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Reviewer: mzvez (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 03:45 PM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

I was wondering what happend to you.  Thank goodness your back.  As usual I can't wait for more.



Author's Response: I am here! So glad you stuck around! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: jazzy-cullen (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 03:45 PM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

thanks for updating. i don't plan on leaving this story, but i would really, seriously like more frequent updates or longer chapters.  it's really hard to go through breaks and big/small cliffies with angsty stuff. write on.....



Author's Response: I usually get out 1 to 2 a week. This was just an extraordinary circumstance! Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: twitina (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

My only complaint - not long enough!!  lol

I can't wait to see what he names the baby!!  It's still a long road ahead. 

Love it!



Author's Response: You will find out shortly who our Little Love will be! Thanks for reviewing!

Author's Response: You will find out shortly who our Little Love will be! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: mlovecullen (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 2 - The Last Day of My Life

That poor girl.



Author's Response: Poor girl, indeed. Alas, it only gets harder from here.

Reviewer: mlovecullen (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 03:24 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End

Oh wow Bella isn't going to tell him is she?

 



Author's Response: You will definitely find out! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: theladyingrey (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls

Holy crap, this story has me hook line and sinker. The heartfail is getting a little heavy, but Edward pouring out his heart to his newborn daughter??? *Sob!* Can't wait to find out what happens next.



Author's Response:

Hopefully, more will finally be up soon!  I am so glad you are reading and connecting to the story.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: jengurl0413 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 07:12 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action

when are you going to update?? Don't leave us hanging!



Author's Response:

I didn't mean to!

I submitted a one shot as a part of VAJWET (my other project) and it was in queue for almost 2 weeks without being validated.  I finally deleted it as I think our poor validators are overloaded with new stories, and submitted the next NLT chapter last night.  I hope it's up soon.

Hang in there!

Reviewer: badgergirl1999 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 02:37 AM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls

Oh goodness, this story is amazing.  *wipes eyes*

Thank you.



Author's Response:

I am so glad you are enjoying it!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: LittlePixieStick (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls

So, that was just too cute for words.  Really and truly, I have no words to express how much I enjoyed that.  Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us all!



Author's Response:

I am so very glad you felt as though I did it justice.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: LittlePixieStick (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 09:25 AM · On: Chapter 29 - Openings and Closings

:)  Happiness in the midst of tears, and yet, it works.  I know we still have no clue weather or not Bella is going to pull through (but I have a feeling that despite all the angst you love to write, you're a softly underneath it all) it's a wonderful surprise to finally meet the daughter.

Can't wait to read Edward's reaction to seeing her for the first time.  I think it's going to melt all of our hearts!



Author's Response:

I am a HUGE softy and a HOPELESS romantic, so don't count her out yet.  But I do like writing the angst, so don't expect it to be an easy time getting there!  There are still plenty of rivers to cross.

I hope you like Edward's first meeting with his wee one!

Thanks so much for reviewing.

Reviewer: LittlePixieStick (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 08:03 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Blood and Inhumanity

Awe, how sad for everyone!  I especially feel bad for Charlie.  He's just finally found his daughter again, and now there's the chance that he may lose her forever.  How terrible for him!  Hopefully something good will come from everyone's heartache!



Author's Response:

Poor Charlie just walked into the middle of a firestorm.  Poor guy! 

Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Corrdelia (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 06:03 AM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls

Oh my, I stumbled upon this little gem a few days ago. Given my circumstances with the health of my son i wasn't able to read it until today. I have to say that every chapter that you have written so far has brought me to tears. However, I would like to reitterate how much in love that I am with this story. The emotional roller coaster is well worth all the tears and screaming at the top of my lungs.

The quality of this story is amazing. I just simply can't begin to describe how much this story rocks me to my core.

Please for the love of every Cullen, smothered in whipped cream, wearing nothing but and apron, cooking dinner for all of us while riding a chocolate chip cookie- filled unicorn, continue working on this story to its completion. I look forward to reading another chapter, with my klennex box gladly at my side.



Author's Response:

Oh my gosh!  Is your son all right?

I am so glad you found my story and are giving it a read.  It means the world to me that you are connecting to it, even though it's such a difficult ride.  There will be resolution - hopefully one that will make you happy.

I have a one shot in queue for validation.  As soon as that posts, I will submit the next NLT.  I have 9 more chapters already written.

Thank you so very much, once again, for reading and reviewing the story!

