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Reviewer: Linds14 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings
Oh yay! A healthy baby girl! I love how everyone congratulated Edward and he looked terrified of having a child, but so happy. I don't have any kids..but I imagine that's how it really is. Terrifying, yet exciting.
Of course I'm completeley desperate for Bella to get better! It was so sad when Edward whimpered, and it really is hard to see how he handles it through other people's eyes..
Can't wait to meet baby Swan-Cullen!
Oh and I agree, new daddy's with their babies are one of the sweetest things! (especially if it's Edward shirtless..will we get to see that?) :D
Author's Response: Actually, you will, although not right away.
I have a son and yup, it's terrifying and exciting and wonderful and... life altering. Hopefully, you'll see that in the next chapter.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: twilightchick (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings
I cant for Edward to see the baby. it will be fabulous.
Author's Response: I hope you enjoy how it's written!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: iponeddyou (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings
I left my travel pack of tissue at Harry Potter last night.
And though the tears streaming down my face are both happy and of despair, that bright light made me smile like a goon.
I'm gonna echoe Charlie in this one and say, “Carlisle, just bring back my little girl now.”
Bella has to make it out.
Or I think my heart is gonna break.
Into more then two.
You're brilliant, Jasper...Jasper(I love him).
And I'll be counting the seconds until the nest chapter. <3
xoxo - Cherolyn
Author's Response: I love Jasper. He's so much fun to write.
I am glad you are enjoying the story and am grateful for the review!
Reviewer: BlueAngel145 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings
aww it so sad i feel so bad for edward, (tear) i cant wait for the next chapter ur killing me here.. must know what happens Im tristy for More chapters like a newborn vampire lol.. nluv luv ur story
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it. The next one should be up soon.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: LisaLoo (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings
So emotional. What a chapter. Thanks for a great update. The bit of beautiful light at the end of the tunnel was so nice. Jasper was a dream. sigh.
Author's Response: I puffy heart Jasper. He's so much fun to write.
I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Finally - a light at the end of the tunnel that was *not* a train!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: secamimom (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings
Oh my god, I am in tears. I absolutely loved him. What broke me was Charlie telling Carlisle to bring back his little girl. I absolutely cannot wait for EPOV of seeing his daughter for the first time.
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it! You might just get your wish in the next chapter.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: tarebear015 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 09:48 AM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings
You know how they say that when you are in a restaurant, someone should go to the bathroom because then the food will come?? Well, I've been waiting and waiting and refreshing my favorites page all day. Then I decided to take a break, go eat some dinner and guess what?? I come back and you updated!!! I was seriously bouncing in my seat! I love your story soooo much. And I am so happy that Edward and Bella's baby girl is all right. I can't wait to read about him meeting the second most important woman in his life.
Author's Response: LOL! That is inevitably true! I'm glad it worked and you got the chapter!
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 09:47 AM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings
Yay you rock!! :-)
A baby Edwina! LoL k so that is VERY cheesy...
It's gonna be great can't wait til Bella wakes up & she gets to see Edward & their baby!
Author's Response: Edwina! LOL! I had a dog named Edwina!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 09:45 AM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings
oh atleast they got some happy news...
Author's Response: I know, right? At least something good happened.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: kels16 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 09:45 AM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings
Yes! I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: And more you shall get!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: agosbac (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 09:43 AM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings
I really love this chapter!!
I'm crying like a baby right now. poor charlie =(
Can't wait till next chapter. I hope is EPOV.
And pleeasee i want bella to wake up and i want a HEA!! :P
very cool story, you're doing a great job!
Author's Response: I am so glad you liked it, and I think you may just get part of your wish in the next chapter!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: hugsandkisses1320 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings
WAY cute, but still far too sad. PLEASE bring Bella back soon? I absolutely love this story, update soon!
Author's Response: There is all sorts of sad to be had, alas.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings
Awwww so happy that the baby is alright - early but seemingly alright! Poor Edward, Poor Charlie....Poor Bella....
