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Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 03:30 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings
I am sooooo happy there was some good that came out of this. Little baby Swan-Cullen is just what they need to help them get through what is happening to poor Bella. Maybe you really do believe in happy endings!
Author's Response: I honestly do!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: dancing_in_my_underwear (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 03:28 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings
Baby Swan-Cullen put a smile on my face after sitting here frowning at the screen cause Bella was still not okay. I can't wait to read Edward holding the baby and also finding out what he names her.
I liked it starting with Jaspers POV and him saying it like it is. Everything's fucked and it will be for a while no matter the outcome. And then Carlisles POV was soothing. I'm not sure what else to say but I loved the chapter.
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it! Jasper is such fun to write and he's *so* good at the truth. He sees things exactly as they are and has no problem saying it!
Thanks so much for all of your support both here and on the thread.
Reviewer: twitina (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings
I loved the happy moment...even among the angst that hovers over them!!
The BABY!!! I really can't wait to see how you write Edward's first moments with his daughter. sigh
I love Charlie! He has always been one of my favorites. He will be the glue for Edward and Bella at some point. I love that he is expressing his emotions!!
Bring on the nex chapter!! lol
Author's Response: I like this Charlie. This is how I've always pictured him. He's going to impress you, I think!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: kstabb1001 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 03:25 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings
That was just wow! Poor Charlie and Edward, torn in two is exactly how to phrase it! Charlie's line of 'bring back my little girl' was just too heart wrentching! Great chapter!
Author's Response: They are in a difficult place right now. Warring emotions.
I'm grateful for your review!
Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 03:24 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings
Baby cigars all around! Great chapter!! Thank you!!!
Joan
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Mom of 2 in WI (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings
I like my bone! Sniff ,sniff. Good mental image of Cullen w/o shirt holding his girl - I have one of those shots and it's sexy, even though it's the most non sexual thing he could be doing. Weird how those feelings get all mixed up!
Author's Response: I completely agree! But it's a beautiful sight none the less.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Rachxox7 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 03:21 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings
OMG. I can't wait till next chapter! Ok, well that was exciting. I also understand why Charlie is not ready to forgive Edward. Edward hurt his baby girl, any dad would be upset.
Author's Response: No, he's not there yet. But this Charlie is a fair man so we'll see what he does from here.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: amybo15 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings
well I am happy the baby girl arrived! But come on, bring bella back already! I'm so nervous for her!
Great story... I was so excited when I saw that you updated! I went to read it right away!!!
Author's Response: Bella has quite a fight ahead of her.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Author's Response: Bella has quite a fight ahead of her.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings
Awe the little baby girl! Now everything else needs to fall into place.
Author's Response: It will take time, but everything will be okay.
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: nicarter (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings
ohh yay..this made my night...cant wait for the next chappy!!
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: PLV (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings
Well at least the little girl will have plenty of love shown to ehr before her Mom wakes up. It was a good chapter. I am please that all of them are getting along and perhaps in time will be ok. They have to not only focus on the baby getting bigger,since she's pre term. Bella will need to heal as well. Giving blood was a great idea. Please update soon.
Author's Response: There is so much left to heal in this story, but you're right. The baby will not want for love in the least.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: lucky4me13 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 03:14 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings
ahh so good soo good. more more more
Author's Response: I am glad you are enjoying the story!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: kvgamble (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 03:11 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings
this story still brings tears to me. seeing the baby will make it a little better for him, but he will not be whole until bella is out of surgery and all right. this is an amazing story and you are writing it so well, please update soon.
Author's Response: I am so glad you are enjoying it!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: RealityRedefined (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 03:11 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings
More - please, hurry.....!!!
Author's Response: LOL! I try to keep 'em coming!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: kenziemorton (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings
OMFG!!!!!!!!!! you rock i loved it! awe a little girl.
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings
Awww, Edward is a daddy! But I could just feel his pain and guilt over everything Bella is going through on top of guilt for being a tad bit happy about the baby, when Bella is still suffereing. Loved Jasper's POV, too! Great chapter to a great story! More, more soon so we can meet baby girl Swan-Cullen!
Author's Response: Edward is going through so much emotionally at this point. Despair, elation all warring it out.
Thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: kellyliz82 (Anonymous) · Date: July 15, 2009 03:09 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings
I am so glad that baby Cullen is here and well! Can't wait to hear from Edward about that. I am ready for Bella to be okay.... I hope she is going to be okay. I mean, can you have a HEA without her? *gulp*
I love Jasper's POV, you write him so well. Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: I love writing Jasper. He is a blast. And yay! The baby is here! I hope you like Edward's reaction in the next chapter!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: lulabelljane (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 03:07 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings
I think having Jasper being one to give blood was a great twist on fate...glad he stepped up! Love his POVs!!!
