Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 45

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 45

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 46

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 46

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 47

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 47

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 48

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 48

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 49

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 45

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 45

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 46

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 46

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 47

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 47

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 48

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 48

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 49

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 45

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 45

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 46

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 46

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 47

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 47

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 48

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 48

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 49
Twilighted :: All-Inclusive, High-Quality Twilight Fan Fiction






Your donations help keep this site running,
thank you very much for the support!
Reviews For Not Like This
Reviewer: twimommy (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition

I just wish she could hear his heart-felt apology.  But I know it will come.



Author's Response:

That it will.  The question then becomes, will it be enough?

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: juliebutterfly (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings

Awww it's a girl. But please, oh please, don't call her Renesmee, it's so ugly.

 

Thanks for bringing Jasper and Carlisle back, a little Jasper humour was much needed, and I just love how you write Carlisle. They're both so observant



Author's Response:

There will be *no* Reneesme in this story!  I assure you!

Jasper is so much fun to write.  He has such a clear view of things and simples them up!  And Carlisle... I love writing Carlisle.  He's so strong and wise but still compassionate.

Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: twimommy (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 06:28 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Sound of Music

Jasper is fun.  So is the interaction between Rose and him.

I'm glad they get to go and join everyone else.

BTW this Nekky Cullen Sundae idea.  Someone should propose it to Ben and Jerry as a new flavor.  They'd be raking it in.



Author's Response:

LOL!  I'd buy it!

I love Jasper.  He's so much fun to write!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: annetted (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings

Mrs Potato those images you leave in the end notes.  Shirtless daddy Cullens cuddling their baby.  I'd like to see that.  Could we arrange that, do you think?

Another sterling chapter.  Jasper was a breath of fresh air and his love for his family is so clear.  Poor Carlisle trying to keep his family together and save Bella too - what a job. 

More updates soon please.  Love your work.



Author's Response:

I think that can be arranged:)

I love Jasper.  He's got such a great view of the situation and has no trouble calling a spade a spade.

Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: twimommy (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome

It must've been incredibly painful to examine her!

 



Author's Response:

I cannot even imagine.

Thank you again for reviewing!

Reviewer: GracieGracie (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 05:58 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings

You had me crying buckets...



Author's Response:

AW!  I'm sorry!

Thank you for reviewing all the same!

Reviewer: twimommy (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 05:54 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless

Thanks to Angela for asking the tough questions.



Author's Response:

Angela consistently steps up to the plate in that regard.  She's wonderful!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: twimommy (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 19 - The Flight of a Phoenix

Good to see Edward  pulling it together



Author's Response:

He's got a lot of work to do in that regard.

I appreciate your review!

Reviewer: chagrace (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings

i am crying while writing this. that last sentence just makes me cry. "to meet the rest of his life," awwww.. so cute.

Reviewer: chagrace (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings

i am crying while writing this. that last sentence just makes me cry. "to meet the rest of his life," awwww.. so cute.

Author's Response:

Everything just changed drastically, again, for Edward.  So much to absorb!

Thanks so much for review!

Reviewer: twimommy (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell

Painful!  Bittersweet because now he knows, finally.



Author's Response:

He now knows the magnitude of his mistake as well.

Thank you so much for your reviews!

Reviewer: twimommy (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Venom and Bile

Great descriptions of all the emotions Edward is going through!

I feel so bad for him!



Author's Response:

He is being torn apart right now, but it's necessary so that he can be reborn.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: twimommy (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 05:05 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary

Edward is going--willingly!



Author's Response:

Yup!  He has quite the journey to make now.

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: tigger12 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings

i have a feeing the next chapter is gonna be ridiculously amazing. edward plus baby equals tears :)



Author's Response:

Keep the tissues at the ready!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: twimommy (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response

So waiting to know if the baby is OK!  Is Alice on a plane yet?



Author's Response:

You will find out shortly!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings

I'm happy the baby is OK..I find myself wondering how much she weighs.. I'm glad that Edward is eager to see her and  can't wait for Edward to hold her, it will be so sweet........I'm just hoping that you save Bella, too...



Author's Response:

It will all be okay in the end.  Promise.

Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: twimommy (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 04:42 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Strong Enough

How big of a wrinkle?!!

 



Author's Response:

Um, really big.

Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: Leanne (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 04:35 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings

Awww I love Jaspers take on things, but I totally melt at broken Edward getting all elated at being a daddy... Hell, I'm not above offering him more babies =)

Great chapter, I eagerly await the rest



Author's Response:

LOL!  Edward spawn would populate the Earth!

Jasper is so much fun to write.  I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: shay anthony masen cullen (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 04:33 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End

wow....powerful.....

Author's Response:

Thank you.  I hope you enjoy the story!

I appreciate your review!

Reviewer: vampedup (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings

So, i just joined in on this story and i had to finish it in one sitting. We really need something happy, and soon. I love this story and I just couldn't stop reading for long enough to review all the chapters. I just wanted to read more. Looking foward to your next update.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I'm glad you found us and are enjoying the story!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: twimommy (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Grandfather

Woohoo!  Grandpa Carlisle knows



Author's Response:

Yup!  He's going to be Grandaddy C!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: DazzledLamb (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings

Im all choked up! I love this story.. Its so terribly sad :( Yay for the baby! Bella needs to be okay!!! Update soon



Author's Response:

I am so glad you are enjoying it, as tough as it can be to read!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: twimommy (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Nightmare of a Love Story

great emotions--lots of tears!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I appreciate your review!

Reviewer: lucyv (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings

Again, highly emotional and very beautiful at the end! I like it a lot. You know there are great many stories here with really good beginnings, turning pretty lame as they progress. It's so not your case. Can't wait for an update and for Bella to get back and give Edward some hard time:)



Author's Response:

Wow!  Thank you so much!  I'm glad this story is keeping up!

I appreciate your review!

Reviewer: amylouwho (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings

Aww, A baby girl!
I was so worried when Carlisle was thinking that he had a good thing and a bad thing to tell them. I am so glad that the bad thing is only that she is still in surgery. I was so worried for a few seconds there! Your going to make us wait another chapter to find out if it really is bad, BAD news, huh? Fine. I guess the baby girl being held by the shirtless daddy Cullen can be your saving grace. :) Thanks for the update!

Author's Response:

LOL!  No news on Bella in the next chapter, but  I think I will make up for it!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

You must login (register) to review.




Share/Save/Bookmark


© 2008, 2009 Twilighted Enterprises, LLC. All Rights Reserved.
Unauthorized duplication is a violation of applicable laws.
Privacy Policy | Terms of Service

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the intellectual property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of Stephenie Meyer. No copyright infringement is intended.