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Reviewer: bridesmaid (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

Oh shoot!   I just came across this story because it was one of those recommended in the find a fic thread.  Gosh.  I read it in one sitting and BUM!  I have now wild hair, runny nose and sore throat from all the crying.  Though I must admit I still don't understand Edward's reasoning on why he left Bella, the writing and the emotions made it up for all of it.  Plus the suspense and cliff hanging is seriously killing me. 

Now, lets name E's little love! :)

 



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it!  Thank you for taking the time and the chance on my story!

I completely agree - in real life, I don't think Edward's family would have allowed this to happen.  But I needed a launching point from New Moon, so I went with it.  I'm glad the rest of the story made up for that!

You will find out the name in the very next chapter!  I hope you approve!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 07:09 PM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

Still so sad!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

It is, but at least there is hope now!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: twilighter11 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

I cant wait to see what he decides to name her! Sooo exciting!



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it!

You will find out the name in the very next chapter!  I hope you approve!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 03:20 PM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

I was wondering what had happened to you!  I was beginning to go threw withdrawels!  OME what will he name her, this is such a wonderful story I cry with most of the chapters. Please let Bella have a full recovery, we need some happiness, although Edward seeing her for the first time was one of the most touching chapters of any fanfic I have ever read!!!!  Thanks for writing and update soon!



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it!

You will find out the name in the very next chapter!  I hope you approve!  And there is some light on the horizon for Bella now as well.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: twilighted007 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 03:09 PM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

Stop your worrying!
You could wait a full year to update and I would still be right back here, reading. People aren't going to stop reading just because it took a little longer than usual - and if they do, they can just suck it :|

Great work as usual:)



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it!

Thanks for your patience and for reviewing!

Reviewer: HeartnSoulzDesire (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 02:22 PM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

 Putting on my best Bella stuttering face... bbuuuttt MORE SOON Please!!!



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it!

Thanks for your patience and for reviewing!

Reviewer: freesiagirl171 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

omgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hurry the fuck up i wanna no the name!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it!

You will find out the name in the very next chapter!  I hope you approve!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: mauge (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

I was wondering what had happened to you but the waiting was well worth it as usual :D

Please do not name the child Renesmee. I know that Stephenie meant for her characters to be all very loving by doing that but I think I lost a little bit of respect towards Bella because of her name choosing :P



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it!

You will find out the name in the very next chapter!  I hope you approve!  There will be *no* Reneesme!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Cullenlingus (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 01:04 PM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

Sweet chapter.  Poor Edward and the decisions upon him without the benefit of 9 months to prepare. 



Author's Response:

And he doesn't want to do this without Bella.  He truly doesn't.  But he will and you'll find out in the next chapter!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: jenalpz (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

Ooh, wonder what the name will be.

I'm anxious to hear how things will work out with Bella. How long will she be under?

Great story.  Thanks for the update, I don't mind the wait, as long as you're not gone forever.



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it!

You will find out the name in the very next chapter!  I hope you approve!

Bella will be out a bit longer, but there is a lot to keep you occupied between now and then.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: illtakeemmett (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

Wow!  I just started this story tonight and couldn't stop until I was done! Can't wait to see what the little Princess is named :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for stopping and giving my story a try!  Glad you enjoyed it!

You will find out the name in the very next chapter!  I hope you approve!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: amylouwho (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

A dinner I don't have to cook? I am all over that! It is great to get an update-even if it was short. *ahem* Wow, I am so ungrateful! That's a week of cooking dinner for me. :) On a serious note: Thanks for writing such a great story and I look forward to more!

Author's Response:

I am glad you enjoyed it! 

Thank you for your patience and for reviewing!  Now just pick your Cullen and your dish....

Reviewer: april09 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 11:16 AM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

Ok, I re-read the last chapter before reading this one...I didn't notice the first time that E was calling his daughter "little love" just like B is his "love".  So perfect.

Loved to see Angela's POV again.  I keep gushing, but I just love how this story is unfolding.  Great job!

Very curious to see what name he comes up with.

