Reviewer: trm cullen (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2012 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Grandfather
Why do I, get the fee.ing jerks is involved. Hey, what about telling Charlie !
Reviewer: trm cullen (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2012 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Nightmare of a Love Story
Ok, I can ride the angst to get the HEA, don't hurt me.
Reviewer: trm cullen (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2012 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
Can we have longer chapters? Please!
Reviewer: trm cullen (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2012 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Man of Action
Can we have longer chapters? Please!
Reviewer: trm cullen (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2012 05:47 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Like This
This sounds like the voice of experience ;)
Reviewer: trm cullen (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2012 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Beast in a Cage
This is getting really good
Reviewer: trm cullen (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2012 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Enough
Oh yes, let's hear it for big daddy c. Seriously <3 him!
Reviewer: trm cullen (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2012 04:33 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
Lots of questions answered! Thanks!
Reviewer: trm cullen (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2012 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar
Men do stupid ass shit
Reviewer: trm cullen (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2012 04:08 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Closet Living
Ain't. NO way a pregnant woman can get in and out of a bean bag chair!
Reviewer: trm cullen (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2012 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Death by Proclamation
Good writing
Reviewer: trm cullen (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2012 03:07 PM · On: Chapter 2 - The Last Day of My Life
Ok, things will get happier, right?
Reviewer: trm cullen (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2012 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Beginning of the End
Very real. Very wellnwritten
Reviewer: trm cullen (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2012 02:00 PM · On: Prologue - Pretty and the Starlet
Great!
Reviewer: FutureMrsRPattz (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2012 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Internet Holy Grail
loving it
Reviewer: FutureMrsRPattz (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2012 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Worship at Her Altar
angst :0
Reviewer: FutureMrsRPattz (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2012 09:31 PM · On: Chapter 2 - The Last Day of My Life
:(
Reviewer: FutureMrsRPattz (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2012 09:19 PM · On: Prologue - Pretty and the Starlet
interesting
Reviewer: bookish1822 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2012 04:15 PM · On: Prologue - Pretty and the Starlet
Wow basically sums up what I think of this story. I laughed, I cried (a number of times). I loved it! Jasper and his colorful pearls of wisdom had me in stitches. Emmet and Jazz were always my favorites out of the Cullens, so glad they all got ample time to shine here. Fantastic storytelling!
Reviewer: daniilsihastrul (Anonymous) · Date: March 11, 2012 03:33 AM · On: FGB Outtake the Second - Three A.M.
I must confess that I've been meaning to read this story for a long time now, but was somewhat deterred from this purpose by the palpable angst, which was there from the first chapter. It seemed a lot sadder than New Moon, and as I went on reading, I had it confirmed that it was! The angst has been constant throughout the story, so that's why it felt like the epilogues were an integral part of it, without which the story would not have felt nearly as complete as it does with them.
Having read the story after so many other fics, out of which the most recent ones turned these sweet two main characters, Edward and Bella, into such bitter and twisted fuck ups that they had nothing to do with the noble souls the original characters are, it was a most pleasant surprise, almost like coming back to the source, to read your story. You've preserved so much of the integrity and beauty of the original characters that I feel lucky to have found your story. Thank you for having written it with so much respect and love for your characters, and for the cannon characters that served as inspiration, as well!
All the best to you!
EnamoredHeart
Reviewer: rhiannal (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2012 06:26 PM · On: Chapter 24 - Leave the Weapons Behind
The story would be better if the chapters were as long as your authors notes.... while we apprecite you saying thanks for the reviews..... thats ALL we want
Reviewer: JanieLove (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2012 02:52 AM · On: Chapter 50 - My Forever
As I was reading this chapter, I was also listening to "A Thousand Years" by Christina Perri, which I found quite fitting (=
A wonderful story that had me hooked from the beginning <3
I look forward to finishing and moving on to your other work!
Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2012 11:32 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation
Hormones in the beginning are hell after giving birth and the difficult time she had added to it. I know... fiction
Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2012 10:40 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Act of Contrition
ahh crap.. we are all crying now.
Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2012 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Grandfather
well hell I hope the FBI doesn't get there first. She will run if she catches on.
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