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Reviewer: Emerald_Rosalie (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 11:06 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together

Tears, baby, TEARS. 

God, I love this story!

<3



Author's Response: *hugs you* thank you for all you do, Princess Vix!

Reviewer: marrisa (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 11:01 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together

I think that was perfect. Seeing Elizabeth was definetely the next big leg of the story. Edward's description of holding his daughter was magical. Good job!



Author's Response: I am so glad you feel I did it justice. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Panda1499 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 11:00 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together

Not as bad as I was expecting.  I actually liked that you did it this way.  Neither of them is ready for the "TALK" yet.  More, SOON!!

Manda



Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: DeeZ750 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together

Oh that was so emotional. I can't wait for their talk.



Author's Response: Hang in there! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: sparkle_me (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 10:45 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together

That was more than enough! Actions speak louder than words.

They are on the mend, it's in between the lines.

What a wonderful chapter, all of the emotion explains the plot in this chapter, no words were needed.

Awesome writing.



Author's Response: I am so glad you feel I did it justice. Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: spidermonkey_09 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together

OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG

IM CRYING FULL ON TEARS STREAMING DOWN MY FACE

NO WAYY 

EVERY SINGLE CHAPTER YOU HAVE MANAGED THIS 

:(:( XDXDXDXD

BUT I LOVED IT 

WOW LOVED HOW YOU DID THIS I HAD NO IDEA HOW THIS WAS GOING TO HAPPEN AND TO BE HONEST I NEVER THOUGHT OF THIS WOWOWOWOW SOO GOODD THIS STORY IS 

AMAZING

STUNNIN

OUT THIS WORLD

ONE IN A MILLION

................................

WOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOW!!!!!!!!!!

p.s : soooo gladd we dedcided to do this story as our film...x

xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx



Author's Response: I am so glad you feel I did it justice. I cannot wait to see how your film turns out! Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: amkh (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 10:35 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together

finally :P

i love elizabeth already ♥



Author's Response: LOL! She's a sweetling! Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: ANGELiCAWROTE (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together

daddyward... yes, the shirt did help. i didn't suspect for her to forgive him so fast.. that is the only thing that really bothered me about the stephanie meyer's work.. she forgave to easily..

i like how this is coming along, i can't wait for the next chapter



Author's Response: Well, it will take a lot longer here. Thank you so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: tricky (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together

My other review didn't take, i don't think....so, i am starting over. :)

Holy Cow...I just asked for some shirtless Daddyward the other day, and ta-da, here it is.  It most definetly did not disappoint either, what a sweet gesture.  I also love the way that Edward was the one to give Bella the baby, not just some nurse.  It is a nice moment, and i can see that it begins to bring things full circle...

You did a great job with this chapter.  It was such a natural moment, i can't believe i am reading it, instead of looking at it through my own eyes.  It semed so real, to me, and the way you are pacing things is spectacular.  Lots of authors get caught up in rushing the story, but you really develop each little bit.  I, as a reader, thank you for not doing that.  There have been other stories that i have read, that build and build, then in a chapter everything falls into place and the world is a Disney movie again. That always makes me feel cheated in some way...i don't know.  I appreciate that we are working things out as we go in this story, and I think that will make the HEA more imaginable.  I feel like when these two come back together, they will have  foundation for the future - even if i am not there reading it, it will still exist.  Does that make any sense?  :) I could be crazy....

As always, so much was said in the chapter.  i loved it.

tara

 



Author's Response: Wow. I am so very flattered by your kind words. I know that I am taking a road less traveled with this, but I am so glad you appreciate where I am going. Thanks so much for sticking with me and for all of your support.

Reviewer: lmb (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together

I loved the chapter!  I think it was fitting that she would focus on her baby first, and then Edward.  You rock!  I can't wait tp hear their conversation...next chapter?  Then of course they do live across the country from one another.



Author's Response:

I am so glad you feel I did this chapter justice! 

Not the next chapter.  There are some conversations that need to happen.  But it's coming...

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together

Yes! She knows he loves her and she loves him. Now she has to drum up the courage to let him back in,because she is nothing without him.The body lanuage and facial expressions said it all.



Author's Response: There is so much that can be said without words.... Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: caperves1979 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 10:02 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together

I loved it!  So perfect.



Author's Response: I am so glad you feel I did this chapter justice! Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Sadielady115 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together

Oh my God! sad and sweet ... so sweet! I love Daddyward!

I'm thinking that next B/E chapter is going to be so rough!



Author's Response: I am so glad you feel I did this chapter justice! And Daddyward... *sigh*. Yup, the next B/E chappie won't be easy. Thanks so much for reviewing and for everything you do for me:)

Reviewer: mom2kandg (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together

That is just right the way you wrote this chappie, Ellie....I love that they didn't have any words just looks....Alot can be said with just the eyes and that is what needed to be said first....As for Love and Little Love, she needed her time with her first before she did any talking to Edward that was shirtless , ummm, tall and lanky with the beautiful green eyes...Oh back to my review...Got lost there for a second, anywho, she needs some baby and mommie time and she will get to Edward....And I also love that Esme stayed and comforted Bella after Edward walked out of the room....God I so love that woman all full of Love and Comfort....AMAZING CHAPPIE!!!

