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Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 01:04 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

Awwww... this is making me sniffle and wipe away tears.  Love their reunion.  It wasn't as bad as either of them thought it would be, but they've got things to still work out.

Hummm... Edward & he'd do your every whim for your birthday, no matter what it was.



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed the chapter.  Charlie is a good guy who’s going to do the right thing, even if he doesn’t particularly like it.

Thank you for the birthday wishes and your review!  Yum.... Edward and every whim....

 

 

Reviewer: twimommy (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 12:48 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

I didn't realize Charlie would feel guilty!  He was so sweet to Bella.

Birthday wish:

A friend gives you a certificate for a massage.  When you get there, they ask if it's okay if a new employee they're training works on you.  He comes into the room and your jaw drops.  You look into the sparkling green eyes of the most beautiful man you've ever met.  The masseur gives him a few pointers, watches Edward work for a while and then leaves him to finish on his own.   His long sexy fingers are working magic on your body and you can't help but become a little aroused.  Edward notices after a while and...

I think I'll turn this into a one shot.  I'll send you a copy.  Hope you enjoy the massage!

Jenn



Author's Response:

Charlie is such a good guy.  He does feel guilty.  She must of inherited it!

As for the birthday wish *thud*.  Holy Hell!  I want!  I want!!!!!

Oceanwaters2006 posted her tribut to my bday, if you want to read some hot stuff!

Definitely want to see it if you make it into a one shot!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: nicoleihca (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

thanks for the update! i love your charlie.



Author's Response:

Aw, I love him too.  He's such a good guy.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

a big bear hug from Emmett being sent your way for your birthday...

 Maybe one of the girls can bring in the baby for her next, Esme? Rosalie? She'd get some honesty from Rose about Edward's motives for leaving her and how he fared after their separation.   That knowledge may prepare her for the meeting with Edward - which we are dying for.  At the moment she can barely say his name...



Author's Response:

I am so glad you're understanding why I'm travelling this road.  She can barely say his name, so why do folks think she can handle having THE conversation yet?  She will, but it will take time.

Thank you so much for reviewing and for the birthday wish.

Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

I'm ready for all the big reunions now!  Bring on Edward and the baby please!!



Author's Response:

It's coming!  Really.  Chapter 41.  Just hang in there!

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

Happy Birthday my dear and as for a Cullen and presents...ponders...I would say a different Cullen for a day for the entire day to do with as you please.

I loved daddy daughter time...it was hard on all but now healing has began, I love it...still counting down until Bella is reunited with Elizabeth and Edward...please don't keep us waiting to long as the suspense is killing me.



Author's Response:

I am so glad you liked the Charlie chapter.  Don’t worry – not long to E/B now!  Chapter 41, here we come… It's not THE conversation, but it's the first time they all see each other.

Thanks so much for reviewing and for the birthday wishes!

Reviewer: AMusefan77 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 12:28 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

This was a wonderful chapter.  You captured Charlie's character really well.  I knew Bella would love the baby's name.  Now I just can't wait for the little family to see each other.  



Author's Response:

I am so glad you liked the Charlie chapter.  He's such a good guy and he's doing what he feels is right.  Don’t worry – not long to E/B now!  Chapter 41, here we come…

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Akelarre (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 12:21 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

    It’s so right!  Tough father with marshmallow heart will forgive you right away without rubbing your nose in it.  He will know that you have learnt you  lesson the hard way . 



Author's Response:

I am so glad you liked the Charlie chapter.  He's such a good guy and he's doing what he thinks is right, whether or not he particularly likes it.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 12:02 PM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

happy early birthday!!!  great job with the story so far and i can't wait for more



Author's Response:

I am so glad you liked the Charlie chapter. 

Thanks so much for reviewing and for the birthday wishes!

Reviewer: Cedwardsgirl (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 11:40 AM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

hahah read he bday thing wrong. :P Happy bday I dont know how old your turning but yea lmao



Author's Response:

LOL!  You weren't the only one!

Let's just say it was the 20th anniversary of my 18th birthday!

Reviewer: Cedwardsgirl (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 11:40 AM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

HAPPY BIRTHDAY! YOUR OFFICIALLY LEGAL!!:P

Great talk between Bella and her Dad. awwww



Author's Response:

I am so glad you liked the Charlie chapter. 

LOL!  My birthday was on the 18th, but I turned much older than that!  Thank you for the awesome wishes all the same!

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: LittleMissSwan (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!

 

Great chapter......are we gona find out what Bella was gona name her or was she gona name her Elizabeth as well?



Author's Response:

Yes, you will find out what Bella was going to name her:) 

Thanks so much for the birthday wishes and the review!

Reviewer: Beans827 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 11:33 AM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

Sorry I didn't read this until today so I'm late with your birthday present, but I will send you one Edward Cullen in nothing but a pair of board shorts and a big red bow.  Or maybe I'll send Japser this week since Edward's tied up with the baby and all.  Either way, I hope you had a good b-day!

Great chapter.  I liked that you chapters are so easy to read.  Not mammoth amounts of word vomit.  They definitely tell the story well.  Thanks as always for sharing.  And I'm so glad Bella liked the name. 



Author's Response:

I am so glad you liked the Charlie chapter.  I'm glad you like the shorter chapters.  People tend to go strongly one way or the other:)

Thanks so much for reviewing and for the awesome virtual birthday gift!

Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 11:28 AM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

A tear Jerker that one :(
And yet really sweet. lol @ immaculate conception HA!
But then again, with Edward I'm sure all he had to do was LOOK at ya and you'd be pregnant! lol.

I LOVED how Charlie kept talking up Edward, with how well he's looking after his little love and all that :D:D Awww. DaddyWard *sigh* I can't WAIT til they talk.

I'm sorry I didn't see this sooner!! But Happy Birthday and My Cullen of choice for you is the one and ONLY EDWARD!!! :D:D:D:D
Oh and he'll come bearing fruit, but not to throw at you :P
Ooh and some Whip Cream ;) LOL. ENJOY BB!!



Author's Response:

I am so glad you liked the Charlie chapter.  It is such an important chapter to the story.  I liked the Immaculate Conception part too:)

Charlie is doing what he thinks is right, even if he doesn't necessarily like it.  Easing her into Edward is part of that...

Thanks so much for reviewing and for the AWESOME virtual birthday present!

Reviewer: anira4 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 11:19 AM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

 i love it very much is beautiiful



Author's Response:

I am so glad you liked the Charlie chapter.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: mauge (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 11:19 AM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

I just love Charlie!!

How long till the big talk?

Happy birthday.

:D



Author's Response:

I am so glad you liked the Charlie chapter.  Don’t worry – not long to E/B now!  Chapter 41, here we come (although it's not quite THE conversation, it's the first time they see each other).

Thanks so much for reviewing and for the birthday wishes!

Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 11:15 AM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

Great chapter! Bella is slowly figuring out how things have changed. She's got so much to take in, and still so much to deal with when it comes to Edward, but I really hope she talks to him before she gets to see the baby. I can't explain why, but part of me just feels that once she sees Elizabeth she's going to have a whole set of new emotions to deal with and I would almost rather her deal with the Edward situation separately. But either way, I know you'll make it awesome! Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

I am so glad you liked the Charlie chapter.  Bella does have so much to deal with and work through.  But she will see Edward, and Elizabeth, soon.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: LitlleMissCullen (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

sweet! Anxious for bella to meet Lizzie...and offcourse have the talk with pretty boy



Author's Response:

I am so glad you liked the Charlie chapter.  Don’t worry – not long to E/B now!  Chapter 41, here we come…

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

Well of course I'd pick Edward.  Emmett is pretty yummy too.  I hope you have a wonderful birthday. 

Loved the chapter.  Charlie is taking all of this really well.    We all knew Bella would love the name Edward picked, it was perfect.



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed the chapter.  Charlie is a good guy who’s going to do the right thing, even if he doesn’t particularly like it.

Thank you for the birthday wishes and your review!

Reviewer: twilightchick (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

Really nice chapter Its good to see that charlie and Bella are getting along.



Author's Response:

I am so glad you liked the Charlie chapter.  He's truly a good guy in this...

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: kalanthia (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 10:44 AM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

Charlie's doing great!

You're really making it hard for your readers to be patient until the meet-the-baby/meet-Edward-chapters are up.

Late happy birthday! ;)

Alice and I would give you a huge cake and watch the other Cullens' faces when we tell them that they will be forcing it down ;) And some jewelry with the Cullen crest on it might be nice...



Author's Response:

I am so glad you liked the Charlie chapter.  Don’t worry – not long to E/B now!  Chapter 41, here we come…

Thanks so much for reviewing and for the birthday wishes!

Reviewer: Sadielady115 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 10:41 AM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

Ooooo good chapter!!! that brings up a question though, where in there hell is Renee? nobody really thinks about her to much do they. I'm kind of curious as to who gets to bring Elizabeth to see bella for the frist time, I think that will be a huge moment.
 
you know I want to see Daddyward LOL ... I don’t know why ... other then it makes me go 'Awwwwww'
 *brings her persent... Carlisle in his very own flight suite giggles and cuffs him to a chair so he can't get away* happy birthday!!!!

Author's Response:

Renee is gone.  She basically abandoned Bella with Charlie and doesn't stop in for visits.  In this story, she's been gone quite a while.

You shall see who brings Elizabeth to her... *insert evil laugh*

There is some big-time Daddyward coming - Chp 41.  That's all I'm sayin'!

Thanks so much for the birthday wishes and the review!

Reviewer: vampfan29 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 10:39 AM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

Very very awesome update! Very sweet! I got a  lil teary ;) Somehow I knew she'd love the name he gave. Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

I am so glad you liked the Charlie chapter.  And yes, Bella did love the name.  I'm just glad Charlie got to tell her, if not Edward.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Juliamine (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

Well we missed your b-day, but happy birthday none the less! So we're to her talking to Charlie, and that was a tough one to get past for Bella. She knew the baby would be Elizabeth before he even said so! That was perfect. I'm so glad she loved the name. Great chapter!



Author's Response:

I am so glad you liked the Charlie chapter.  Bella did already knew, but I was glad Charlie got to tell her.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 10:15 AM · On: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

really cute chapter...still waiting on the edward and bella lols...anyway i really love this story and I can't wait for more...UD UD UD



Author's Response:

I am so glad you liked the Charlie chapter.  Don’t worry – not long to E/B now!  Chapter 41, here we come…

Thanks so much for reviewing!

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