for me - to write a non-narrative story based soley on emotions and only long enough for you to see inside the character's head. You, as the reader, fill in the plot of the story. But the chapters are short because of the emotional impact and because you're only meant to get enough to know what's going on in their head.
I am glad you are enjoying the read, however. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: imlikecandy08 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity
OMG!!! You are all freaking amazing. I'm in tears on the edge of my chair freaking out...This story is like my brand of heroine....I need more...It's really hard to wait...Great great job.....
Author's Response: I will submit the next chapter, probably, today.
So glad you're enjoying the story! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: MyBloodSmellsBetter (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity
Another great chapter! So sad, but so good...I'm repeating the mantra...now START MAKING THE HAPPY ENDING!!! lol...j/k...but really though...someday soon?
Author's Response: There is definitely a ray of sunshine in the next chapter. Just hang in there.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Terenthia (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 04:08 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
Don't know why you were concernced about posting that one--it was nice to see some happiness for the star-crossed lovers. Needed it after all the angst...
Author's Response: I am glad you saw the reasons I chose to post the chapter. It's much appreciated.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Terenthia (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 03:18 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
Enjoying the story...especially as I know there's a light at the end of the tunnel. I just wish you didn't use the enter key so much! Wayyy too many spaces...requires so much scrolling...
Author's Response: Honestly, it's a function of how my version of word translates into Twilighted's system. It doesn't look like that when it's submitted! On the plus side, it works really nice on iPods and Blackberry's!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Ryansmama04 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 02:51 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
I am really liking this story so far, but the chapters seem so short, I guess with all the spaces you put between each sentence...but so far I am loving it...still gotta get used to the whole pregnancy thing, since I wasn't a fan of that in the original series
Author's Response: The spaces are only because of the way my Word translates into Twilighted's system. And the chapters are short for a reason. I think there is an author note that explains my reasoning. I'm glad you're giving the story a chance!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: lyleslove (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity
ugh, this made my chest hurt... obviously, you did a great job and i can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I appreciate your review!
Reviewer: lachica Bella (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity
Ok, make them fix her. Because this is ripping my heart apart at the seams. I can actually visualize what you write and it's fucking gruesome. I have to say that I can empathize with Rose. What the fuck did I walk in to? Damn! She believes in happy endings! She believes in...
Author's Response: It is gruesome and tragic and ten kinds of messed up but it can be fixed. Have faith! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: memmem95 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity
I liked Esme's POV but Rosalie's POV was my favorite. She tells the story in a interesting was.
The whispers of Edward's made me cry.
She believes in happy endings.
Author's Response: Rosalie is the only one looking at this with fresh eyes, so I found her perspective interesting. I am so glad you are reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: imlikecandy08 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 11:58 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
on to chapter 12. again it's all awesome. i've laughed and cried and been on the edge of my seat through out the whole thing...I can totally see this on the big screen with rob and kristen
Author's Response: Now wouldn't THAT be a dream come true! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: angmclure (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity
OMG. I feel so bad for them all. Esme just broke my heart. I felt so bad for her and just wanted to comfort her, as she is such a kind and gentle person. Rose was interesting to hear from. I loved how you showed how the events where stiring up her memories, showing that the cold exterior is a front and she just hides her true feelings and fear. But that she couldn't hide it from Esme. I waiting for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Rose simply imploded where her brother exploded. She still is very sensitive snd broken but she hides it from everyone but Esme (and, presumably) Emmett.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: imlikecandy08 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
ok i'm in tears. this is one of the best fic's i've read ever. can't wait to read more I just started it today and i'm headed to chpter 5 so keep up the great job.
Author's Response: Wow. Thank you! I am glad you are enjoying it reviewed!
Reviewer: lyleslove (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 09:51 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
ok, so i just found this story yesterday - so i don't know how long ago you wrote this - but i just wanted to let you know that this chapter was simply beautiful. i have no idea why you would be nervous to post it, and honestly i think it is an important part of the plot, because it shows that they are still mentally linked together even though they are physically apart. thank you for posting it - now, back to the story for me!
Author's Response: I am glad you enjoyed it and understood the purpose of including it. Thanks so much for the support and review!
Reviewer: AliciaZA (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 07:46 AM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End
You are a rockstar! A new chapter so quickly?! I love you (big smile). And thanks for always answering each and every review. Very few fanfic authors do, so its much appreciated and I always read your reply (winks).
A WONDERFUL chapter! Heartbreaking, sad, tragic, poignant - I'm running out of adjectives. I am awed by your writing. Reading Esme's point of view was incredible. It was nice for her to have an understanding of what Bella went through when she was missing, that she didn't just run away. That she had a difficult time, was in poverty (something I doubt the Cullens know about from experience - lol) and alone BUT most importantly that she did not give up and that she did want the baby (the white crib in the apartment).
Rosalie - often the forgotten Cullen. It was nice to see her get her moment in the spotlight trying to make sense of what happened. Really loved that her compassionate side was shown when she thought that Charlie should have a chance to say goodbye, like she never had. And I don't think any of us appreciated the fact that she does love Edward and Bella, she just isn't as vocal and demonstrative about it as the rest of the Cullens are.
Really hope that you do write Charlie's POV of the trip to where Bella was living. Would love to know his thoughts about where his pregnant, alone, baby girl was living.
As always, amazing writing and so seriously cannot wait for the next chapter. Post chapter 29 soon ok, while in the mean time I chant "she believes in happy endings" over and over to myself (grins).
AliciaZA
Author's Response: You so completely blow me away! Thank you so much for reading, enjoying and telling me what you think. These two ladies deserved to have their voices heard and I am blown away by the number of folks that loved to hear them. Again many many thanks for your wonderful words!
Reviewer: TheHarper (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 06:16 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity
Cliffy much????
Reviewer: TheHarper (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 06:14 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity
Cliffy much????
Author's Response: Not intentionally! Just where the character's story ended for the time being.
Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: twimom2-4 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity
Wow! You are really good. Enough said.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: TheHarper (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 05:41 AM · On: Chapter 24 - Leave the Weapons Behind
Emmett!!!!! Funny!!!!! You did a great job of depicting his lovable personality.-TheHarper
Author's Response: He has a very clear pictue of how dire things are, but manages to maintain his wit. Thank you for reviewing!
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