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Reviewer: Rand0mnessR0ks (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 01:28 AM · On: Chapter 39 - Happy Town

MMM, I love me some Jasper!!  I'd go to Crazy Town to hit that! lol!  Glad you updated, I love this story.  I don't think I'm ready to forgive Emoward yet, so lets go through all the Cullens first?  What do you say?  Make his feel like the idiot he is?  Because girls rule and boys drool!?!?!



Author's Response: Jasper rocks out! I love writing him! Don't worry about Emoward getting off Scott free... You will find out! Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Kyramy (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 12:49 AM · On: Chapter 39 - Happy Town

In your story.. I want me some Jasper  :)
Pleaseeeee!! *looks angelic*
Luurving the story!! Keep up the amazing-ness!!
Deffo one of my fave Fanfic's.. you get a 10 from me!! :D
Love it, Love you,
Love Kyra xx



Author's Response: Jasper is pretty hot here, I think! Thank you so much for your kind words and your review!

Reviewer: demmy (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 12:35 AM · On: Chapter 39 - Happy Town

Whoa- the mouth on Jasper! Great chapter- but dying to get to the B/E talk!



Author's Response: Jasper sure has a way with words! It isn't long before B sees E again... Chp 41. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: StephanieCullen (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 12:11 AM · On: Chapter 39 - Happy Town

I LOVE me some Looney Tunes Jasper!  This chapter was full of "in your face, tell it like it is with a huge healthy does of brilliant humor"!  Most excellent!



Author's Response: I love writing him! So cathartic! Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: MEL24FAN (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 11:49 PM · On: Chapter 39 - Happy Town

Jasper is the man.  He certainly has a way with words.  As much as Bella doesn't want to hear it she needs to.  I feel the tears coming for the Alice & Bella talk.  Keep up the good work.



Author's Response: Jasper sure knows how to get to the heart of the matter and Bella sure needed to hear it. Yup, Alice will be a tough one. Thqank you so much for all of your support!

Reviewer: slayerjules (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 39 - Happy Town

I think I'm in love with jasper after that chapter.

 

 



Author's Response: He definitely has his own fan club now! Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Panda1499 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 39 - Happy Town

I love me some Jasper too.  He was such an undeveloped character in the books that we, as fanfiction writer's, can have a blast with him.  LOVED the chapter, like always. 

Ok, first off shopping with Alice is FUN!!!  Alice is paying right?  Hmmm, what would I get to wear for Emmett?  Duh, no brainer, some sexy La Perla lingerie.  I think it goes without saying what I would want to do with Emmett ;-)

luv ya, more soon please!

Manda



Author's Response: I love writing Jasper! He is so cathartic! I am glad you like this incarnation! Ooh! La Perla and Emmy, eh? Have fun with that! Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: chasityc (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 10:52 PM · On: Chapter 39 - Happy Town

i loved this jasper of yours... he laid it straight, and pulled bella back... can't wait for more!



Author's Response: Jasper sure has a way of simpling things up! Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 10:14 PM · On: Chapter 39 - Happy Town

can't wait for more



Author's Response: I am so glad you are enjoying it! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Akelarre (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 10:05 PM · On: Chapter 39 - Happy Town

Esme is right, parents cannot decide but they can advise. Glad Jasper is defending Edward, although in a very unorthodox way. Somebody should tell Bella Edward reasons behind all this mess. We know the road to hell is paved on good intentions.   Guess Alice is next, or Em & Ro have to say hello first?



Author's Response: Esme and Charlie feel helpless. They need to combine forces. And Jasper cuts straight through to the heart of the matter. Alice is next with a little extra ;). Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 39 - Happy Town

ugh



Author's Response: What kind of "ugh"? Lol!

Author's Response: What kind of "ugh"? Lol!

Author's Response: What kind of "ugh"? Lol!

Reviewer: JED (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 39 - Happy Town

".......But fuck, Bella.  Really think about it before you add another epic mistake to the list....."    That was the most perfect thing Jasper could say to Bella. 



Author's Response: I think she needed to hear it. Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: zah (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End

ok in chap 41! 3 more to go then.. i am very patient ! i ll be very patient!! lol

take care



Author's Response: Lol! Not much longer! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: zah (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 39 - Happy Town

lol.. that was unsual with jasper, like it.. i think you do r right, it should be like that.. putting edw and bella together now wont do the story good.. the other pov is important to show in the story here, n wass nice reading it.. next plz! lol!



Author's Response: I am so glad you like the way I am handling this! I know everyone is anxious, but I do have my reasons! Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: lord periperi (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 39 - Happy Town

i love me some jasper too.....sigh...thisi s the jasper i'd like to take home, iin my castle very very far away and have cute babies with.... ;)

"I cut her shit off before she could pull an Edward and blame fucking global warming or some shit on herself. "-this is EPIC! rofl

:)



Author's Response: I love this Jasper too! I think he has his own fan club! Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Ryansmama04 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 39 - Happy Town

I heart Jasper



Author's Response: I heart him too! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: kalanthia (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 39 - Happy Town

Yeah, Jasper is really... lovely :-D Considering the shit he's been through, he is in fact the one who can get Bella back on the road, though his methods are, let's say, unconventional.

