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Reviewer: AlliYoyo (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2010 04:03 AM · On: FGB Outtake the First - Numbers
I knew potty-mouth Jasper would have a bad influence on little Elizabeth!
You had Edward's tendency to worry and go totally overboard completely in character! While I spent most of the time reading this agreeing with Bella and wanting to slap Edward upside the head, part of him did sympathise with him. When the odds were against conception to begin with, and then against Bella carrying to term, it's easy to understand where he was coming from. I know if I was in that situation I'd be feeling the same way.
Can't wait for the next outtake!
Author's Response: My sincere apologies for taking so long to answer. I am so grateful that you read and reviewed!
PMJ can have a bad influence on anyone:) I know my mouth was horrid right after writing him!
Reviewer: craving2read (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2010 02:40 AM · On: FGB Outtake the First - Numbers
Freak out Daddyward - so funny. Loved how you had Bella AND Elizabeth being so calm. Carlisle giving Edward "the talk" to calm down and not ruin the joyous environment of the birth in the hospital was also good to include - plus the threat to have Jasper give Edward a talking was good.
Author's Response: My sincere apologies for taking so long to answer. I am so grateful that you read and reviewed!
Yeah, Daddyward sort of lost it there, but he meant well:)
Reviewer: corriander (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 11:26 PM · On: FGB Outtake the First - Numbers
Awww! That was simply brilliant! I loved it, every second of it! Thank you for sharing that piece with us!
Author's Response: My sincere apologies for taking so long to answer. I am so grateful that you read and reviewed!
Reviewer: hwright605 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 10:34 PM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight
Love Jasper. LOVE. HIM. Made me laugh through my tears.
I'll have you know it's 2:30 am and I need to sleep. Geesh.
Author's Response: My sincere apologies for taking so long to answer. I am so grateful that you read and reviewed!
Jasper was a blast to write. He says everything I wish I could say:)
Reviewer: hwright605 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 10:28 PM · On: Chapter 43 - The Highway
Terrible. Understandable. So glad this is complete so I can grumble and move on.
Author's Response: My sincere apologies for taking so long to answer. I am so grateful that you read and reviewed!
I am sure this is MUCH easier to tolerate as a completed fic than waiting for the next chapter.
Reviewer: Kaelaaah (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 10:07 PM · On: FGB Outtake the First - Numbers
fan. tas. tic. great story. real fic it!!!
Author's Response: My sincere apologies for taking so long to answer. I am so grateful that you read and reviewed!
Reviewer: Rememberwhen (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 09:38 PM · On: FGB Outtake the First - Numbers
That was lovely. So sweet, frustratingly annoying and heart wrenching in it's tenderness. Thank you for this EPOV
Author's Response: My sincere apologies for taking so long to answer. I am so grateful that you read and reviewed!
Reviewer: hwright605 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light
Hey, I know you have a gazillion reviews on this, but I have to add one more. Your writing on this is beautiful and heartfelt and real - I know from experience. My husband and I married young, got pregnant young, and I almost died giving birth to our daughter. I wasn't there when my husband first met her (though we did get to name her together) and I know he had those same, surreal, mixed up emotions that you describe so well.
Thank you for sharing this.
Author's Response: My sincere apologies for taking so long to answer. I am so grateful that you read and reviewed!
Wow - I am so glad that I did this situation justice and that you took the time to let me know your personal story.
Reviewer: Bella Landaeta (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 08:17 PM · On: FGB Outtake the First - Numbers
AWWWW!!
Honestly gave me the misty eyes at the end.
Author's Response: My sincere apologies for taking so long to answer. I am so grateful that you read and reviewed!
Reviewer: lisamichelle17 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 07:50 PM · On: FGB Outtake the First - Numbers
Oh My Daddyward. I adore him to pieces. I have to first thank you for writing this story and for the people that supported this out take for the fgb. I loved how their 1 in 6000 chance came true. I also loved how protective Edward was of Bella and their unborn child. I would totally expect that from him. I also loved how Edward found Bella so beautiful during her pregnancy. He adores her and worships her. Thank you, again. I am also would like to wish you an early congratulations on tater 2. You are at the end stretch of your pregnancy and know that I am excited for you and your family. I look forward to the next out take.
Author's Response: My sincere apologies for taking so long to answer. I am so grateful that you read and reviewed!
Tater #2 was born 6 days after your review and now she's 5 months old! I'm determined to catch up though!
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 07:37 PM · On: FGB Outtake the First - Numbers
great!
Author's Response: My sincere apologies for taking so long to answer. I am so grateful that you read and reviewed!
Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 03:51 PM · On: FGB Outtake the First - Numbers
This was funny, beautiful, and full of love. Great job!
Author's Response: My sincere apologies for taking so long to answer. I am so grateful that you read and reviewed!
Reviewer: Gidget (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 03:27 PM · On: FGB Outtake the First - Numbers
thanks for the winners that won the bid for sharing this with us. Wonderful outtake, looking forward to more.
Author's Response: My sincere apologies for taking so long to answer. I am so grateful that you read and reviewed!
Reviewer: latuacantante4him (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 03:17 PM · On: FGB Outtake the First - Numbers
*sniff* Beautiful chapter. I could just picture Edward's behavior. :) Thank you,Becca08_88 for sharing with us.
Author's Response: My sincere apologies for taking so long to answer. I am so grateful that you read and reviewed!