 



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it!  Yeah, Little Love just seemed to fit!

You will find out the name in the very next chapter!  I hope you approve!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: britt-nee1432 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 11:05 AM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

Aww poor Bella. I hope she wakes up soon. That will be a big relief...expect the drama that will come with her seeing Edward...lol. But it'll be good to know that she's okay.

And I can't wait to see what Eddie names her. I'm not sure if you were planning on keeping Renesmee or not. :/ If not, that's great. I can't wait to see what you choose for a you. If you are keeping it...well, that's nice too...lol. :)

Great chapter! I loved it. And I can't wait for more.

-Britt



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it!

You will find out the name in the very next chapter!  I hope you approve!  It is not Reneesme!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: NenaTH (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

cant wait to know what he names her! ,,, and aww bella doesnt get to help in the name i would flip out! haha XD ,,, but love this ff and nice chapter and cant wait for the next chapter ,, and there is no way anyone could stop reading this ff i mean its awesome!



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it!

You will find out the name in the very next chapter!  I hope you approve!  Edward doesn't want to do this without Bella either, but has no choice.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: mcamastow (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 09:55 AM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

Great chapter ,I have one question why are the children of this story calling their parents by their first name ? I would understand if they were adopted but they are not it really does not make sence.



Author's Response: Fair question. Remember, Bella calls her dad Charlie in Twilight. I have always called my father, who raised me, by his given name. I think some children just do. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: 8vamp8 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 09:51 AM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

oh my goodness. I would absolutely HATE to name my child without my significant other. geeze. I'd be like Ed, refusing until I finally saw reason that my other half couldn't help. poor thing. :(

keep up this FANTASTIC writing!!



Author's Response: Poor Edward does NOT want to do this but has no choice. It is a difficult quandry. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: mom2kandg (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 09:31 AM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

I will take a shirtless Edward PLEASE, LOL!!!!!  Ellie I have not went anywhere and I am not planning on going anywhere either...I am invested in the story and I am gonna see it to the end....You have given us this and I want to thank you....



Author's Response: Aw, hun! You made me teary! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Shirtless Edward is on the way! Oh and there is a sneak peek on the forum!

Reviewer: Queendel (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

Sweet update.  Alice is too much at times.  Glad to see that Edward is handling things, although he is terrified of Bella's fate.

As for a name for the precious miracle baby girl, how about -  Hope Angela Renesme Swan Cullen?  Hope because they were all hoping that the baby lived and that Bella pulls through, Angela, because without her, there may not have been a baby and the joined names of the grandmothers.

 Looking forward to more soon.

 



Author's Response: I love your idea for a name! Alas, the forum thread folks named her a few weeks back! Still, a wonderful name!! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: maravilla (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 09:26 AM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

love your story - couldn't leave it if I wanted to. I am hooked, will wait as long as it take for updates!!



Author's Response: Aw thank you! I appreciate you sticking with me and for reviewing!

Reviewer: AngeAiles (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

Little love. <3

 

Is it any wonder I love this story already?



Author's Response: Aw! I have called my son that since he was born. I thought it fit. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: binki (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

This was a sweet little chapter!  Can't wait for the next one!  I'm still holding out hope that Bella will make a recovery and be with Edward and their little one!



Author's Response: Keep the faith! The next chapter will be up much more quickly! Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: Louise-Francoise (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

I really like this story. Its heart breaking and beautiful. Just to be weird and you probably already know this but newborns eyes are always blue. Sorry!



Author's Response: Most are, but strangely not all! My son came out with greeny brown. They changed over time, but they were never blue. Mine were green too! Maybe we are just genetic freaks! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: mareimbrium (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 08:26 AM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light

New chapter soon please!



Author's Response:

I will be sure to have one up soon!

Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: mareimbrium (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 08:24 AM · On: Chapter 30 - Little Girls

You are so good at your portrayals.  You really bring the character's personality to the forefront with each one you write.



Author's Response:

That is about the biggest compliment you can give me.  Thank you.  Thank you.  Thank you!

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