Reviewer: samii (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 01:18 AM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls

i don't even know how Edward managed to keep it so together during this chapter when i was on the verge of breaking down myself. Honestly i've just begun reading this story and i haven't stopped reading it or  crying since the beginning.



Author's Response:

He barely did keep it together, but Edward felt that he had to be strong for his daughter.  It's an emotional ride, though, I know.

Thank you so very much for reading my story!

Reviewer: rivruskende (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 11:26 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls

Love your story! Very well written!



Author's Response:

I am so glad you're enjoying it!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: allstarkelsey02 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls

this chapter was the saddest thing i have ever read...i am crying so much..i love it..keep it up!



Author's Response:

Isn't it funny how something can rip our heart out and we still want more!?  Happens to me all the time.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: twilighted007 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 04:33 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls

Excuse me while I wipe my eyes...



Author's Response:

It's an emotional chapter, I know!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: steffyxxface (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls

You have no idea how frustrated I am, I started reading at I wanna say 5pm and stayed up till a little after 3 only to be left on a cliff hanger what the kwan you need to update asap girly :]



Author's Response:

I am sorry!  It isn't meant to be a cliffhanger - just where Charlie's thoughts stopped for the moment.

I am just waiting for a one shot to get validated and I will submit the next NLT.  I have 9 more pre-written chapters, but I can't submit until the one in the queue is validated!

Thanks for reviewing!

 

Reviewer: LittlePixieStick (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 27 - No

Wow, once again i had tears in my eyes as I read this!  You've got such a way of pulling readers into the story and truly immersing them in your intended emotions with little extra wordplay.  I love it.

Thank you so much.  I know the baby is going to be fine, you've done much reassuring on that point, however; it's a little nerve wracking for Bella right now.  Hopefully they will get their happily every after, but it's your story.  It will all work out according to plan.

Thanks for sharing!



Author's Response:

It will work out, hopefully to most everyone's satisfaction.  It's a tough road to the end though.

"No" was a really difficult chapter.  From the emotional persepective, it's the bottom.  Edward truly thinks, at the end, when his hand leaves hers, it's the very last time he'll see or touch her.  That if he lets go one more time, he's let go forever.  To him, this is the end.  And it's shattered him.

I so appreciate your kind words and your review.

Reviewer: mauge (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 02:43 AM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls

I don't usually cry, not with stories or movies. I swear I didn't even cry in Titanic when Jack dies! But you made me sob like a 4-year-old whose favourite doll has just been thrown away, hahaha. You are an amazing writer. And please update soon!!!! Good luck.



Author's Response:

Oh my gosh!  I am so glad you're connecting to the story, although I'm sorry you cried!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: phips16 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End

please please please please update soon. i love ur story. awesome chapter



Author's Response:

I am trying so hard!  I'm waiting for a one shot to be validated so that I can post the next chapter!  It's all ready to go!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: LunaStarz (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 02:45 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls

I am sitting here sniffling! You ripped my heart out in ch 27 and made me cry like a baby in ch 30.Oh you are good!!!! My kids looked at me like I was insane ah but they know about mom and her stories lol.

You do believe in happy endings You DO believe in happy endings :) Right!?!?

I mean yes a healthy baby is a joyous thing oh but please please please pretty please let Bella make it and Let her forgive Edward

Love Love Love Love the  little love parts oh how I cried! ok  ;/

puttin this on my faves and counting the days until the next chapte

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and enjoying the story!

Chapter 31 has been delayed due to waiting on a one shot, but I am hoping upon hopes it will go up REALLY soon.

I so appreciate your review!

Reviewer: jaxon 22 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 22 - Sound of Music

Love, love, love Jasper!!!! Tres cool!!! x x



Author's Response:

Jasper so rocks!  He's a blast to write.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: jaxon 22 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 06:23 AM · On: Chapter 18 - Bid Farewell

Ok pass the tissues right now *sniff*

That last line killed me!! Love this story x x



Author's Response:

The last line is a killer.  I teared up writing it.

Thanks so much for reviewing.

Reviewer: jaxon 22 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 05:10 AM · On: Chapter 7 - Enough

So good!!



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: jaxon 22 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 04:08 AM · On: Chapter 2 - The Last Day of My Life

Heartbreaking to read the same wrds from New Moon - great stuff!!



Author's Response:

I hate to borrow text, but I think it was appropriate here.

I'm so glad you are enjoying the story!

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