Reviewer: SeanEmma4Evr (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 02:56 PM · On: FGB Outtake the First - Numbers
You have no idea how much I ADORED this chapter. I love getting into his mind. Daddyward is one of my favorite wards - possibly even my favorite altogether!
This was a very sweet chapter. It was interesting seeing his side of things. He was just worried! It was totes adorable. Way overboard, but totes cute.
I'm UBER excited for the next chapter and I send much love to the awesome donator willing to share this with everyone. It was very nice of her.
Author's Response: My sincere apologies for taking so long to answer. I am so grateful that you read and reviewed! It's taken me 5 months, but that doesn't mean all of the support doesn't mean the world to me!
Reviewer: dancing_in_my_underwear (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 02:15 PM · On: FGB Outtake the First - Numbers
OMG YES!! This was beautiful and perfect. This is the part of the story that I never realised I wanted but now that I have it I can't imagine why! I'm so happy that the winners of the auction were nice enough to let the rest of us read this. What a great addition to the story. This is brillinatly writtenand I love all of it. I don't think I would be able to pick my favourite part!
Thank you pomme_de_terre for writing this and thanks to the auction winners for requesting and sharing this. It's extrodinary!
Author's Response: My sincere apologies for taking so long to answer. I am so grateful that you read and reviewed! It was fun to get back to writing Daddyward!
Reviewer: lucky4me13 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 02:06 PM · On: FGB Outtake the First - Numbers
gosh, i wish you could just spend every day writing so i could read tiny little masterpieces like this all the time. wonderful as always and SUCH a nice surprise :)
Author's Response: My sincere apologies for taking so long to answer. I am so grateful that you read and reviewed! What a lovely thing to say to a writer:)
Reviewer: rpattzdude (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 01:14 PM · On: FGB Outtake the First - Numbers
hahah perfection till the end lol
Author's Response: My sincere apologies for taking so long to answer. I am so grateful that you read and reviewed! Glad you liked the outtake!
Reviewer: 50bestfriends (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 12:37 PM · On: FGB Outtake the First - Numbers
Thanks to Becca08 for sharing her outtake. I think I loved this chapter so much because of the number theme - although I didn't like that B wasn't good at helping her 7 year old daughter with 2nd grade math!
My favorite line - 'she drank extra water just to go to the restroom"
I smiled the whole time and enjoyed the outtake - I am so happy with daddyward!
Author's Response: My sincere apologies for taking so long to answer. I am so grateful that you read and reviewed! And don't worry, the not being able to help with 2nd grade math was a bit of an exaggeration:)
Reviewer: camianbu_88 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 12:20 PM · On: FGB Outtake the First - Numbers
this is sooo cool!!! thank you for sharing this with us
Author's Response: My sincere apologies for taking so long to answer. I am so grateful that you read and reviewed!
Reviewer: 3kdz4me (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 11:15 AM · On: Chapter 44 - Fight
Pottymouth Jasper is fucking epic!
Author's Response: My sincere apologies for taking so long to answer. I am so grateful that you read and reviewed!
PMJ was SO much fun to write!
Reviewer: EmoryB123 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 11:10 AM · On: FGB Outtake the First - Numbers
OH BOY!!! ANOTHER outtake! I love it! You are the QUEEN of writing chapters AFTER the main story is complete!
I loved this! Bella and Edward were too cute - Bella with her serenity and Edward with his overwhelming overprotection! I loved Elizabeth's being SO calm as Bella's labor began. She did NOT inherit that from Edward!
It was interesting how nervous Bella was at the prospect that she was pregnant again. But once she knew, she was cool as a cucumber. Except for her mood swings.....
".....maybe I did not need to buy her a new vehicle originally manufactured for foreign diplomats fully loaded including bullet proof glass and a roll-protection frame as well as a seat belt fitted to accommodate her expanding waist line." >>> Good job, working in a tidbit from Breaking Dawn!! Edward is SO paranoid. But we love him that way!
"When one hears hoof beats in the forest, always assume the horse and not the zebra." .>>>>> I have never heard that before. Did you make it up? What exactly does it mean?
"... like a reclined king on his Tempurpedic throne. " >>>> You come up with the BEST lines!
THANK YOU!! I look forward to the next outtake!
Congrats and best wishes for the birth of your second child!
Author's Response: My sincere apologies for taking so long to answer. I am so grateful that you read and reviewed!
The "zebra" line - someone said that to me when I was young and it has stuck with me. What it generally means is to look for the simple solution before jumping to something complex and unlikely. Like if you have a blemish, assume it's a zit rather than leprosy first;)
My second is now 5 months old! That's how behind I am!
Reviewer: smartin47 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 24 - Leave the Weapons Behind
This is great!
Author's Response: My sincere apologies for taking so long to answer. I am so grateful that you read and reviewed!
Reviewer: Kaelaaah (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 09:43 AM · On: Chapter 39 - Happy Town
damn. i love me some jasper too. i "lol"ed at that rant there at the end.
"ragamuffin in the chrystal palace." HA.
Author's Response: My sincere apologies for taking so long to answer. I am so grateful that you read and reviewed! Jasper was a BLAST to write.
Reviewer: MEL24FAN (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 09:35 AM · On: FGB Outtake the First - Numbers
Ellie that was so beautiful. He definitly over reacted but I can't blame him one bit. You know I love a happy ending and it doesn't get happier than this.
xoxo
Author's Response: My sincere apologies for taking so long to answer. I am so grateful that you read and reviewed! I know this review is 6 months old, but I am determined to catch up:)
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