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Reviewer: sambois (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 11:57 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls
wow that was beautiful! emotional daddies alwayss get me!
Author's Response: Yes, Sweet Daddyward definitely tugs at the heart strings!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: cullenobsession (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 11:54 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls
::tear:: ::sniff:: ::tear:: ::sniff::
Author's Response: I am glad I did it justice.
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: kaottic1 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 11:51 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls
i cried during edward's talk to his 'little love'... Little love, his little bella... I cried
Author's Response: Little Love. ::: sigh ::: Part of that came from his pet name for Bella, and part came from the fact that I call my son that! Still, I thought it fit with the story.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: giada marsielle (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 11:51 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls
someone, *somewhere*, has a photoshopped picture of Rob holding a baby... it slays me every time.
Can't wait to read about the big meeting!
Author's Response: It, as well as a bunch of photos of Little Love, have made their way to my forum thread! Go take a peek!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Iwant2sparkle (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 11:46 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls
OMG! I have to stop reading this story at work or else people will think I am emotionally unstable for having random breakdowns. Awesome chapter. I love how she woke up and just stared at him. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Lol! I should put a warning on the chapters: Do Not Read at Work! I’m sorry it made you cry, but I am glad you are connecting to the story!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: tj33 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Sweet Mary
I LOVE Alice!! She takes charge and gets things done. The way she commanded Edward to get a shower and then gently told him Bella needed them was perfect.
Author's Response: Alice is so good at handling things. She knows what each person needs to motivate them.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: kal0797 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 11:34 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls
GREAT chapter!!!!!!!!!!! I love the emotions that pour out from Edward and Charlie's realization that Edward is sincere in his love for Bella. Can't wait for more!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: There is so much warring emotion here. Edward’s torn between elation and terror. Love for his baby and Bella and fear for Bella’s life. Charlie is torn between hating Edward for hurting his little girl, and realizing this was a kid who made a mistake and truly loves his new little family. All sorts to absorb!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: lifesbliss (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls
I bet she is beautiful!
Author's Response: She is! Some folks on the thread posted pictures of what they thought she would look like! So cute!
Reviewer: tj33 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Emergency Response
UGH! So sad, crying, weeping for Bella and her baby. Hope she is okay and so is baby.
Author's Response: There is so much to heal here, both physically and emotionally. Hang on, though. I do believe in happy endings!
Reviewer: whyzul (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 11:26 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls
Heart wrenching and beautiful.
Author's Response: I am glad I did it justice.
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: Brianna Newth (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls
Beautiful! I'm still crying. I think I went through a box of tissues reading that. *sob* Please let him hold her soon!!!
Author's Response: It's such an emotional chapter, I know!
Thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: lulabelljane (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls
Ellie...you did so well with this chapter...so damn well! :) You had me bawling like a baby...I don't know if that was the intention...but it was the outcome none the less.
Edward...ugh...he fell in love with his little girl right away...and I don't blame him one bit...the way you described her...gosh, sounds like one gorgeous baby. When he was talking to her...and he was just as enchanted with her and she was with him. I loved how she hung on his every word. And his promise to her...ugh! Yeah, more tears!
Charlie...that had to be hard for him to hear...cause he wants soooo badly to be mad at Edward...to punch him...to make him hurt just as much as he made Bella hurt...but then he heard him talking to the baby...and like Esme said...we all deserve second chances...and he knew deep down that was true!
BEAUTIFULLY DONE!!!
Author's Response: It's such a chapter of warring emotions. Edward's love for the baby and Bella and his terror that Bella will not get better. Charlie's anger at Edward and reluctant acceptance of the depth of love Edward has for his "family". It's just so much to absorb.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: saranic (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls
Awww, little baby Cullen with Edward's hair and Bella's eyes. That was so emotional. And as wrong as it was for Charlie to be listening, I am glad he did to hear Edward speak from his heart.
Great chapter.
Author's Response: Eavesdropping, in general, is not of the good. In this case, however, it was more effective than any conversation the two men could have had.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: tj33 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 11:20 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Strong Enough
Poor Edward is so brokenhearted over Bella, why can he not see that he needs to be with her? I am so glad Alice is getting him to come back.
Author's Response: Because Edward is willing to punish himself until the end of time for her, if that is what it takes to protect her. And that's what he honestly thinks he's doing.
Thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 11:18 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls
Oh dear Lord I should not have read this before a staff meeting...
I am bawling and have racoon eyes...
I'll just have to say I'm upset because I ran over a squirrel or something on the way to work... LoL
Thanks for updating!
Author's Response: Oh no! I'm sorry for that! And I'm glad no squirrels were harmed in the making of this comment!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: soccaqt0418 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 11:17 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls
This chapter is the best one yet. It shows perfectly all the emotions they both were feeling. Wonderful!!
Author's Response: I am so glad I did it justice. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: mika429 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 11:13 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls
I believe you have struck gold with this one. Well, I cried....I don't know about anyone else. Hell, I can't see how someone could not cry after reading this. But, I will keep repeating the mantra about HEA....
Thanks for an awesome chapter...update soon.
Author's Response: It is a really emotional chapter, but there is so much hope in there too. Just hang on to that!
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Laxmom (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 11:10 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls
very well done...........again.
Author's Response: I am glad you feel I did it justice. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: tj33 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 11:08 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Grandfather
Wow! Carlisle guessed the reason Bella thought Edward left and why she left Forks, smart man. Like the idea they are going to charter a plane and tell Edward in flight, good choice.
Author's Response: Carlisle definitely is both book smart and intuitive. And yes, telling Edward in a contained environment is definitely best.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: jaymeg (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 11:05 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls
Ugh, beautiful, tender, heart-wrenching. I loved every word. Edward talking to his little love, fingers tracing her...no words. I am very glad that Charlie got to experience it first hand too. Now we need to know how Bella is doing.
Author's Response: It is definitely an emotional chapter. There will be an update on Bella in the next. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: luckymac (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 11:04 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls
*sniffs* I finally had my box of puffs on hand! :) Awwww, the whole chapter just makes you want to give Edward and Charlie a hug. Is Edward going to get to bring the baby to visit Bella in post op? Will they be the ones who bring Bella back? I can't wait to see Edward introduce them! Besides having the baby and Bella in the same room will help both of them get better faster. Update ASAP!
Author's Response: I think everyone needs a hug and some massive counseling! The baby will be brought to Bella in due time. I agree, it will help them both. Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: tj33 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 11:00 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Nightmare of a Love Story
So glad Alice knows now and is going to try to help Bella by convincing her that Edward lied about not loving her and did not know she was pregnant. Love Angela for caring for Bella.
Author's Response: Alice and Angela are both so loyal and loving. Thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: ninachr (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 10:59 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls
Yay!!!Awsome!!!Update again soon, please...Ps.Glad to see that Charlie is coming around. ;D Great chapter.
Reviewer: edwardluva84 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 10:59 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls
OMG! You did that perfectly! My heart is breaking for both of them. PLEASE let Bella be ok so she can see her baby girl!
Author's Response: I am so glad you felt I did it justice! Bella will be ok, but we've a tough road to hoe. Thasnks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: crazytwilight (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 10:46 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls
I love this chapter. I love this whole story. I just lost my dad in september so this was very moving for me. You are a wonderfull writer. I hope you update soon.
Author's Response: Oh my gosh. I am so very sorry for your loss. My dad is my hero and a wonderful person and I know how much that must hurt. I shiver thinking about it.
I am so very glad you were able to enjoy the story, despite the lingering feelings.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
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