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Reviewer: intimationsofimmortality (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 10:45 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile

Good ending on this chapter. I'm blazing through them all, but I really liked how you ended this one, and had to stop and comment. Goosebumpy.



Author's Response: I am so glad you are enjoying the story! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Edwarda (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 04:45 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail

I hope Angela gets some were.



Author's Response:

Angela rocks in this story!  Have faith!

Reviewer: agosbac (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 04:08 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity

OMg i wanna die! This is one of the saddest chapters i read.

I want the baby to be born...

cool story i can't wait till next chapter =)



Author's Response:

All I am going to say is that I think you might like the next chapter!

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: smileyirish14 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 03:53 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity

GOOD!!!!! One of my favorites at the moment, I finished reading it in 3 days I was so desperate to keep getting back to it. :) Keep going, it's going really, really great, lol.



Author's Response:

The next chapter is in queue for validation and should be up soon!

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: SpaCullen (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 09:44 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome

I left a review after reading ch. 3, thinking I was going to sleep, but I couldn't stop!  I finally passed out 1 1/2hrs ago in the middle of this chapter (not b/c of the story, mind you!) after reading for another 2+ hours!  Sadly RL is requiring that I quit reading for now... :-(



Author's Response: Oh my gosh! I am so glad you are enjoying it (although sorry you lost sleep!) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: sulin0105 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity

pls pls pls post the next chapter!!! you write really well.



Author's Response: It is already in queue waiting to be validated! Should be up soon! Thanks fdor reviewing!

Reviewer: andreaschloe (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity

ARGH! I found this story and could not put it down! Desperate to find out what happens next! Update soon? Pretty please?



Author's Response: Welcome aboard! Glad tou found us! The next chapter is already submitted and should be up soon. Thanks for reviewing!

Author's Response: Welcome aboard! Glad tou found us! The next chapter is already submitted and should be up soon. Thanks for reviewing!

Author's Response: Welcome aboard! Glad tou found us! The next chapter is already submitted and should be up soon. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: sulin0105 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 10:58 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living

i love this story! you rock!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing!  I appreciate it!

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity

This is such an awesome story...I can't wait to read more.

I hope Bella and the Baby will be ok



Author's Response:

The next chapter of the story should be up really soon!  You'll get at least part of your answer.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 07:53 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

Oh God NO!!!!



Author's Response:

Oh yeah, it's ugly.  This is probably the most painful chapter yet.

Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 07:39 AM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On

*tears running freely* Your a freakin awesome author



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you!  That was a difficult chapter to write.


Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 07:32 AM · On: Chapter 24 - Leave the Weapons Behind

A long Freakin drive is an understatement

 



Author's Response:

Yup.  A very very long one.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 06:52 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless

Damn Angela is the best!



Author's Response:

She really does rock - and has a mean right hook!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 06:30 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile

What the hell! that was some cliffhanger



Author's Response:

And a tough chapter to boot.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 06:08 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Strong Enough

Alright they are mobilizing!!!!



Author's Response:

It's about time!  Hopefully they will get there in time.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 05:36 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Social Networking

Oh yay they are gonna talk



Author's Response:

I know, right!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 04:58 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage

Yes they are on the trail...About freakin time!. Love your story by the way



Author's Response:

I am so glad you are enjoying the story!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 04:41 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail

Good Angela is a freakin genius!!!!



Author's Response:

Angela is the bee's knees in this story!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 04:19 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation

Jimminy crickets your good...sucked right into the story



Author's Response:

Wow!  Thank you!

I appreciate your review!

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 04:08 AM · On: Chapter 2 - The Last Day of My Life

Oh poor Bella, her grief is so painful to read about but in a way it makes her more human than ever.



Author's Response:

Bella definitely has a tragic tale...

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 04:00 AM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End

What a cool twist!



Author's Response:

Welcome!  I am glad you found us!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 27 - No

K...Now I'm nervous. You keep saying the baby will be okay. I'm wondering if Bella will be okay. It will break my heart.

Author's Response: Have faith. I won't let you down. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 10:40 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Bare Hands

Poor Charlie. I can't even imagine being n his shoes. And if I were Edward, I would stay away from Charlie.

Author's Response:

Charlie may surprise you in the end.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Couture Girl (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity

ooo so good i can't wait for the next chapter! when is bella waking up?? o and i was woundering if renee knows about bella? is she going to seattle? or what? is she going to appear in the story? thanks! your one of my fav authors in here! keep up the good work! :D



Author's Response:

I am so glad you are enjoying it!  Renee will not be in the story.  You'll find out why later.  It's still a good bit before Bella comes round.  But there is lots in between.


The next chapter should be up soon!

Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 25 - Hang On

The chapter was very sad. The way Edward whispers to Bella*sigh*. I am happy is doing a little better now that Edward is with her.

Author's Response:

That is a tough tough chapter.  It was hard to write.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

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