Can't wait to see what you've cooked up next!
Author's Response: The next one is a real heart string tugger!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: angmclure (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 09:40 AM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings
YA, I'm so happy that the baby's here and doing well at the moment. I hope she stays that way but I've learned to be wary of the good things cause you write the bad very well. I like Jasper pov and I'm glad that everyone is together. I feel for Charlie and Edward. They don't know what to feel. I can't wait for Edward to meet his daughter. Keep it coming cause you rock.
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it! The baby is finally here!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Shell_Linkin (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings
Oh wow 'new daddy cullens cuddling their new baby daughters while shirtless' - wouldn't that be a sight for sore eyes - YAY indeed! I'm so glad the bubba is here and all ok, we really did need some good news.
Author's Response: I know, right? At least I gave you a little hope!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: kshaudae (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings
Aww! Thats really a bitter sweet moment if I've ever read one! But a little girl! I'm so happy!
Author's Response: It truly is. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Ryansmama04 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings
awwwwww...I love it :) Gave me chills and tears in my eyes. Cannot wait for the next chapter. I loved that Jasper was the first to congratulate Edward, that was PERFECT.
Author's Response: Jasper is his best friend, despite everything that happened. I am glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for the review!
Author's Response: Jasper is his best friend, despite everything that happened. I am glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: twi_mom_teddi (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings
God this is so good! ALways brings me near to tears! But at least I have a smile on my face now! LOVE IT!!
Author's Response: At least there is a little hope now! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Saturn (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings
awww.. a girl :-).. That is great.
I love this story .. just freaking love it.
Author's Response: I am so glad you are enjoying it! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: latinabeauty70 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 09:36 AM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings
Fantastic chap! I know the rest will be hard. Question R u only updating once a week? I love ur fic so much that I just want more.
Author's Response: I have no real update schedule. When one chapter posts, I submit the next within a day. It all depends on validation. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Author's Response: I have no real update schedule. When one chapter posts, I submit the next within a day. It all depends on validation. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 09:34 AM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings
Oh, I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: It should be up soon! Thanksfor reviewing!
Reviewer: oceanwaters2006 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 09:28 AM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings
YAY!!!!!!!!! BABY TIME!!!!!!!
Oh I must say it, because you know how true it is...I fucking love Jasper. So much. I want to sit on his dirty mouth and punish him throughly for being such a bad, bad boy. OKay, I'm done with my mad professions of Jasper love...for the moment.
Did I mention it's BABY TIME!!!!!!!!!! WHOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!
XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO Jess
Author's Response: Jasper does, indeed, rock out! Thank you for everything you do!
Reviewer: tarebear015 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 08:31 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity
Dying for an update! I know it's awaiting validation, but how long does that usually take?!?! I seriously have been checking every hour to see if there has been an update because I haven't figured out how to get an alert email when you update.
LOVE LOVE LOVE your story. How many chapters are you planning on stretching this out into?
Author's Response: Validation takes anywhere from 1 to 4 days.
The story look as though it will go 40-50 chapters with a multi chapter epilogue.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Cosmos (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 06:23 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity
Wow I've just ploughed through all the chapters of this story - sorry there was no way I could have stopped and reviewed each of them - I just could not wait to get to the next chapter. Your writing style is unique - fast paced, action packed angst - love it.
Nice orginal plot line, yeah yeah we've all seen the Bellas pregnant storylines but not like this. Absolutely loving it - well done.
My only question, why the hell haven't they delivered the baby already, shes 8 months, pretty much full term and they didn't even seem to be monitoring the babies heart rate - sorry I'm a recent new Mum of a premmie baby (3 1/2 lbs) so notice these things!
Can't wait for an update...
Author's Response: You will get an answer in the next chapter!
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: carlybabes (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity
I am loving this story! Great job writing. I can't wait until you update!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing!
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