Reviewer: mom2kandg (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together

That is just right the way you wrote this chappie, Ellie....I love that they didn't have any words just looks....Alot can be said with just the eyes and that is what needed to be said first....As for Love and Little Love, she needed her time with her first before she did any talking to Edward that was shirtless , ummm, tall and lanky with the beautiful green eyes...Oh back to my review...Got lost there for a second, anywho, she needs some baby and mommie time and she will get to Edward....And I also love that Esme stayed and comforted Bella after Edward walked out of the room....God I so love that woman all full of Love and Comfort....AMAZING CHAPPIE!!!

Reviewer: mom2kandg (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together

That is just right the way you wrote this chappie, Ellie....I love that they didn't have any words just looks....Alot can be said with just the eyes and that is what needed to be said first....As for Love and Little Love, she needed her time with her first before she did any talking to Edward that was shirtless , ummm, tall and lanky with the beautiful green eyes...Oh back to my review...Got lost there for a second, anywho, she needs some baby and mommie time and she will get to Edward....And I also love that Esme stayed and comforted Bella after Edward walked out of the room....God I so love that woman all full of Love and Comfort....AMAZING CHAPPIE!!!

Reviewer: mom2kandg (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together

That is just right the way you wrote this chappie, Ellie....I love that they didn't have any words just looks....Alot can be said with just the eyes and that is what needed to be said first....As for Love and Little Love, she needed her time with her first before she did any talking to Edward that was shirtless , ummm, tall and lanky with the beautiful green eyes...Oh back to my review...Got lost there for a second, anywho, she needs some baby and mommie time and she will get to Edward....And I also love that Esme stayed and comforted Bella after Edward walked out of the room....God I so love that woman all full of Love and Comfort....AMAZING CHAPPIE!!!

Reviewer: mom2kandg (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together

That is just right the way you wrote this chappie, Ellie....I love that they didn't have any words just looks....Alot can be said with just the eyes and that is what needed to be said first....As for Love and Little Love, she needed her time with her first before she did any talking to Edward that was shirtless , ummm, tall and lanky with the beautiful green eyes...Oh back to my review...Got lost there for a second, anywho, she needs some baby and mommie time and she will get to Edward....And I also love that Esme stayed and comforted Bella after Edward walked out of the room....God I so love that woman all full of Love and Comfort....AMAZING CHAPPIE!!!



Author's Response: I am so glad you feel I did this chapter justice! Shirtless Daddyward does take the sting out of things, hunh? I just thought they needed this wordless communication first. There will be time to talk later. Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together

Three-Kleenex chapter, for sure!



Author's Response: Aw! I know it was a tough one! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing....

Reviewer: Leanne (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together

Hey I just wanna be held to, do you think we could convince him to unbutton his shirt and hold me to his chest? No? Ok then.

This was a powerful chapter, it made me all teary and oh so itching to get the next chapter read because I need them to get their happy ever after!

Good work!



Author's Response: I know I wouldn't mind being comforted by Shirtless Daddyward! I am so glad you felt I did it justice. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: kismit1496 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 09:28 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together

Awe!!! Words don't need to be said that scene beat out thousands of conversations!

Author's Response: I am so glad you feel I did this chapter justice! So much can be said without words.... Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Mom of 2 in WI (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 09:12 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together

It's funny, but just this morning, i was showing my daughter a picture of her as a newborn, sound asleep on her father's chest.  It is my favorite picture.  It's personal and not one I'd ever frame, but I love it so much.  No need to hide from this reader.  I think that was the perfect first step. I loved how much was "said" without the dialogue.  Great job and looking forward to more!



Author's Response: I am so glad you feel I did this chapter justice! I honestly think they needed to "say" these things first. I am glad you understand why I went down that road. Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: RoseIsMyHero (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 09:09 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together

Sitting at work crying now:)



Author's Response: Darn! I forgot to put the ‘Do not read at work’ warning on it! Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: jimmy7660 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 09:06 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together

That was truly one of the most beautiful almost spirtual chapters that I have read.  You could almost feel the emotions when Edward looked at Bella crying for the first time.  The way Esme was guiding her son into becoming a father and showing him how to show love to his child, beautiful.  And for Bella to accept Esme as a parent for her in this time of her life when she needs that maternal nurturing, it was touching.  There are so many other  things that need to be said but I will just say: Thank you!!!!

 



Author's Response: I am so glad you feel I did this chapter justice! Your words really mean the world to me... Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: azafrinah (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together

I´m crying lika a baby.... This chapter was..... I´m speechless.

Thank you!



Author's Response: AW! It's a tough one! I'm glad yu stuck with me! Thanks for reviewing!

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