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Reviewer: Beans827 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 06:43 AM · On: Chapter 32 - Classics
OOh, yes I do like that name. It's perfect...(way better the effen Reneesme!) :-) I can NEVER figure out why SM didn't go with Elizabeth in the books. It made TOTAL sense as a nod to Edward's real mom. Big FAIL on SM's part. Anyway, it is perfect for Edward's little love. I'm kind of enjoying the fact that Bella isn't around right now...that's pretty sick, isn't it. I just love your little EMOward too much! But she's going to wake up pretty soon, isn't she? We need to get on with this show and see what happens. Thanks so much for sharing. Love it!
Author's Response: I am so glad you approve of the name. There will be more on Bella soon. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Elizabethan (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 2 - The Last Day of My Life
I like how you are taking a human twist on the New Moon story and the breakup, but I might have enjoyed seeing some more original dialogue for the breakup, not jsut straight from canon. But I am trying not to fault your interpretation; just trying to articulate what I am looking for as a reader. I will keep reading.
Author's Response: I understand your point. I was launching from canon as a concrete starting point, then veering on a tangent. I hope that you enjoy the rest of the story!
Reviewer: lachica Bella (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 06:40 AM · On: Chapter 32 - Classics
That is lovely name, and it suits Bella. You did a wonderful job of naming her. You know I daresay that you did a much better job than SM(100x over). =) This was asweet chapter. Now wake Bella up, Please!
Author's Response: I am so glad you approve. There will be more from Bella soon! Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: sambois (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 06:40 AM · On: Chapter 32 - Classics
ahh he is soooo sweet!
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: jrojrojro (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 06:38 AM · On: Chapter 32 - Classics
gauh. you can't just go promising stuff like that! Makes me tingly all over....
Okay, back from my fantasy... this chapter was perfect and I think the name is perfect as well. Although I really think the swan will be dropped soon. Love this story to bits and pieces and can't wait for more. Keep up the bloody brilliant story weaving, lovie!
Author's Response: I am so glad you approve! I truly appreciate your review!
Reviewer: secamimom (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 06:37 AM · On: Chapter 32 - Classics
I loved it. Very beautiful name. I think Edward did a wonderful job in picking it out. Loved the little bit of comic relief with Jasper and even Ben's one word in this chapter. can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I am so glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: liveitup (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 06:35 AM · On: Chapter 32 - Classics
I love your story. I lov ethe name Elzabeth but hate the nicknames. WHy not name her Lizzie if thats what they will call her. Just stick with Elizabeth.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Ah- I am just tying in with the book. How Edward and Bella refer to their daughter by her full name while the rest call her Nessie. Just a way to link back to the story. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 06:34 AM · On: Chapter 32 - Classics
Oh how sweet! I'm sure Bella will love the name and be very proud of Edward for thinking of Bella's wants and desires when it comes to naming their child.
Chief Swan has finally let it sink in just how much Edward loves Bella. So how much longer will Bella be in this coma? I have to admit to being a bit anxious to see how Bella and Edward will interact with each other when she wakes, but I hope it won't be too angsty for too long!
Great chapter!! And I'm so excited to see we have quite a few chapters at least ahead to go! More soon, please!
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed the chapter!! There is definitely more to come! Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: jermak99 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 06:32 AM · On: Chapter 32 - Classics
Aww, I love the name Elizabeth Grace! So cute. :-)
I know you're building up to it...BUT I am so anxious to find out more about Bella. :-)
Thanks so much for the update!
xo
Author's Response: I am so glad you like the name! More from Bella soon! Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Kaydence (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 06:31 AM · On: Chapter 32 - Classics
Such a cute chapter (and it's hard to achieve cute from your Jasper's POV)! I can't wait for more. :)
Author's Response: I so love Jasper! I am glad you enjoyed the chapter! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: chasityc (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 06:31 AM · On: Chapter 32 - Classics
i love the name... this chapter def. went by tooo quickly.. lol i can never get enough.. i wanna know what happens soo keep it coming! thanx for writing
chasity
Author's Response: I am sure the next chapter will be out soon! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 06:29 AM · On: Chapter 32 - Classics
Love it to sweet love the name it is perfect!
Author's Response: I am so glad you approve! Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: britt-nee1432 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 06:21 AM · On: Chapter 32 - Classics
Aww yay! Elizabeth Grace, that is perfect. So cute. And a tid bit of Edward's past from the books. I love it.
The chapter was ah-may-zing. I loved that Jasper and Edward are getting back to their old ways again. It's good to see that. And Angela telling Edward like it is, lol...I love her in this story. She's still Angela but with a little edge and a no non-sense attitude with anything related to Bella. Perfect.
Also love how Charlie and Edward are getting along. Makes my heart melt, lol.
Can't wait for the next chapter. :)
-Brittany
Author's Response: I am so glad you like it! They are slowly repairing all the wounds created by this situation. There is still a way to go, but at least we are on the right path. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: kuntrygal (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 06:18 AM · On: Chapter 32 - Classics
Yay! Sqee! I'm all excited you used the name! Awesome chapter!
Author's Response: I am glad you approve! Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 06:18 AM · On: Chapter 32 - Classics
Love the name...*sniff*...
Author's Response: I am glad you approve! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: marrisa (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 06:17 AM · On: Chapter 32 - Classics
Great job with the whole name-picking process. It wouldn't have made sense if something was just made up on the spot.
Author's Response: Nah. You needed some context! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: sjones5199 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 06:17 AM · On: Chapter 32 - Classics
Loved the name and loved the chapter!
Author's Response: I am glad you approve! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: LisaLoo (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 06:17 AM · On: Chapter 32 - Classics
Elizabeth Grace is perfect. I love the Jasper POV. sigh. Charlie is doing so much better with Edward. Definitely moving in the right direction. Thanks for a great update.
Author's Response: Glad you approve! I could think of no one better than Jasper to explain how it unfolded. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: asoulenchanted (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 11:47 PM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light
This story is just heartbreaking!
I cant wait to find out what they decide to call her!
AND PLEASE DONT KILL BELLA!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: You will find out the name in the very next chapter! Have faith in regard to Bella! Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: TwiChick88 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 10:40 PM · On: Chapter 24 - Leave the Weapons Behind
Ha emmett contained his language cuz his mommy was there!!
Author's Response: Emmett does have manners!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: TwiChick88 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 10:36 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
Its sad and then u fuckin tell us it gets worse, thnx...
Author's Response: Alas, it does... But then it gets better! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: phips16 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 10:33 PM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light
awesome chapter!!! i wonder what he'll name her? hope bella wakes up soon.
Author's Response: You wil find out in the very next chapter! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: TwiChick88 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 10:31 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Sound of Music
No tears here!!!!
Author's Response: Yeah, it is hard to cry at potty mouth Jasper! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: TwiChick88 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 10:28 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Broken Heart Syndrome
I'm sad, yet here is my review.....
Author's Response: It is definitely difficult to see Bella like this. I appreciate your review!
Reviewer: TwiChick88 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 10:21 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Wishes are Pointless
My eyes get all teary please no more pain.....
Author's Response: Alas, the pain is only beginning! Thanks for reviewing!
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