Shes here!!! YAY! I have to say...Edwards reaction...scared shitless I'm sure...but I KNOW that he is already madly in love with his little girl. I wanna be mad you for leaving it there right before he meets her but I can't! But I CAN'T wait for when he first sees her. Awww...I just know I'm gonna be bawling like a baby!
The part with Carlisle and Charlie...Carlisle asking him to give Edward a chance and Charlie simply saying we're grandparents...sooooo simply done and yet sooo crazy beautiful!!!!
You rocked it again!
Author's Response: I am so glad you are enjoying the story! Jasper is a blast to write, so he actually crops up quite often now. Edward is so torn right now, as is Charlie. They feel the magnitude more than any other characters. The despair about Bella and the happiness about the baby.
Again, thank you so much for your support here and on the thread!
Reviewer: GinnyW (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 03:07 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings
Awww. I wanna cry happy tears. Such a mess, though. Is she going to be able to have more children? My thought by what you've written is no. So sad. And, yanno, she still has to survive the rest of this. But, gah, I am SO glad to hear that Edward wants to see the baby. Thrilled actually. He could've easily slipped back to self-loathing and avoided her, but that wouldn't have done anyone any good.
Okay, I want more, you know the wait is killing me between updates. But that's because I'm impatient, and because of the style that you used to tell the story. The short bursts never feel like enough.
Author's Response: LOL! Well, I try to keep them coming quickly!
Yes, Edward could have easily slipped back into his old ways, but he decided to go in the correct direction. He's stepping up the plate and taking responsibility for his actions, as well as his child. Thank goodness, right?
I'm so glad you're enjoying the story. You will actually get answers to a lot of your questions as we go.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: lisambb (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings
Yay! The baby is here, which is good, but I need the Bella/Edward reunion. Soon. Pretty please?
Author's Response: Be careful what you wish for!
It will be okay in the end, though.
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: anna123 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 03:04 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings
Aww!! A little bundle of joy coming to safe them all from going crazy! :) How far along was Bella again?
Can't wait to read more! :D
Author's Response: Bella was about 8 months along. Maybe just a little more.
I'm so glad you are enjoying the story and grateful for the review!
Reviewer: ablissfulday (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings
Yay! I will be happier when the knot in my stomach abates though.
Author's Response: It will be a while, but everything will be okay.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: dolce amore mio (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings
To say that leaving it there is cruel is an understatement. Hell, calling it a mere understatement is cruel in itself. I think this classifies under stealing candy from a baby cruel.
After every sentence I would read I'd check where the scroll on scroll thingy was to see how much I had left until the end of the chapter, which I was dreading with everything in my heart!
I love every single chapter of this story, you seem to potray Edward and Bella's feeling exactly as i would imagine them if such situation were to arise. I hardly ever read angst, only if the story is complete and I'm assured a happy ending or, this happens rarley, if a story is so good just from the first chapter that I must read it to know what happens, and let me tell you, I was hooked from the first sentence. I'm so glad I took the chance and read it, though I must confess, I did it because I thought that by the 29th chapter Edward and Bella would have resolved most of their problems, but I love it so much more this way, it really blows me away!
I would go on and on about what I love about this, but alas I think this is a pretty legnthy review, so I won't write any more than necessary.
Author's Response: Wow. What an amazing and wonderful review?! Thank you so much for all of your kind words. I'm glad you feel as though I'm capturing the emotions of this situation. That is the entire purpose of this story. It means a lot that you think I'm getting it right!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: roxyrain (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings
Ahhh, finally a little something to be smiling about. Can't wait until Edward meets his little girl. Now bring Bella back soon!!
Author's Response: LOL! At least I gave you something!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: mom2kandg (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings
IT'S A GIRL!!!!! I really loved this chapter, I loved reading Jasper's POV and when Carlisle came in not knowing what he was gonna say had me on the edge of my seat...I am so glad that Edward is gonna get to see his and Bella's beautiful baby girl....You did an awesome job, Ellie!!! Finally I can see a little light at the end of the tunnel....YAY!!!
Author's Response: A light at the end of the tunnel that *isn't* a train! What's wrong with me? LOL!
I'm so glad you liked it. Jasper is so wonderful. And Carlisle had no idea how to say what he had to say, how to feel.
Thanks so much for all of your support!
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