Esme is a great confidant for Charlie.



Author's Response: Jasper truly knows how to get to the heart of the matter in his own special way! And Esme and Charlie both feel somewhat helpless - they needed to join forces. Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 05:07 PM · On: Chapter 39 - Happy Town

I love Jasper, he's just keepin' it real!  LOL  At least Mr. Potty Mouth himself got her to feel something!  That's a start.  :)



Author's Response: Jasper knows how to get to the heart of the matter like no one else. Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: phips16 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 39 - Happy Town

i love Jasper he's just awesome seriously!!! the talk between alice and bella should be interesting but can you have bella meet elizabeth already



Author's Response: Jasper is awesome! Alice is up next but Elizabeth is right after. Promise! Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: SeanEmma4Evr (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 39 - Happy Town

I didn't think it was possible to heart Charlie anymore than I already do, but I was wrong - I kind of wanna go all DILF with him. He wants his Bella to be happy, as well as his granddaughter, even if it means dealing with his daughter's baby daddy. That's love right there.

Plus, I got chills the way he said Lizzie's name. He's such a sap, that one.

And Esme is the sweetest person ever!

The thing with Jasper had me laughing out loud, which is a rarity these days. I mean he talks weirder than me! I thought I was the only one that goes around calling people silly names - I use sweet potato and -insert name-Bear all the time. He's just adorable.

Twat waffle? Really?

Oh! And I smiled like an idiot when I read, "you're someone's mama. Cute someone, too..."

ADORABLE!

Now, as for what I'd get and who I'd do...

Well, since I like to shop about as much as Bella, I'd get Alice through the mall fast (oh and trust me, I could make Alice Cullen hate malls. I have magical powers), only stopping to grab a playstation. 

That's right. I'm going to wear nothing but a playstation controller and the actual playstation across the lady business. You think Emmett will like it? First, he'll play me...and then he can play playstation while I recover from what I'm sure would be a rather wonderful evening. I KNOW the way to a man's heart.



Author's Response: *hugs you* charlie kinda does make you want to go all DILF and Esme is the mom I want to be. As for Jasper, he gets to say all the things I am dying to say, especially at work! But he is an incredibly perceptive man who knows how to simple things up! As for the incentive, you will OWN Emmy-bear!!! Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Belli (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 39 - Happy Town

I love your Jasper speak. He's hot!



Author's Response: I love him too! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 04:16 PM · On: Chapter 39 - Happy Town

“That being said, I’m not going to argue the fact that he’s a twat waffle of fucking Roman Dynasty proportions, but he does love the hell out of you, sweet cheeks, and he fucking adores that little ragamuffin in the crystal palace.  So, before you go all avoid-o-rama, or worse yet, psycho banshee, and don’t think I don’t know you have it in your ass, think.  If you want to fucking write him off, ain’t no one going to say you don’t have that right.  The rest of us, if you want us, will still be around.  But fuck, Bella.  Really think about it before you add another epic mistake to the list.” 

She sat there, staring at me, utterly stunned for a moment; like I’d just smacked her between the eyes with a tire iron or some shit.  Then shook her head and looked at me with wide, blinking eyes.  “That’s a lot to think about, Jasper.”

ha ha ha that was both awesome and priceless!!! don't sugar coat it Jasper! so Alice coming up next?

mmm Alice can buy me something sexy and Edward can take it off with his teeth...

 



Author's Response: Jasper knows how to get to the heart of the matter, doesn't he? Lol! Yup, Alice is next, as soon as she is done your shopping trip! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: youaremyvienna (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 39 - Happy Town

OMGodddddddddd.   Charlie calling Jasper 'Looney Tunes.'  I about DIED.   I'm gonna wager that the Alice / Bella reunion might be a tear jerker?  And when will Bella get to meet Elizabeth??  Can't wait.  Thanks for the chapter!



Author's Response: Charlie meant that in fun, I hope everyone knows. Yes B/A has some very difficult moments, but some light ones too. Elizabeth is up after that. Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 39 - Happy Town

Esme was as sweet as pie and gave Charlie the words he needed...way to go mama Cullen!

And Jasper...well Jasper was fucking brilliant as always in his own way. His speach to Bella about going avoid-o-rama or psycho banshee had me cheering...cant wait for more!



Author's Response: Esame and Charlie are both feeling helpless. They needed to talk. Jasper just has a way of simpling things up in his oh so elegant way! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: ladyb25 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 39 - Happy Town

Well, i really enjoyed this chapter. i love how jasper just says it like it is, i love him in this story! ur killing me here with the anticipation for THE conversation. i really really cant wait. update soon! 



Author's Response: Jasper definitely has a way with words. There is definitely not long now before B/E/E see each other. Hang in there! Thanks for reviewing!

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