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Reviewer: dancing_in_my_underwear (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 04:27 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls
OMG this chapter was so sweet!! His "little love" awwww that was so gorgeous! I could picture it in my head so well and it's just so beautiful and lovely.
Charlie's reaction to Edwards speech to the baby too was perfect. Hopefully he'll ease up a bit on Edward cause he's obviously seeing that Edward knows he made a mistake and that he knows he's going to have to work hard to make up for it.
Author's Response: I think Charlie indirectly bonded with Edward in the role of father. The eavesdropping was iffy, but, in this case, better than any conversation the two could have. I am so grateful for all of your support!!
Reviewer: vampedup (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 04:26 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls
Gah!!! Can't I get through a chapter without crying?!?! Still love it... Anxiously awaiting when everyone is a family... Please let it happen
Author's Response: That probably wasn't the best chapter to try! Lol! Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Leanne (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls
Oh what a touchingl chapter to wake up to, I thank you! I'd like to think it was my tiredness making my eyes water, but secretly I'll admit it's the image of him breaking down talking to his daughter...
Have you decided on her name? Will it be Renesmee or are you going to go all original?
Wonderful, wonderful chapter. And glad it came out so fast!
Author's Response: There will be no Renesmee! She deserves better! And sweet Daddyward is definitely a heart string tugger. Thanks so much for reviewing.
Reviewer: apricot (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls
omg!!!!!!!!!! I.HAVE.NEVER.CRIED.SO.MUCCCCCCH.IN.MY.WHOLE.HISTORY.OF.READING.FANFICS(well actually including actual books i guess..and i love to read i tell you. i guess the closest i'v cried like this was reading message in a bottle by n.sparks or bridges of madison country).. i can't stop crying even until now.. i easily cry over movies and books but i've never cried like this in such a long time..you are a wonderful writer. thank you.. sometimes it's good to cry like this.. but edward talking to her daughter..it was just so heartfelt.. and i remember the time when i first saw my daughter in the nursery area (NICU) as well..everything edward said..it was soooooooooo beauiful that even if i were charlie as well and i heard him say that, it would totally win me over as well. gosh... i'll read it again. this was really really really good. my fave chapter so far. give yourself a pat in the back..or whatever it is you do to treat yourself. you so deserved it. thanks so much.
Author's Response: Oh my gosh! Thank you so much for this amazing review! It is bringing up a lot of emotions in readers (and me) and I am so very honoured and gratefulm. Thanks so much!
Reviewer: BlueAngel145 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 04:20 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls
omg i crying it was so sad omg im crying like a retard omg i love ur story cant wait for next chapter best chapter i have to say
Author's Response: Lol! You are not! It is a tear jerker, I know! Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: kismit1496 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 04:13 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls
ok just let him have the opportunity for that second chance!!! Oh and I want her able to have kids - so keep her girlie parts inside cuz someday they have to do this right!
Author's Response: Lol! We will get to that! Let's hope Bella can be as open minded as Charlie! Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls
I have been captivated by this story from the beginning and I have to tell you that was the most moving chapter yet, I honestly can't wait for more :) Do you kinow how many chapters you will make this story? I LOVE IT!!!
Author's Response: I have no idea! At least 45, with a 5-10 chapter epilogue to give you the HEA. Thanks so much for your review!
Reviewer: Humble (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls
A really Beautiful chapter!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I really wanted to get this right.
Reviewer: dandyvamp (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls
You always deliver!
Author's Response: Thank you! So glad you are enjoying it!
Reviewer: naeo99 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls
Wow! So sweet! Babies are so wonderful.
Author's Response: Sweet Daddyward is pretty wonderful himself! Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Shiki25 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls
Short but beautiful chapter .... heart aches when reading Edward's POV...
Author's Response: Edward has so much to absorb in that moment. So many emotions. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: iponeddyou (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls
So, I introduced my best friend to you fabulous story.
She's hooked.
This chapter made me ball... but it's all good. They were happy tears. And I love Charlie and his want to hate Edward, though he can't.
God you're brilliant.
xoxo - Cherolyn
Author's Response: Aw thank you! I really wanted to get this right. I am grateful for the review!
Reviewer: twi_mom_teddi (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls
So good!!! I was hoping that the 2nd POV was goign to be Charlie! Yaay!
Author's Response: Charlie definitely saw Edward differently when thinking about him in light of his own little girl. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: LightfromEJ (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls
loved the chapter!
loved the story!
its just awesome!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. This chapter meant a lot to me.
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 03:47 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls
Oh yeah. This was beautiful. Absolutely.
Author's Response: Thank you. It was so important to me to get this right.
Reviewer: annetted (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful!!! You really captured the emotion of that moment so well. I want to read it again and again. Thank you Mrs Potato.
Author's Response: I am so glad it worked for you! Thank you for always reviewing!
Reviewer: twimommy (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls
So beautiful--it was perfect!
And to top it off Charlie overheard and was convinced.
Author's Response: Edward is still not Charlie's fave person, but this helped see him in a different light. Much more effective than a purposeful discussion. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Juliamine (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls
Blown away.
There are no words to express just how blown away I am from reading this chapter. It was utterly perfect. edward's words to his daughter about Bella broke my heart, but not in a bad way. In a omg this is incredible way. In a omg the bond between all three of them is unbreakable no matter what. This chapter caused the flood gates to open, thank god for kleenex!
I love Charlie so much more as well. I feel a glimmer of hope knowing he believes Edward is true to his word. True to his love for Bella and Baby Swan-Cullen. <3
Author's Response: Aw! Thank you. I wanted so badly to get this one right and am so grateful for the feedback. They are all so connected now... And Charlie will surprise you, I think. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Tulips at Twilight (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls
Super sweet that Edward is. I was crying with him. I think it was great that Charlie was able to hear Edward talking to his little love. Now we just need to get Bella out of surgery so she can meet her daughter and see Edward. Great job with this chapter.
Author's Response: Eavesdropping is usually not good, but in this case it was much needed. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: iliveforthis (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls
omg, i got a little teary at the end :[
Author's Response: It is a tear jerker! Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Sadielady115 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls
~Sniffs~ My God woman! thats twice in two days you've made me cry!
so the next thong I'm looking foreard to as far as Edward/Baby is the frist time he holds her!!(being a permie myself...all be it I was 3 months early... it is a very improtant step) and her name!
now we need to get bella back!!! please let that be soon!
I loved it honey! Awesome Chapter! I'm going to go read it again.
Jacqui*~
Author's Response: All of it is coming! I promise!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Nannabell (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls
That made me sob. I have no idea how you got through that without 10 boxes of tissues. Incredible. Very heartfelt. Uggh, I am glad I took of my mascara. Great job, I can't wait for an update. Was this story nominated for any award?
Author's Response: Trust me, this is truly draining to write at times. Getting in there and allowing myself to feel it... I am so grateful for your review!
Reviewer: kvgamble (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls
well a tissue was defiently needed. that was very emotional, this side of edward and charlie is something far better then could have ever been written. you are doing a fantastic job, please update soon. I cannot wait until Bella is back.
Author's Response: Wow. Thank you so much. No one is one sided emotionally, so I am glad I was able to show them in another light. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Kirbs (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls
That was beautiful, and i love that Charlie heard this too, and can see that Edward just made a stupid mistake. Can't write much more, as i can't really see the screen, but that was just........ WOW!!
Author's Response: Edward still is not Charlie's favourite person, but a connection was made through their respective little girls. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Totoro (Anonymous) · Date: July 16, 2009 03:28 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls
Well done.
Author's Response: Thank you!
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